Enslaved (Completed)
GenreRomance / Fiction
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Tuesday, 22 June 2010
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(94 ratings)
Read by:1792 different readers
 

Tori had grown up with Vince, they had gone through one foster home after another together, never separated...until at the age of ten Vince was claimed by strange pale-faced people and Tori was claimed by normal-seeming strangers at the age of nine.

They never saw each other again for ten years until Vince shows up, not remembering her, and takes her to his Vampire Hotel by force...she soon finds herself forced to be Vince's personal slave. And his...needs are much different from what they were ten years prier.

Tori soon learns that Vince's soft, loving side had been washed away and replaced with the need to torture and the urge to suck her dry...

It's not usual for the master to fall in love with the servant...now is it?

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Excerpt:

The bell chimed from the second floor, calling Tori to Him. She sighed, looking up at the ceiling as if she could somehow see through the black-painted wood and into his chambers to see what he wanted. Tori had already fed him today, she didn't think he needed anything else from her...he had promised her he wouldn't inflict torture upon her again this week, he had gone back on his word, to protect her or drink from her she didn't know.

As Tori moved up the spiral staircase she hoped he was in a merciful mood and didn't feel like taking too much, she was already weak from the previous feeding.

Tori timidly knocked on the door, feeling that surge of fear she got every time she heard his eerily haunting voice. Tori remembered the times when she hadn't felt frightened by his voice, when she had actually WISHED to hear more of it...

The door opened and when Tori stepped inside she was immediately attacked by Master Vince's lips upon hers.

"I love you, Viktoria. I need to save you..." He whispered right before he sunk his teeth into her throat.

"No, no, please, Vince. Don't!" She whispered in an agonized voice. When Master Vince drank from her it was like ecstasy...mixed with an unforgettable beating of the soul, the body, and the mind.

Tori enjoyed it at times, but when Vince got into the feeding with her he took it to the next level. He never went as far with the other servants as he did to her...it was as if he enjoyed her rapturous distress. And if Tori was honest with herself, she would admit that she enjoyed the simple feeling of his fingers running down her shivering spine....

She was changing, she could feel the cool rush of vampire blood through her veins....

A/N: I'm going to start editing Part One, but I'll still be posting chapters for Part Two!

A/N 2: I want to thank "Damned for Eternity" for helping with the editing process!!!! Thanks!!!

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Prologue---Edited (thanks Damned For Eternity)
Ch. 1 ONE--- (edited)
Ch. 2 TWO---(edited)
Ch. 3 THREE---(edited)
Ch. 4 FOUR---(edted)
Ch. 5 FIVE---(edited)
Ch. 6 SIX---(edited)
Ch. 7 SEVEN
Ch. 8 EIGHT
Ch. 9 NINE
Ch. 10 TEN
Ch. 11 ELEVEN
Ch. 12 TWELVE
Ch. 13 THIRTEEN
Ch. 14 FOURTEEN
Ch. 15 FIFTEEN (edited)
Ch. 16 SIXTEEN
Ch. 17 SEVENTEEN
Ch. 18 EIGHTEEN
Ch. 19 NINETEEN
Ch. 20 TWENTY
Ch. 21 TWENTY-ONE
Ch. 22 TWENTY-TWO
Ch. 23 TWENTY-THREE
Ch. 24 TWENTY-FOUR
Ch. 25 TWENTY-FIVE
Ch. 26 TWENTY-SIX
Ch. 27 TWENTY-SEVEN
Ch. 28 TWENTY-EIGHT
Ch. 29 PART TWO: LIBERATED
Ch. 30 ONE
Ch. 31 TWO
Ch. 32 THREE
Ch. 33 FOUR
Ch. 34 FIVE
Ch. 35 SIX
Ch. 36 SEVEN
Ch. 37 EIGHT
Ch. 38 A/N
Ch. 39 NINE
Ch. 40 TEN

Comments

 
LittleWolf Wednesday, 26 June 2013
omg This is soo amazing!! keep writing plzz we are all waiting for more books of ur talents ^^ keep up the good work
 
M. Bigio Sunday, 3 February 2013
Oh my fucking GOD!! Your writing is AMAZING. It has some little mistakes, but it sure is way too good. How can you be so young? I mean, you write better than a lot of 17's and 20's I'7e seen around here. You can call it a gift, a talent or whatever. But you sure has it!
By the way, I was really hoping she would pick Vince. I loved his all the way, despite his bad side. I kept thinking that Viktoria was a BITCH to him, because her "good" part seemed to prefer Splice. But I felt good when she came back to her reason. I loved the fact that was her love for Vince, the thought of his face, that brought her back to life... just to die again and for all. Why you killed her, anyway? I'd rather see her happy with Vince, having sex with him with her FULL conscience, loving and treating him the he deserves. But, this book was an incredible AMAZING job of yours.
You are gifted. Never let anyone convince you otherwise. This book should definitely be published, like, NOW! I must say that I really don't like vampire's stories, but this one kept me hooked since my first glance at it. Again, your writing is wonderful. Can't imagine how perfect it could, more likely WILL, improve and get nearly perfect. Way to go!
Best wishes.
 
Koti Friday, 12 October 2012
Very VAmpirific! keep it up!
SamyJo Friday, 7 September 2012
Ooooohh~ this just got good :D
SamyJo Friday, 7 September 2012
You'd think he would have heard the shufflung around with his oh-so-amazing vampire senses..
And I don't blame her for not caring that Maria is dead. If someone tried to play me like se did Tori and then try to kill me? Yeah, I'd probably act the same way.

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