Genevieve Followz: Dusk Till Dawn
GenreFiction / Thriller
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Tuesday, 20 July 2010
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The European world has been taken down by a disease which nobody can explain. Everyone is simply dying and there is no cure, the death is painful and people can choose if they want to die naturally, painfully, or get an injection which would kill them prematurely.

Genevieve was running away after her mother had died. She'd contracted the disease herself and collapsed, but just before she could die she was saved by a strange French boy called George.

Now she has become a part of the Followz, an elite team gathered together to help find the chemicals for the cure... and to kill off the abominations which have arisen from the corpses of those deceased...

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Meet The Followz
Ch. 0 Prologue
Ch. 1 Chapter I
Ch. 2 Chapter II

Comments

Livianna Wintoxia Tuesday, 20 July 2010
Haha, no, chapter two is the last chapter where she goes unconciouss... I never really noticed that before. I've re-edited this story so many times! I'm working on chapter three now.
The bio page was originally made to serve as a sort of document form keeping the characters info on it, this soty is the only story I've ever used it in, mainly because she eneds up as a member of the Followz. (It's not a regular thing for me to do)
 
WordScryer Tuesday, 20 July 2010
Is every chapter going to end with her going unconscious?
 
WordScryer Tuesday, 20 July 2010
Review so far: I like what you've written so far. Your main character comes across as real which I like. The bio page that you put at the begining of the book wasn't necessary though. I think a good writer should be able to describe a person in the story. You did manage a strong begining and I think that will serve to pull readers into your tale. That said please do message me when you get the next chapters up. In the mean time I'll be waiting.

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