Prince Of Darkness
GenreWar / Suspense
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Tuesday, 28 September 2010
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(2 ratings)
Read by:287 different readers
 

The Prince Of Darkness is roaming the streets and is causing Hell around the world. Will he be stopped? Most likely not. His enhanced abilities will destroy anything in his path.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Welcome To Hell!!!
Ch. 2 The Power Of Destruction
Ch. 3 The Blood Bath Battle
Ch. 4 Soaring Through Death
Ch. 5 A New Level Of Power
Ch. 6 The Hunt For Evil Souls
Ch. 7 The Grim Reaper's Soul Hunt
Ch. 8 The Rubber-Room Psycho
Ch. 9 Army Of Darkness
Ch. 10 Heaven vs. Hell

Comments

 
Whole Tuesday, 9 August 2011
I'm sorry I was so mean about this.
 
Whole Monday, 21 February 2011
No. Just no. You wait 1,000 years, biding your time, if you need an oppurtune moment to attack. The Prince overpowered God in five seconds. If he never felt bad, WHY DID HE WAIT THOUSANDS OF YEARS TO DO FIVE MINUTED WORK???!!!!?!?!?!?!!?!?!????

You need to work on plot, organization, charecterization, and grammar. I'm done.
 
Whole Monday, 21 February 2011
No. Just no. You wait 1,000 years, biding your time, if you need an oppurtune moment to attack. The Prince overpowered God in five seconds. If he never felt bad, WHY DID HE WAIT THOUSANDS OF YEARS TO DO FIVE MINUTED WORK???!!!!?!?!?!?!!?!?!????

You need to work on plot, organization, charecterization, and grammar. I'm done.
 
Whole Monday, 21 February 2011
Organs don't gush from your back. Vertebral comlumn much? Less vivid but false images, more diverse realism.
 
Whole Monday, 21 February 2011
Also, work on realism. People don't carry flamethrowers around in New York, O.K.?

I know that action and suspense in a book are good things. But without anything else, it gets REALLY boring. You need something else but pointless action in your book. Add description, realistic thought and dialogue, AAAAANNNNNYYYYTTTTHHHHIIINNNGGGG!!!!!!

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