Renu-Island
GenreSci-Fi / Young Adult
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Sunday, 5 December 2010
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(7 ratings)
Read by:232 different readers
 

January 2nd, 2094

Dear Quinn McAdams,
Congratulations. You have been selected to be a part of the Renu-Globe operation that sends 90 teenagers onto a high-tech and well developed island in order to repopulate after the anticipated upcoming global disasters. These disasters, which are expected to start in the coming six years and wipe out Earth's entire population, are estimated to affect every part of the world except this small part of the southern Pacific where this island is located. Renu-Island, the islands name, is also fully equipped with video cameras in every place on the island. The cameras broadcast your endeavors to the mainland so that they can see how you are managing your new life. This new life has you living as adults, as the island is only inhabited by you and your peers. Renu-Island is run completely by teenagers in every aspect.
Please remember that this is a big decision to make. You will be leaving your family forever in order to save your own life, and there is no contact to the mainland. There is also no going back once you reach the island.
If you decide that this is simply not for you, please send your registration forms back so your spot can be offered to another teen.
If you choose to embark on this life-saving adventure, a boarding pass to the Renu-Globe Yacht-Ship is attatched along with a map of Renu-Island.

Regards,
Renu-Corporation

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Prologue
Ch. 1 Acceptance
Ch. 2 Welcome
Ch. 3 Orientation
Ch. 4 Housemates
Ch. 5 Socialize
Ch. 6 Busted
Ch. 7 Rejection
Ch. 8 Anxiety

Comments

 
SingItForTheWorld Saturday, 18 December 2010
I think this has potential! When I read the preview, I first thought of the Hunger Games, but this is different. I think you rushed Casey and Caleb. You should intorduce more of the plot, the problem and learn more about the characters before this love scene unfolds. I think you need more showing and not telling. Descibe the scenery, their facial expressions, what your characters look like. I love the idea and I think you could go a long way with this. Keep going!
 
Spindlegal Wednesday, 15 December 2010
ok yah it is a bit fast here with the alex coming onto her and caleb finding her and starting something. but otherwise good
 
Spindlegal Wednesday, 15 December 2010
woaa thats like the perfect world haha
 
Spindlegal Wednesday, 15 December 2010
niiice :) thats so sad that they cant even send letters to their family
 
Spindlegal Wednesday, 15 December 2010
ok cool. my first thought when i saw the description was that this is that your story sounded like The Hunger Games. But the plot sounds different so nvm aha

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