Delta One
GenreSci-Fi / War
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Thursday, 21 April 2011
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Read by:219 different readers
 

James opened his eyes slowly; he had to make sure they didnít see he was still alive. He had to make sure he could get the jump on the guards. As soon as the guard in red turned around, James silently got up, trying to remember how he got here. He snuck up to the guard thrust his knife into his neck, silencing him. He dragged the guard into the shadows and took his weapon. It was an unfamiliar weapon with its blue glow. He hid it under the body because he needed to be as quiet and as stealthy as possible. He moved down the hall, where he froze. He couldnít believe what he saw. All of his squadmates were dead. He gritted his teeth and he looked down the hallway to his left.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Chapter 1
Ch. 2 Chapter 2
Ch. 3 Chapter 3
Ch. 4 Chapter 4
Ch. 5 Chapter 5
Ch. 6 Chapter 6

Comments

 
surfingpanda7 Sunday, 13 January 2013
This was fast paced and awesome. I loved the fighting sequence. It was clear and I knew what was going on. Great work so far!
Keep Writing!
 
Capitalletters Sunday, 24 April 2011
Love it. Plus, you have excellent grammar! Mind reading mine? :)

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