Saint Ray and the Angels:The Forgotten One
GenreThriller / Suspense
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Wednesday, 14 April 2010
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Genesis 6:2-4

"Some of the heavenly beings saw these young women were beautiful, so they took the ones they liked. Then the Lord said "I will not allow people to live forever: they are mortal. From on they will live no longer than 120 years. In those days, and even later, there were giants on the earth who were descendants of human women and the heavenly beings."

Yet it never says if the women were returned to Earth. Here is where our story starts. In a way.

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In that time, angels had no names. in fact, they weren't even called angels, but heavenly beings. There was one that would be come to know as Lucian. He was a very minor heavenly being and yet, he was one of the chosen to pick mortal women to bring to heaven. He ended up bringing a beautiful mortal named Maria. He managed to cleanse her of evil. They were married and had intercourse. When Maria was pregnant, God told the angels to put the women back on Earth and remove all relations from her.

There was no choice but to hide Maria. She gave birth to a baby girl named Saint. Since time doesn't exist in Heaven, Saint was still a baby when God found her. He banished Lucian for 2000 years and hid Maria in secret, where she lived, non-aging and hidden from humanity.

Lucian used his angel magic preserve Saint while he searched for Maria. One year, he forgot to place the spell and came back to a year-old Saint. He know had to take care of her while searching.

Saint grew into a 14-year-old girl. Ever since she turned 14, she can see the dead, suddenly suspend her worst enemy fifty feet in the air, heal anything, whether a stray dog who was run over or a student in a motorcycle accident, and fly. Also, she's been having either sweet dreams about heaven and saints or nightmares about her mother. Recently, her father disappeared too. Will she ever find out about her background? And about the creepy shadows that stalk her from the walls?

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 A Demon Interrupts My Math Class

Comments

 
Jessica E Thursday, 9 December 2010
It all runs through a little quickly. You might want to fix your pacing. A few punctuation mistakes but, apart from that, pretty good :D
Would you mind reading the stone cold trilogy : book 1 : surrender

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