Boats And Birds
GenreYoung Adult / Romance
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Friday, 12 November 2010
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Read by:299 different readers
 

Archer was my first love, i'm not letting him go!
"Archer!" I scream, running after him. He turns a bit, eyes widening when he sees me.
My eyes fill t the brim with tears, he's here, i'm here. We're here.
Lynn jumps in front of me as we reach out to eachother, smacking me across the face.
"He gave up on you Kay. Bug off. You're over, dead to him." She spits.
"No." I sniff. "not to me. If you really love me, like you said you did. If that kiss meant anything to you, you'll love me back, Archer."
He stares at me longingly, and starts towards me.
As promised, Lynn pulls a gun from her coat pocket...
and fires.
Right as our eyes meet, and he grabs my hand to help me.
This isn't it. I can save him. I just have to learn how to stop the bullet.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 The Covenant
Ch. 2 Two Years Later- The Edge of Green
Ch. 3 Interview With a Vampire-Hostel Crush
Ch. 4 Run to You
Ch. 5 By your side
Ch. 6 In My Place (Named for Coldplay song)
Ch. 7 Awaken

Comments

 
awesomeness Friday, 31 December 2010
write more!!!!!!! thats all i gota say...
UndeadBeauty Sunday, 14 November 2010
okay, thanks Voir. Looking back at it, your DEFFIANTELY right. thanks for the tip. i'll get working on it right now. :)
 
Voir travers le verre. Sunday, 14 November 2010
You give to much information up in the beginning. To me, I already know what's going to happen just from two chapters. It's okay, needs a spelling check and some sentences rearranged but it's good. Try not to let the reader know everything in the beginning it'll ruin the suspence.
 
Jessica E Saturday, 13 November 2010
nice :D
More XD

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