A Tragedy
GenreDrama / War
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Thursday, 10 February 2011
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The civil war has begun. Everyone had left Katherine and her mother to either go north or fight against the "yankees". They decided to just go on with their lives like nothing happened. Now, without warning they are taken from their home. Will they ever be freed? Or will they have to find their own way out?

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 ~A Tragedy Chapter One~
Ch. 2 ~A Tragedy Chapter Two~
Ch. 3 ~A Tragedy Chapter Three~
Ch. 4 ~A Tragedy Chapter Four~

Comments

*P.S.ILoveYou* Sunday, 3 July 2011
Thank you for your comment. I was debating whether or not to just delete this book from my list, but you decided for me. I have put up a new chapter, but I don't know if it is complete or not yet.

Thanks again!

~Kira :-)
 
Anne Onimous Saturday, 12 March 2011
You have the makings of a really good story here. The conflict is well-set-up, and I especially think that the predicament in which Annabeth finds herself is fascinating. My one suggestion is that you do a little research on the Civil War. You seem to be a little off in some places. For instance, age 21 wouldn't be all that young for a soldier; a lot of soldiers in the Civil War were younger than 18 (they lied about their ages) and the lower life expectancy back then would mean that a "boy" of 21 would ordinarily be set up married, working, and possibly with a couple of kids. Just something to consider.

But anyway, I quite like the way this is turning out so far and hope you will continue to write it. Thank you for your kind comments on my short stories.

Anne Onimous

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