Catching Juliett
GenreRomance / Romance
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Friday, 8 October 2010
Star rating:
 
(2 ratings)
Read by:147 different readers
 

Juliett is the new girl in school. She has Bright blue irises, long jet black hair, bright pink lips & pale skin. at her last school she was a bit of a player, but will this all change as soon as she meets the one boy she swore she would never go for? keep up with Juliett as she keeps all the kids at her school wondering "who exactly is Juliett?"

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Preface
Ch. 1 The Fight.
Ch. 2 Just Juliett
Ch. 3 The first day.

Comments

Jasmin Thien Monday, 11 July 2011
I like how you portray Juliett to be such a rebel and player, however I really cannot give your book much of a rating due to grammatical, spelling, and punctual errors.

I'll come back to read this book again as its plot is interesting, but please try to pay more attention to language use, especially capitalizing certain words like 'I', spelling correctly, putting in right punctuations and all that.

I'd love it if you could read my book, as well, it's Love is Never Wrong.

Sorry if I came out too harsh but honest feedback is what helps a writer to grow and improve. Hope you didn't get offended by what I've said.
 
*Roza* Tuesday, 12 October 2010
I like it, it's different. Try to work on punctuation and capitalizing the first letter of the sentence. But good, all in all. Could you check out 'Falling Petals' for me? Thanks if you do!
Whisper in the Night Friday, 8 October 2010
well...? the preface is short and obviously a rough draft. it doest give me much to work with for a rating and a comment.
 
Jezus Faith Friday, 8 October 2010
Please read & review 'The New Slayer'

Wow, Juliet's a rebel! I love that. Its new, original. Its exactly what I want to read and more! So update! Update like the wind! GO! Type! Begin!

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