Just Another Pretty Face
GenreYoung Adult
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Sunday, 27 February 2011
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(3 ratings)
Read by:332 different readers
 

Nobody would believe what goes on behind the closed doors of their pretty little suburban house.

Even friends are non existent in Kara’s life; the one exception being a diary, who she has named Caleb. Kara tells Caleb things she wouldn’t dare tell anyone else. Even she doesn’t believe what goes on sometimes…like it’s all just a bad dream she’ll wake up from in the morning.

Only, Kara’s life is as far from a bad dream as anyone could get.

She sees no way out; the light at the end of the tunnel, the glimmer of hope…have all been destroyed by her family, causing her to be as fragile as glass.

Just one touch, and she’ll break.

But will the path in her life fork out when Jesse comes along? Will he restore that glimmer of hope, and light at the end of the tunnel…or just…break her?

 

List of chapters

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Ch. 0 0
Ch. 1 1
Ch. 2 2
Ch. 3 3
Ch. 4 4
Ch. 5 UPDATE

Comments

Jasmin Thien Wednesday, 27 July 2011
First off, I like the storyline. It is something unique, so it intrigues me. You've come up with a great plot for a novel.

However, there are a few loopholes which I'm about to point out.

First, grammar is slacking off. There is a variation of tenses which is quite misleading.

Second, punctuation is not really accurate.

Third, spelling is also slacking off.

Sorry if this sounds a little harsh, but a writer has to receive honest feedback if he or she wants to improve.

Pay attention on grammar, as well as more details to emphasize the scenes you want to write about.

I'll be looking for more from you.

And also, you can get back on me by reading and commenting on my books:

Love is Never Wrong

And

Take Me or Leave Me

Take your revenge! =D
 
Kalifornia Gurl Monday, 9 May 2011
Omg. I really really like this book and all your other books :DD you should keep writing! Please please!
 
Kalifornia Gurl Monday, 9 May 2011
Omg. I really really like this book and all your other books :DD you should keep writing! Please please!
homewrecker:) Sunday, 8 May 2011
you should really keep writing i think ive read every book you've written so far and i just love your writing
 
kandykane Saturday, 2 April 2011
great book keep writing

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