Forever Young
GenreFan fiction / Romance
Age Rating:G
Submitted:Friday, 18 February 2011
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(11 ratings)
Read by:463 different readers
 

Love, heartaches, breakups, makeups, it's all in this One Direction fanfic! 5 boys, 1 Band, 1 Dream, 1 Direction <3

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 (Zayn) VASAPPENIN! ;)
Ch. 2 (Liam) SuperPayne! ;)
Ch. 3 (Harry) SHOCKAAA ;)

Comments

spider1958 Monday, 21 May 2012
Its pretty good so far, and I thought Harry had green eyes... but still, really good!

If you want you could read my story 'All Wrong' :)
Angelena Fox-Francisco Saturday, 26 February 2011
Nice, but when are you going to start the explanation of the "sad news"?!
Angelena Fox-Francisco Saturday, 26 February 2011
What is the sad news?!?! the suspense is getting to me!!
Angelena Fox-Francisco Saturday, 26 February 2011
good way to start it. :) I like the names. Very unique.
 
A. Writer Friday, 25 February 2011
I like your writing and the dialogues are kind of catchy. But I could do with a little more description of who your characters are and what is going on.

I enjoyed chapter 3 more than the first two ones. It read more smoothly and was for me a little better to understand .... context-wise.

Keep going!

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