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♥Hate me with Love ♥

krazykaylan Tuesday, 7 January 2014
This is a very good opening chapter. Do you think you could read my story and tell me what you think?? Please please.
 
Gabrielle Young Wednesday, 10 July 2013
I really liked this as an opening chapter. I think that your dialogue is exceptionally strong, which is saying something since I'm usually extremely picky! Moral of the story is good job!
 
A.B. Ramos Saturday, 4 August 2012
You have some serious potential! Keep up the good work and I hope to see you on a bookshelf more of like when I pass by Barnes and Noble. Please read my book:Vengeance
 
AlexH Friday, 30 December 2011
I read this like a year aho and i was looking for it and couldn't remember the name! As soon as i read the first couple of sentences i screamed out "i FOUND IT!" my mom looked at me like i was crazy. I love this book
 
AlexH Friday, 30 December 2011
I read this like a year aho and i was looking for it and couldn't remember the name! As soon as i read the first couple of sentences i screamed out "i FOUND IT!" my mom looked at me like i was crazy. I love this book
 
Sarah Humble Saturday, 24 December 2011
Whoa!! I couldn't put it down!! Very very good. Read mine?
 
Andy Schwarzenbach Wednesday, 30 November 2011
I really love this so far! Its really funny, and well written! :) I cannot wait to read more! Can you possibly check out my fanfiction? It would mean a lot to me!
 
Georgia bett Friday, 30 September 2011
You're off to a good start! Read one of mine? Preferably The Lighthouse! Thanks
Sunaynap Thursday, 14 July 2011
Parts of this story are very funny.
 
browniecube Tuesday, 8 March 2011
just to let you know in your first cahpter chow is spelled ciao but other than that your story is great!
 
RenaAsh Saturday, 12 February 2011
Meant to say started
 
RenaAsh Saturday, 12 February 2011
Just stared your book, but it sounds good already!
 
Lochlan Waiver Sunday, 23 January 2011
This is truly great :D Haha Boys Like Girls... XD Love it, publish it!
Could you read my book, Perfection? I'd appreciate it :)
 
Broken Heart Monday, 3 January 2011
OMG! I LOVE YOUR STORY IT'S THE BEST STORY IN THE WHOLE UNIVERSE :D i think u should become an author if u want :) it's a really AMAZING book and I LOVE IT :)
 
Anna Claire Friday, 17 December 2010
I'm sorry, but I don't like the narration. It's like Lexi is asking and talking to us. I find that a little creepy. She thinks I'm thinking one thing, when I'm really not.
LittleMonsterForever :) Tuesday, 14 December 2010
This book is great i finished it in a day lol i love the connection between Free and Lexi even though they might bother each other they still love each other
K.M. Paxton Monday, 6 December 2010
it's good. try varying the sentence length a little or putting some together so they arent so choppy:) love it though!! read mine? Renu-Island.
 
Shazza Tuesday, 30 November 2010
Love it!
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Haha this is cute :D Wow, her dad is so paranoid o_o;;
 
Whisper in the Night Friday, 13 August 2010
i love how Free and Lexi fight :) but i feel annoyed at how she doesn't clarify about her feelings toward Jay. "that's always what we say after we cuss." its very vague, but Lexi's spirit compells me to read on ;)
 
hurricane maddy 19 Monday, 9 August 2010
rock on!
 
NikkiSaysRawr ;D Wednesday, 4 August 2010
lol me and my brother always act like that
 
Shannon Mae!<3 Sunday, 1 August 2010
This is good (:

Read my book?
From,
Shannon.
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
cute haha i like it already.
 
angeltiger626 Tuesday, 13 July 2010
second time im reading it and i'm still loving it :)
Spindlegal Monday, 5 July 2010
Yay like 730 views! haha
 
Aidachi Wednesday, 30 June 2010
So good! I think I'm addicted!
 
Kx Thursday, 24 June 2010
You've got me hooked.
Keep writing! (:
 
AlaskaEverfall Wednesday, 16 June 2010
hahahaha!! =D
good start! *wink*
I like Lexi, she seems so hyped up 4 a 17 year old... (usually they are SOOO boring... ) =P
I'll keep reading!
Rhose Whyte
 
kittenlove123 Monday, 14 June 2010
T his is really good so far :D
 
wiggygurl Monday, 7 June 2010
Good beginning. Maybe the character's could act a little more there age, but maybe your heading them into a less mature direction. Watch for grammar errors.
check out an unexpected romance
 
Brittanythewriter Sunday, 6 June 2010
I really like this
 
angelicmasona Saturday, 29 May 2010
Good start. This is just a helpful tip. Lexi should act older. When she talked to her brother and friend, she seemed too energetic for someone 17.
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
did it ever occur to you that maybe she WANTS them to seem immature? my brother is 17, and we act like that ALL the time. :) i love ur writing!
 
trolololol gone Friday, 30 April 2010
I understand that, but I still stand by my view that it was a little immature.

I also stand by the fact that I feel like the writing can improve greatly from what it is.
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
I disagree with kelsey, I love your writing and me and my brother totally act like that, and he's 18! kels, just because you don't act like that, doesn't mean no-one does.
 
trolololol gone Thursday, 29 April 2010
Your writing is very robotic. It's a lot of, "I did this and we did that and he said this and she said that and then we did this" and so on and so forth. At this point in the story (even though it's only chapter one), I should care about why we're following this particular family and Lexi.

But I don't. It's very bland, and for a pair of seventeen-year-olds, they're both very immature. I understand the dynamics of a brother-sister relationship (and my brother is actually younger), and we don't fight like that - especially in the car.

And why would Jay dare her to do something while she isn't there? Seems kind of random if you ask me.
 
trolololol gone Thursday, 29 April 2010
Your writing is very robotic. It's a lot of, "I did this and we did that and he said this and she said that and then we did this" and so on and so forth. At this point in the story (even though it's only chapter one), I should care about why we're following this particular family and Lexi.

But I don't. It's very bland, and for a pair of seventeen-year-olds, they're both very immature. I understand the dynamics of a brother-sister relationship (and my brother is actually younger), and we don't fight like that - especially in the car.

And why would Jay dare her to do something while she isn't there? Seems kind of random if you ask me.
 
Maddiee*xo Saturday, 10 April 2010
it is goood (:
i enjoyed it but i do agree that they have their fair share of disagreements teehee xD
reminds me of me and my brother!
haha , x
please check out my books tooo! xx
 
SydneyFaith Saturday, 10 April 2010
They fight a lot, and they seem immature..that doesn't really make them believable characters. You're writing is too informal, it sounds like you're writing a note to one of your girlfriends..but ill keep reading just because i want to know what the dare is.
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Hehe. They're such nerds.
 
Keen Reader Sunday, 14 March 2010
It pretty good
Spindlegal Sunday, 14 March 2010
Free and Lexi are twins so there 17. Free is older by 2 minutes 2 minutes
 
Clarissa Lee Saturday, 13 March 2010
Waiting for the next chapter .. I like what I've read so far .. And, I like Free as well .. How old is he ?? ..

Read mine and tell me what you think please :)
 
Hyper Digit #93 Saturday, 13 March 2010
I like the name Free! Is it short for Freeman? haha black lagoon!nice!
 
Melissa Rose Tuesday, 11 December 2012
Free and Lexi act as if they're dating rather than siblings. they have that love but argue play thing going on like a lot of couples do. Plus they're really weird. Free seems bipolar he has a calm yet mild disposition one minute then playful then the next he is angry. They also seem to act ten rather than seventeen. Over all it was good though.
Lola Skye <3 Sunday, 27 February 2011
they act like they`re in a relationship. wierd.
Kathrinelouseal19 Saturday, 12 February 2011
I'm trying to figure out whether these siblings are really awesome or really weird. I'm leaning more towards weird.
 
RenaAsh Saturday, 12 February 2011
Awww so sweet, don't like this Jay at all
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Awwww ;o; That was sweet... I agree they seem to act a bit young for their age, but it's alright haha~ XD I guess I'm used to it by now because most of the Asian shows I watch have the characters like that too, hehe.
I can't believe that guy ran her over o_o;;
Kennedy Reyanne Saturday, 19 June 2010
They act a bit young for their age...
 
Brittanythewriter Sunday, 6 June 2010
Awww... I remember when that was my bro and I. Know he never sees me :(. Hes realy caring so sweet
 
Brittanythewriter Sunday, 6 June 2010
Awww... I remember when that was my bro and I. Know he never sees me :(. Hes realy caring so sweet
 
SamGirl974 Wednesday, 2 June 2010
Haha, they're just like me and my brother! =]
 
ImaTurtle123 Wednesday, 21 April 2010
I love it!! So awesome!
 
ImaTurtle123 Wednesday, 21 April 2010
I love it!! So awesome!
 
nah man Wednesday, 14 April 2010
Aww, the brother-sister relationship was so sweet. Now I want an older brother even more though I know it's never happening. c:
 
SydneyFaith Saturday, 10 April 2010
Yeah, stil the immaturity there..
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Hehe that's great. They goof around a bit too much though. But I love how he said a butt full of fist. Why would he want to put his fist up the dude's butt? Lol so funny. And when he kneed Jay in the crotch. Course, it was completely his fault they crash landed. She did run out in the middle of the road. Why does she hate him anyway?
Avalon Maya. Friday, 19 March 2010
Naww he is a real sweet heart. I love him.
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 18 March 2010
awwww, tender moment.
 
♥Lexxi Kay Sunday, 14 March 2010
Aww I love it
 
Fanatic Monday, 19 March 2012
It was cute the way u made her beg her brother :D I would totally buy this story but it would be better if you can make them kind of more mature...
Kathrinelouseal19 Saturday, 12 February 2011
suggestion, how about you make them 14 in like 8th grade...might sound more realistic.
Kathrinelouseal19 Saturday, 12 February 2011
What are they all five?
I'm guessing your a 12 yearold writer or your homeschooled. your writing isn't crap though, they can be imature but don't take it too far..
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
I loved when she was begging her brother XD haha
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
haha i liked the run-on dialogue.
 
Isabel Rod Thursday, 17 June 2010
Awesome!great start and i'm hooked.keep writing! =)
 
AlaskaEverfall Wednesday, 16 June 2010
hmmmm.... yeah... I agree with katie moore...
there's too much dialogue, and not enough description...
but, altogether, good work...
Rhose Whyte
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
Erdman. hehe
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Haha that whole thing was funny. They play so much its hilarious.

Oh and as for Cassie, Free is so mine! Lol jk. He's just a fictional character. But I still love 'im. And Reese. He should totally end up with Lexi. I don't know much about him or even Jay but I'm thinkin' that I like Reese more.
Avalon Maya. Friday, 19 March 2010
Okay, too much dialogue in one hit. You need to break it up with a bit of description, and saying who is speaking so we don`t get confuzed and such.
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Wow, their dad is mean ;o;
 
Adorablechildofgod Tuesday, 22 June 2010
lol! dramatic but, good
Kennedy Reyanne Saturday, 19 June 2010
They are so freaking childish. It's kinda pissing me off. But it's a good story concept.
 
emochikka16 Sunday, 28 March 2010
hey! I like emo hair on boys. xD
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Why did they get that mad over it? The dad has a rigth to be mad about her sneaking out and Free saying that is horrible. So wierd. And why would he kick them out for that? Where are they supposed to go? Gosh I'm so confused.
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
little correction on angeltiger jamie is 14 not 12 but still the math is off. gr8 book tho!!! =) nd the bro sis relationship is ah-dorable
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
LOL wow, he's really a push-over for his little sister XD
637974 Saturday, 31 July 2010
This is great..
but I dont really think a teenage boy would seriously go by a promise he made to his little sister..
But it's still cool
Kennedy Reyanne Saturday, 19 June 2010
I like the cute Big Brother/Little Sister relationship. [:
 
AlaskaEverfall Wednesday, 16 June 2010
awwww.... =')
soooo cute!
But, annoying is spelt annoying...
And, it's a little unrealistic... I mean, what 'boy' would promise their little sister that he would get to know one of his worst enimes...
unless...
he really DOES like her... *gasps*
Gotta read more!
Rhose Whyte
 
angeltiger626 Wednesday, 19 May 2010
wait, jay says to jamie "he's not going to date a girl 4 years younger than him" and jamie is twelve so free would be 16. but in the beginning of the book, lexi says she's 17. im confused . . .
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
i love leah! :) i think its weird though how jamie just agrees, and actually follows through with it. and i read another book by you, and in both of them u spelled annoying 'anoing'. but i love this
Avalon Maya. Wednesday, 14 April 2010
I love how naive Leah is,,, so cute!!!!!!!!! lol. Just a suggestion!!!! How about a little more desciption, and a little less dialogue. its really alot of talking going on,,,
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
I thought Free was 17 and you just said Jamie was 14. I'm pretty sure that equals a three year difference. Oh and I kept forgetting to say that it's annoying. You keep spelling it anoing.

Hehe Leah is so cute. But Luke's response confuses me greatly.

Jeez. This'll be interesting.
Avalon Maya. Wednesday, 14 April 2010
Haha agreed!
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Well she sure is doing a lot of bouncin' around isn't she?
 
Jordan Hayley Sunday, 5 October 2014
im loving this book!!!
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
awwwwww!!! <3
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Awww change of heart~ Hehe :D
Kennedy Reyanne Saturday, 19 June 2010
This story is going way too fast.
 
AlaskaEverfall Wednesday, 16 June 2010
awww.... =')
thts cuuuteeeee.... !!!!
Rhose Whyte
 
Jessie2010 Tuesday, 18 May 2010
I like it. Its really unique.
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
awwwwww :) i like jay nowww. screw reese :)
 
vampire reader Sunday, 28 March 2010
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
So there are quite a bit of grammar mistakes as far as which form of the word to use. Like to and too and where and wear. But that's it.

So that was wierd. Good, but wierd.
 
♥Lexxi Kay Wednesday, 17 March 2010
Awwwwwww! She wuvs him!
 
Hyper Digit #93 Tuesday, 16 March 2010
Omg! that is so cute! I totally like Jay now!
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
com on jayyy!!!!!! tell her yhu luvv her!!!!!!!! o_o plz!!!
Voir travers le verre. Thursday, 23 December 2010
"who ever you are, get the hell away. " xD
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Ah! Don't let her do it, Jay! D:
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
poor jay :( tell her u liiiike her!
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Jeez I hate my keyboard. anyway. I was going to say that I love how the dude's like "You talk in your sleep you know." And he's like Dang! But the other word. Lol, so funny.

Man I love Cassie! But I still feel bad for Jay. It really isn't hid fault.
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Haha!
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Haha!
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
he let her do it??? bastard! if he loved her he wouldve called it off
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Oh no! >.<
 
NikkiSaysRawr ;D Wednesday, 4 August 2010
because they might have a cuncussion (idk if i spelled that right) and you can fall into a coma if you fall asleep
637974 Saturday, 31 July 2010
lol
I don't understand why they can't just pass out though...why fight it?
 
AlaskaEverfall Wednesday, 16 June 2010
hahaha!! WOW!!
love the ending of dis chapter... *wink*
Rhose Whyte
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
That. Was. EPIC!!! haha that was awesome!
 
RenaAsh Saturday, 12 February 2011
aww lean is cute (baby voice)
Voir travers le verre. Thursday, 23 December 2010
I can so totally hear a little kid saying that.
Voir travers le verre. Thursday, 23 December 2010
I can so totally hear a little kid saying that.
Voir travers le verre. Thursday, 23 December 2010
I can so totally hear a little kid saying that.
 
I.A. White Sunday, 5 September 2010
"You got boo boo's too. I'll make them better." Leah is so ahdorable.!
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Awww hehe XD

Man, they paid with cash? o_O Don't they have insurance? XD;
 
Shannon Mae!<3 Sunday, 1 August 2010
That was so adorable!!!
 
Shannon Mae!<3 Sunday, 1 August 2010
That was so adorable!!!
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
awww he's sweet to his family <3
leah's cute too :)
 
MaddieBear c: Thursday, 1 July 2010
aww i love leah shes soooo awesome
 
AlaskaEverfall Wednesday, 16 June 2010
hahaha! love Leah... xx
Rhose Whyte
 
ShelbyRose Tuesday, 8 June 2010
You have a ton of spelling and gramatical errors. You should really proof read your word before you post your it...I still somewhat enjoy your book.
 
Brittanythewriter Sunday, 6 June 2010
AWWW...
Avalon Maya. Wednesday, 14 April 2010
Reaally loving Leah. She is uber cute.
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Lol that was funny. Still lovin' Leah.
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 18 March 2010
oh. my. GOD!!!!!!
 
I.A. White Sunday, 5 September 2010
<3_<3
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Oooo awesome chapter! *_* Hehe~
637974 Saturday, 31 July 2010
Okay, that was totally the wrong time for Free to realise he'd been wrong.
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
:D
sometimes people just naturally hate each other :)
 
AlaskaEverfall Wednesday, 16 June 2010
yeah...
I agree wit SamyJo...
Why DID thy hate each other?
I mean, you always have 2 hav a reason 4 hating sum1... =P
but... gd story...
Rhose Whyte
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 30 March 2010
Ok that was extremely wierd. And you still haven't explained why they've hated each other for so many years.
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
ppl find the whole soap in the mouth thingy funny but from experience... its NASTY. my parents were so horrible that they moved from bars of soap to the liquid dish soap!!!! thetd drizzle it on a spoon nd make my sibs nd i hold the spoon in our mouths!!!!!! seriously, not fun or funny. do not do it to your kids unless you want them to hate you forever. once again... not kidding
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
LOL that last part was hilarious XD

I think the teacher wouldn't use "Mrs." though o_o;; That's a married woman title... He'd use "Ms." or "Miss".
637974 Saturday, 31 July 2010
The Mr and MRS makes it sound like their a husband and wife
this is cool
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
he's like the perfect brother :) and i like the soap-in-the-mouth tihng haha. oh, and charlotte = stalker lol.

awww, that would have been a very cute chase.
 
hurricane maddy 19 Friday, 2 April 2010
awesome job
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 30 March 2010
Lol I love the part when he covers up Leah's ears from Luke's words and when she eats the food just from him winking at her. Funny.
Specially funny was when Free ran with Lexi on his back. That was great. Very funny. But yeah, I'm thinking Jay should have to go to the pricipal's office too. He was part of it just as much as them.
 
RenaAsh Saturday, 12 February 2011
Forth line from the end: Not even Free cam over to help her (came)
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 30 March 2010
Ok so this is how people are at fault:
Dan: for egging Jay on and casuing the fight. Not for dodging a blow. That's a normal thing to do in a fight.
Jay: for being a part of the fight and not just walking away or shaking off the irritation.
Lexi: for standing to frickin' close to a fight where people are punching each other.
 
Melissa Rose Friday, 21 December 2012
spelling errors such as 'there' when it should be 'their'. grammatical errors, the characters act immature. It's good but you should fix this. no spaces between the quotation marks in the dialog either. Through all the errors I still like the book though.
 
That One Girl Tuesday, 18 January 2011
does your flippin computer have spell check? okay, when you write dialog, you dont have spaces between the quotation marks and the first and last word. and disgusted is spelled the way that I just did it. and signed, is also spelled the way I just spelled it...your book is making me go crazy! but I still like it anyway....I dont know why though...
sunshinedrops Sunday, 16 January 2011
Way immature way to handle the situation free
 
I.A. White Sunday, 5 September 2010
Uh oh
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Poor kids T.T
I like Free, BTW :D
637974 Saturday, 31 July 2010
She seems kinda pathetic, fainting at that moment. Unless she fainted dramatically, like the chicks in indian movies.
 
PoisonousButterfly Tuesday, 22 June 2010
They have parents like mine, old fashion to the bone and mean as heal
 
AlaskaEverfall Wednesday, 16 June 2010
yeah...
sum ppl are REALLY crazi...
=P
Rhose Whyte
 
SamGirl974 Wednesday, 2 June 2010
Apperently people who comment don't understand what it's like to have a super short tempered dad. On the other hand, I can see why Free would pick up a knife. I love all the drama and comedy put in it! =]
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
wait...why did he fling the spaghetti? i thought it was like, an accident, but then he did it again. and why did he grab the knife?? like wtf?
ajeebo Saturday, 24 April 2010
needs mre description, seems abit unrealistic........ppl dont pick up knives just like that, it seems lyk u desperately needed to create a reason for free to get kicked out.....nevertheless, you hndle the drama quite well....
 
emochikka16 Thursday, 1 April 2010
yeah i thought they left
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 30 March 2010
Umm, when did they move back in? I thought they had already been kicked out.
 
Lowshie Friday, 6 August 2010
<3
637974 Saturday, 31 July 2010
You know, you don't go to the hospital for fainting from shock. You end up waking after a bit and you just carry on with life.
This story is great.
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
"haha." lol
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 30 March 2010
I love how sarcastic they are, even in thought. It's rather amusing.
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
hilarious!!! XD great tie-in with the flashback!!!!!!!
 
I.A. White Sunday, 5 September 2010
alls well that ends well...I think I typed that right... Oh well awesome chapter.!
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Child abuse! D: In the United States, that teacher would be fired!
lol... I liked the Rawr XD hehe
 
SamyJo Thursday, 1 April 2010
Ok that was a pretty funny chapter. Especially when he was like "Rawr." I laughed.
 
hugsandkisses Thursday, 1 April 2010
awww...
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
wat is this??? she likes reece but then likes jay???????? so confusing
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
Wow... she's really emotional o_o;; I still like her though lol
637974 Saturday, 31 July 2010
Wow. That's a rather dramatic change of attitude towards Jay.
:D
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
stare...stare...drool...mmm that was a nice image haha.
whoa-ho-ho, someone's a little intense on the first date. O.o
jay's not even a *little* mad that they kissed, and lexi goes out with reese?
 
MaddieBear c: Thursday, 1 July 2010
aww thier sooo gunna be 2gether jay and lexi will be a iteam!!!
 
angeltiger626 Friday, 21 May 2010
awwwwwww!!!!! i filled the world was rid of ppl like reese and filled with ppl like jay!!!!
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
stare. stare. drool. pahahahaha i lover her! and i love jay, hes sooo sweet!
reese: bastard. i hope jay kills him.
go jay! <3 :)
Avalon Maya. Wednesday, 14 April 2010
No SamyJo, thats not wierd at all. Honest. I wanna do that to my own characters that i hate,,, lolo
 
vampire reader Sunday, 4 April 2010
ha ilove this book i was giveing up hope that you would wright agin
Spindlegal Friday, 2 April 2010
Hahaha your the funny one :) lol
 
SamyJo Thursday, 1 April 2010
Hehe. The part abut staring at Jay and drooling was hilarious. Your book is just funny!

She so was not joking! Lol, stupid Lexi... *shakes head*

OMIGOSH!!!! I JUST HAD AN IDEA! YOU SHOULD TOTALLY MAKE ME A CHARACTER IN THIS BOOK S I CAN ASSASSINATE REESE!!!! THAT WOULD BE EPIC!!!!!!! You should totally do it. That be so funny and I think I would be forced to pee my pants from laughing so hard. Especially if you had me d it in a hilarious way. Like, you could make him go skydiving and I could push him out of the plane or he could jump out mysteriously with no parachute or it could be defected and it would seem like a freak accident when he landed splat on the ground. Only I would know what really happened....
Does that make me sound like a freak? Cuz people like Reese really annoy me and I just want them all to die. But not in an obvious way. To die mysteriously.
 
flynfreako Saturday, 14 August 2010
He's such a good brother X3
637974 Saturday, 31 July 2010
LOLOLOL
I find it hilarious that he thinks something happened when Jamie screams in excitement.
Someone tell him it's a girl thing.
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
he glares at a *kitten?* that cracked me up for some reason lmfao.
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
whoooooa, what are those?
those would be my abs of fury, young one!
hahahahahaha
ajeebo Saturday, 24 April 2010
i love Kay's relationahip with Leah..........soooo sweet
 
katiealyssa. Sunday, 18 April 2010
hahaha. (: I love how they were all fascinated with his abs.
 
SamyJo Thursday, 1 April 2010
It's "I told Leah to be quiet." Not too. Too is another word for also. You basically keep saying also in the middle of all of your sentences. So instead of "I want too go, to." for instance, it would be " I want to go, too." Make sense?
 
Looxia Eaglestone Thursday, 16 September 2010
eww.. why do guys rip each others' shirts for..
so weird.. =="
637974 Saturday, 31 July 2010
Is Dan gay?
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
high ho, high ho, it's off to school i gi. lmfao. i love his cynicism. fight!! :D aww, "my guys." that's cute.
 
MaddieBear c: Thursday, 1 July 2010
wow dan must got problems lol ;]
Avalon Maya. Wednesday, 14 April 2010
I think that Dan is a little that way inclined, and likes to see sexy boys without their shirts on. =D
Spindlegal Friday, 2 April 2010
idk dans a weirdo with issues haha
 
SamyJo Friday, 2 April 2010
So why exactly does Dan find it fun to rip Jay's shirt off? It's a bit wierd if you ask me.
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
ha cha cha cha?? lol i think i might like that, haha. okay, yapper doodle? is he high?? is there a reason for his really WEIRD expressions??? lol. pretend to be his girlfriend?? im so lost. like, they kissed. hullo. that makes you *together.* haha. "bing." another winner :D falling for him?? but they KISSED!! did that never happen????? what does she make of that?
 
PeaceLoveHappinness Tuesday, 6 July 2010
It kinda gets...sloppy after a while. Its really good:) but maybe you could add more detail and like less.. "text" talk (sloppy)
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
good gravy! hahahahaha
 
SJohnston Tuesday, 6 April 2010
yeah i know :) haha
 
SamyJo Saturday, 3 April 2010
That was funny. "Ha cha cha cha?" "Yepper doodle?" Wierd but that's alright.
darlingdylan Tuesday, 8 November 2011
i thought that the cat's name was storm.
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
personally, on the dogs, im more of a golden retriever/border collie person. and i tried the leash on my cat, he bit my foot!
 
Looxia Eaglestone Thursday, 16 September 2010
aww I love the cat.. <3
 
CaitlinJean Monday, 23 August 2010
wow, this is really good! I can picture it happening in my head, I'd definately buy it if it got published! You canget leads for cats... you can even get leads for rabbits which is abit weird but, you can!

if you have time, could you read my book, a twist in my story?
 
Shannon Mae!<3 Monday, 2 August 2010
SamyJo if you read it you would see that the 'lead' wouldn't come off she does say it fits just right.
P.S- i have a cat and you can get leads with them.
 
rh_shorty95 Monday, 19 July 2010
cats do so do leashes.
 
MaddieBear c: Thursday, 1 July 2010
ithought da cats name is storm not smokey
 
kmkraemer121 Friday, 14 May 2010
Amazing i love it
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
I thought the cat's name was storm?
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
So why does she keep calling him Smokey? I thought his name was Storm.

And cats don't do leashes. They don't walk on em like dogs do. And if that bracelet went on his head it'll probably fall of the first time she pulled her "leash" and he woldn't move. Bye bye kitty.
 
vampire reader Sunday, 4 April 2010
kittens
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
K. That was short. A seemed a bit pointless. Whatever.
 
iCatster Sunday, 28 September 2014
I luv dis!
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
samyjo... my puppy #1 i got at six weeks and he was fully functional #2 it took approx two days for him to respond/learn his name #3 he waz potty trained in a week #4 finally, it all depends on the breed. i got a border collie so naturally with their INSANE amounts of cleverness they learn quicker than others.
sunshinedrops Sunday, 16 January 2011
Soooooooo cute
 
Shannon Mae!<3 Monday, 2 August 2010
GOD! SamyJo stop complaining its a damn story! If you dont like it dont read it!
 
Brittanythewriter Sunday, 6 June 2010
Aww they sound so cute!!!
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
Sorry, I just had a blonde moment. I was thinking about a little baby puppy. It can run and bark at 6 weeks but they wouldn't know their names that fast. And Harley probably would pee in her room or on her bed if she closed the dor on it. It takes a while to teach a dog commands. Especially to potty train them.
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
So... I'm pretty sure you can't get a puppy until it's 8 weeks old. I don't know where you'd get a puppy that's 6 weeks. And he wouldn't learn his name that fast. Or really be able to run and bark that young. He'd still be tiny and just learning to walk and barely branch away from his mom.
My mom used to breed dogs so that's why I'm picky about this.
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
wow, smart dog. is he wicked fast too? if yes youve got a german shephard clone of my little puppy boy... sorry i tend to get all mushy when talking about him
 
Brittanythewriter Sunday, 6 June 2010
Me tooo!!!!!
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
I.want.that.PUPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
SJohnston Tuesday, 6 April 2010
i wish my puppy was as good as hers
 
kk_45 Wednesday, 12 May 2010
i feel the same
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
me too ema, since she was like dude should i have introduced him? and kaisa, our last names are both moore, and so is jess's!! sorry i just thought that was odd haha
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
I have the strangest feeling that jess was talking about jay.
Avalon Maya. Wednesday, 14 April 2010
YUPPERS! =D
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
So I'm gunna g on a hunch here and guess that she wasn't talking about Free. It wuldn't surprise me. And then the guy Jess likes says yes, they start dating, and Free gets crushed or whatever. It would be typical meddling results.
sunshinedrops Sunday, 16 January 2011
Is the last sentance forshadowing? It seems like it.
 
flynfreako Sunday, 15 August 2010
omg he dad really is terrible! D:
 
rh_shorty95 Friday, 23 July 2010
lol i love how he's all sweet and solemn and then he says "for like the 5th time."
 
Lowshie Friday, 16 July 2010
ummm it said smokey again..!
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
I (reluctantly) agree with samy
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 6 April 2010
k well they did hate each other. Things happened to them. They're together. How is it going to end? Stories like this are about the struggle of them getting together and finally being together. Them getting together is usually the ending of the story. But you didn't go into them getting together at all. It's like one chapter they're srta liking each other and then the next, they're kissing and a couple with no middle. An I don't see how you're ging to end this story now that everything you said this book was about happened.
Spindlegal Monday, 5 April 2010
the point is a boy and girl hate eachother from beginning then fall in love after things happen to them
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
Ok so the "YES!" made me crack up. And the whispering in her ear was pretty funny. But they whole asking out thing was pretty fast. Oh well.
So is there a point to this story?
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
Ok so the "YES!" made me crack up. And the whispering in her ear was pretty funny. But they whole asking out thing was pretty fast. Oh well.
So is there a point to this story?
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
Ok so the "YES!" made me crack up. And the whispering in her ear was pretty funny. But they whole asking out thing was pretty fast. Oh well.
So is there a point to this story?
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
Ok so the "YES!" made me crack up. And the whispering in her ear was pretty funny. But they whole asking out thing was pretty fast. Oh well.
So is there a point to this story?
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
Ok so the "YES!" made me crack up. And the whispering in her ear was pretty funny. But they whole asking out thing was pretty fast. Oh well.
So is ther a point to this story?
 
SamyJo Monday, 5 April 2010
Ok so the "YES!" made me crack up. And the whispering in her ear was pretty funny. But they whole asking out thing was pretty fast. Oh well.
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
well i remember a few chapters ago she told harley not to attack anyone unless she was being attacked and free DID attack her...
 
flynfreako Sunday, 15 August 2010
wow... one of my relatives had a dog that bit a friend that was over and teasing the dog and they had to put it to sleep... just because the dog got more aggressive after that.
i don't know... i feel like it would've been better if harley had just been barking at him and not bit him >.< unless free was actually abusing the dog or something :/
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
oh. i thought she meant deodorant
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
I know why Harley bit him. she said "You are not to bark or attack any one, unless they try to hurt me or someone else" well, to Harley, it looked like free was trying to hurt her, so he attacked. Not his fault.
 
sarah jessica Wednesday, 7 April 2010
umm smayjo i think she meant his hair do.... lol but i love this book!! its really great!! made me laugh at the second to last line. lol!!
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 6 April 2010
Well that was... wierd. At the end. Very wierd. But whatever. And what does "But his DO smells soo good!" mean? It made no sense.
 
rh_shorty95 Friday, 23 July 2010
haha cute convo
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
um, ok?
 
SamyJo Friday, 9 April 2010
That certainly was wierd.
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
wow... hes gotta be pretty tough not to be cureld in the fetal position like most guys who get kicked in the balls! lolz
 
I.A. White Sunday, 5 September 2010
Lol at the ending btw Stare Stare okay I'm good.! Hilars
 
rh_shorty95 Friday, 23 July 2010
lmao "pretty much." why is he on the computer still without a shirt on??
haha stare. stare. k im good. lmao
that was a good one lol
 
Lowshie Friday, 16 July 2010
OMG I AM LITERALLY LOL-ing!
 
Brittanythewriter Monday, 7 June 2010
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA love it I started dying laughing
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
hahahahahahaahahaha right in the balls! and then i picture him just like, dragging himself out the door pahahaha
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! I CAN'T BREATHE!!!! RIGHT IN THE BALLS!!!!!!!!!!
 
♥Lexxi Kay Friday, 9 April 2010
Omg haha nice right in the nuts
 
SamyJo Friday, 9 April 2010
An ice bath maybe. She keeps doing that to him and they won't be able to have kids ne day if they got that far... Lol its true.
 
SJohnston Friday, 9 April 2010
haha! i love Free so much!
 
sarah jessica Thursday, 8 April 2010
haha!!! omg she kicked him in the nuts lol thats just too funny!!! i feel bad for the dude but if i was free i would have been rolling on the floor laughing so hard and looking like a crazy person even though that would be a lil insensitive... but still it was funny!! and then after that i would have goone to have gotten him some ice.
 
Melissa Rose Friday, 4 January 2013
sings in his sleep??
 
rh_shorty95 Friday, 23 July 2010
uh...he *sings* in his sleep??
 
angeltiger626 Friday, 21 May 2010
free maybe? she did say she liked him
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
and ewwwwwwwwww katie!! he's her brother!!!! she's probably dreaming about someone.
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
ummmmmmmm... weird.
 
katiealyssa. Sunday, 18 April 2010
ahhvstupid keyboard. I sent it twice. sorry.

anyway. I love this book. (:
 
katiealyssa. Sunday, 18 April 2010
jamie seems like she likes jay....weird?
 
katiealyssa. Sunday, 18 April 2010
Oh wow. Jamie seems like she likes Jay....weird.
 
katiealyssa. Sunday, 18 April 2010
Oh wow. Jamie seems like she likes Jay....weird.
 
sarah jessica Friday, 9 April 2010
haha thats funny.
 
SamyJo Friday, 9 April 2010
Wierd. Again. But funny I guess. What are you planning on doing with the story?
 
LoveStoryGirlxx Friday, 9 April 2010
lol he sings in his sleep? AHH-MAZ-ING chapter. Please write more =)
637974 Sunday, 1 August 2010
LOL he sings in his sleep?
Erin Arnett Tuesday, 8 June 2010
wait first you said he didn't sing this time and then you say it's not horrible singing so which is it?
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
he sings in his sleep? ... I wish my boyfriend could do that!
 
sarah jessica Sunday, 11 April 2010
omg! plz write more soon. i wanna know if they break up or not and what jay is gunna decide about him being a jerk like he used to or stayign the way he is now.
 
SamyJo Sunday, 11 April 2010
Wierd that he sings in his sleep. He must not be sleeping ery peacefully. That tends to be why people dream and do things like talking and walking in their sleep. If they sleep peacefully they tend to just breathe and otherwise look dead almost. lol. Gosh I'm bored.
 
♥Lexxi Kay Sunday, 11 April 2010
Add more soon!
 
♥Lexxi Kay Sunday, 11 April 2010
Eeeppp! I hope that they don't break up. A few speeling errors such havnt should be haven't in 'hey. I havn't seen you on awhile.' So its just small errors. :D
 
Melissa Rose Friday, 4 January 2013
uhh, kind of boring. It needed to be drug out longer rather than being a quick action scene that was kind of boring. They find free, it was Jay's idiot friends, one hurts her so she sprays him and they get away. Thats what it comes down to. Add somed drama, be creative, more action, grab the readers attention.
637974 Sunday, 1 August 2010
*snigger*
 
Zoey Koppang Tuesday, 29 June 2010
Begining= Good. Middle= Great! Starting of the end= Boring
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
*shakes head* Dude.
 
SamyJo Monday, 12 April 2010
Well that was... interesting. I guess.
 
♥Lexxi Kay Monday, 12 April 2010
What idiots. Love it!
 
I.A. White Sunday, 5 September 2010
i like the ending
637974 Sunday, 1 August 2010
Ya know, she never really says she loves him. Is it just a typical high school crush that shell get over in, like, one year?
 
MaddieBear c: Thursday, 1 July 2010
omg there such a rockin couple keep writen!!!!
homewrecker:) Monday, 21 June 2010
love this so farrr keep writing please
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
JAY, JAY, JAY, JAY, GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO JAY!!!!!!!
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 13 April 2010
Lol that was nice. Kind of, well... I still don't see how you're going to end this story. But I'm sure you will somehow...
 
sarah jessica Monday, 12 April 2010
aw jay is so sweet!! i love it!
 
LoveStoryGirlxx Monday, 12 April 2010
Awwwwww Jay's soooooooo sweet!
 
flynfreako Monday, 16 August 2010
That flashback confused me for a second XD; I didn't realize it was a flashback at first lol
637974 Sunday, 1 August 2010
What a sweet sister. Jay is an insensitive pig.
 
rh_shorty95 Friday, 23 July 2010
tssss. pshh. lol
 
Lowshie Friday, 16 July 2010
what is Tsss...??? its used a lot..
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
he's awesome!!! (probably)
Avalon Maya. Wednesday, 14 April 2010
Haha i think it was you Samy. lol
 
SamyJo Tuesday, 13 April 2010
Hehe. If that was cuzza me, I now feel special. If not, still.
 
Melissa Rose Friday, 4 January 2013
grammatical errors. Also Jay isn't hyper, my niece always acts like that. You said the drink had 10 more percent of caffine than coffee, prove it. Eating a ton of sugar in sight and bouncing doesn't prove a thing, that's half my friends and niece. Be more creative, think outside the box and show us how hyper he can be.
 
rh_shorty95 Friday, 23 July 2010
lmfao "i love you too?" awesome haha xD
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
dude, Jay's not hyper, I act like that all the time!!! (I'm not kidding)
 
SamyJo Friday, 16 April 2010
Instead of "next she sniffed each bottles of my cologne," make it "Next, she sniffed each of my cologn bottles." It makes more sense when reading and flows better, too.
 
emochikka16 Thursday, 15 April 2010
i thought maybe free wa going to end up with lexi's friend cassie o.o but guess not xD aww too bad :[
 
nah man Wednesday, 14 April 2010
Wow, this is good. Hope you add more soon!

B

By the way, can you check mine out and rate/comment? I would really appreciate it. Thanks much!
 
sarah jessica Wednesday, 14 April 2010
hehehe jay being hyper... thats funny and lexi has to deal with the consequences. lmao!! and free has a date. ooo lala
 
flynfreako Monday, 16 August 2010
I agree with KMGilroy's comment... where are the puppies? o_o;; Feels like Harley would've at least barked at the raccoons.
637974 Sunday, 1 August 2010
Isn't it random to have sunflower seeds in your pocket?
:D
 
JulzFM Wednesday, 12 May 2010
i agree ema! and my god samy, she already explained earlier that they looked alike!
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
oh, and by the way, fraternal twins can look the same, just like regular siblings. ur such a know it all.
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
ok, samy, you are seriously getting on my nerves. If you don't like the book, don't read it and leave spindlegal alone! everyone makes mistakes, it's part of the writing process. so SHUT UP!!!!!!!!
 
KMGilroy Monday, 19 April 2010
Where are the puppies?
 
emochikka16 Saturday, 17 April 2010
OMG I got my wish if he dates Cassie! Haha xD
 
SamyJo Saturday, 17 April 2010
When she starts singing the theme song in her head, you need to put quotations around it. "Keep on whispering in my ear..... Uh-huh!" Like that. It doesn't take much.

Just because they're twins doesn't mean that they look alike. Boy and girl twins are nt from the same egg. That makes them identicle. They would be faternal twins. That means they look different.
Pheebs Thursday, 15 April 2010
This is cute but you story is going nowhere. it's already 36 chapters and i dont see where you're taking this story.
Avalon Maya. Thursday, 15 April 2010
Why did Jay have sunflower seeds in his pocket? thats not wierd at all. lol. Haha! him singing in his sleep was HILARIOUS! omg my friend Becca does that. she was listening to the radio, and was singing along in her sleep, and then the next morning, she was like 'i dont even know that song!' so funny!!!! lol
 
flynfreako Monday, 16 August 2010
Hahaha XD Dan got mad, so it must be truuue~ 8D
 
MaddieBear c: Thursday, 1 July 2010
omg this book rocks
 
PoisonousButterfly Tuesday, 22 June 2010
some one finally calls dan out lol :)
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
I hate reese. *under breathe* abusive bastard.
 
SamyJo Saturday, 17 April 2010
Burn.
 
vampire reader Saturday, 17 April 2010
i seee no pont to this book u may need to clean it up a little but it is still good;o
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
wonderful. beautiful. perfect!!! <3
637974 Sunday, 1 August 2010
ahahaha
corny to the MAX, lol
 
rh_shorty95 Saturday, 24 July 2010
"i've never dated anyone prettier than me." epic lol
 
MaddieBear c: Thursday, 1 July 2010
be quiet samy ur dumb is does make sense. look dis story awwwww
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
SHUT UP SAMY!!!! UR RUINING THIS BEAUTIFUL MOMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
 
ImaTurtle123 Thursday, 22 April 2010
I live in Indiana!! Lol...just saying cuz she's going to notordame...or however you spell it...but yeah love the book! Few gramatical errors but pretty good
 
SamyJo Sunday, 18 April 2010
If that was real life, the waitress would have spit in her drink. They tend to do that when you piss them off. And the "awww" thing Jay said to her, made absolutely no sense. If she meant more to him than his life, why wouldn't he just tell her that she is his life rather than watching her walk away? And that means that they're the same. Simple works too.
But still good. Don't mean to be critical or anything.
 
sarah jessica Sunday, 18 April 2010
that line was like omg such an awwww moment!!! and that thing with th waitress was priceless!!! phahahahaha!!
 
emochikka16 Saturday, 17 April 2010
ahwww.[x
 
vampire reader Saturday, 17 April 2010
i did not mean to bug u i just like my books to have a point u r a gr8 wrighter just need a little help
 
That One Girl Saturday, 26 February 2011
who's storm? did I miss something?
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
awwwwwww!!!!!! i love train!
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
awwwwwww!!!!!! i love train!
 
I.A. White Monday, 6 September 2010
Nice ending and at Vampire Reader why so angry.??? Anyway I enjoyed this book.!
637974 Sunday, 1 August 2010
*sob*
 
rh_shorty95 Saturday, 24 July 2010
awwww leah is soo precious.
yaaay i love that song :D
wow, cassie really must like him. did a thing happen tehre? between those two??
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
whoa, down vampy! don't bite our heads off here!
 
emochikka16 Wednesday, 21 April 2010
OMG hey soul sister is mine and my bf's sonq.<3
 
vampire reader Sunday, 18 April 2010
I AM NOT READING THIS NO MORE I DO NOT LIKE IT START OVER AND MACK A POINT WITH IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
 
SamyJo Sunday, 18 April 2010
Bye!
 
chaseyourdreams<3<3 Friday, 4 February 2011
cryyyy i loveee this book :(
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
bittersweet... you know? a great chapter.
 
flynfreako Monday, 16 August 2010
Awww how sad T.T

I don't think all the people commenting should pick on SamyJo because she's actually giving good critiques >.<
She's not being mean about it... she just wants to see this story be even better!
 
kk_45 Wednesday, 12 May 2010
Awwww i loved it!!
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
AWWWWWWWWW!!!! and, as usual, samyjo is ruining this nice moment
 
SamyJo Monday, 19 April 2010
Try "This was Free's and my goodbye."
Short chapter. Why don't you have her with Jay on the way there or something?
ElliePreece Tuesday, 26 November 2013
Loved every moment of this book! I loved how each character had their own individual persona, made it fun to read
 
AlexH Saturday, 31 December 2011
i'm sad it's over! But i liked it
 
That One Girl Sunday, 17 April 2011
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
a perfect ending!!!!
 
CaitlinJean Friday, 7 January 2011
I loved this book SO much, I just read it like.. all in one go! The ending was so sweet hehe! I love all the kid's names, cuuuuute:3

could someone read one of mine pleaase?x
Spindlegal Friday, 12 November 2010
welll im rewriting the story so you'll get more information about the ending and ect. I was just rushing the whole thing but yeah i g2g to school right now!! hahaha
 
Under_Worlder:)( Monday, 1 November 2010
how did they get to where they are now? 2nd book to answer the questions on all of your captivated readers minds.please!
 
Under_Worlder:)( Monday, 1 November 2010
i need some creative critizum so could you maby read "mixed" or "where the soul is" ???
 
nachocamacho Sunday, 22 August 2010
It's 3:30 where I am too. :) Umm and I would have commented earlier but I was to caught up to comment. :D Anyway..LOVED IT! I loved Jay he was such a sweetheart.
 
nachocamacho Sunday, 22 August 2010
It's 3:30 where I am too. :) Umm and I would have commented earlier but I was to caught up to comment. :D Anyway..LOVED IT! I loved Jay he was such a sweetheart.
 
Jayden Leah Saturday, 14 August 2010
I would have commented on this book last night but i fell asleep. I stayed up until 3:30 in the morning reading and I LOVED it. I was searching the sight and found this book and it is AMAZING!! I love it!

Will you check out "Love's Blindfold" pretty please. Thanks and great job. Can't wait for the sequal!!! :p
Purplelover0917 Friday, 13 August 2010
AWWWWWWWW i love this i was on the verge to tears:)
637974 Sunday, 1 August 2010
This ruled.
 
Lowshie Friday, 16 July 2010
im sad it ended! close to crying! lol
 
R. Rai Friday, 9 July 2010
Awwwww! Amazing End!
 
Jaye Thursday, 8 July 2010
I love this!! I'm crying now! I hope you're happy! you're messing with my emotions!
 
MaddieBear c: Thursday, 1 July 2010
omg dis is going on my favs!!!!!
 
PoisonousButterfly Tuesday, 22 June 2010
That whats Supercalifragilisticespiolidocious lol but it was awesome i love every single bit of it :)
 
LunaC. Tuesday, 22 June 2010
OMG that was the best story ever i loved thatso much i cant believe how sad i am that its over. that i like an opposite of my life. i have a brother but we dont get along. well thanks for a great read bye
 
zoeeey , (L) Friday, 18 June 2010
ah_mazing! =)
 
Jesse Rae Wednesday, 2 June 2010
Awesome book! Lots of drama, which is always fun to read. I'm so glad I decided to read this story! Good job!
luna07 Saturday, 8 May 2010
amazing i love it
=)
your an amazing writer
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 29 April 2010
I like their names. :)
 
katiealyssa. Wednesday, 21 April 2010
nice. a little dissapointed, because you skipped A LOT. but nice. (:
 
emochikka16 Wednesday, 21 April 2010
i wanted to see how he proposed :[
 
Pink Gal ^_^ Wednesday, 21 April 2010
nice!! :)
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 20 April 2010
I agree with Samy. I mean... why would you name your own kids your name and your twin brothers? I would personally just get confused. Honestly.
ALso, I just dont get the plot. Maybe you could fix it? Make it a sequal so you can explain how they made it through college, and how he proposed, and all that jazz...
 
SamyJo Monday, 19 April 2010
Oh and can't you name the twins something different? I mean I get why it would be cute to name them Lexi and Free, but it's weird.
Well that's it. The book was good. It seemed a bit unending at times, I'll admit, but it turned out good.
 
SamyJo Monday, 19 April 2010
So uh, why did an accident have to happen? And you should have made this as like a sequal. That would have been better. Where they get engaged as like the preface and then the wedding as the first chapter. Then you can add this chapter as the epilouge. That'll be a good book if you do it.
 
sarah jessica Monday, 19 April 2010
awww sooo cute!!! haha and they are too sexy to grow old!! i wish!! phahahahahaha
 
tokiohotelfan Monday, 19 April 2010
awww... that was sooo cute!
 
awesomeness Tuesday, 18 January 2011
can i suggest not chaging a thing??? it already is a long nd beautiful story, dont mess with the flow of it by making it longer!! otherwise, i loved it!!!!!
Spindlegal Thursday, 9 December 2010
yaa 1,473 views :) and 888 readers.
thanks guys i luv yall soo much!
Spindlegal Friday, 22 October 2010
hahah true! No more new books from me for awhile (or until i finish the rest of my unfinished books)

back at ya ;)
haha !!!!!!!!!!!!!
gaaah I'm hypeeer
 
angeltiger626 Thursday, 21 October 2010
u finally found something productive to do other than writing a new book :)
hahaha luv ya em <3
 
Kyttin Tuesday, 13 May 2014
Hey! I definitely enjoyed reading this! I would have liked a bit more detail as too why Lexi and Jay hated each other so much and how they finally got together, but still great job! Ill definitely read your other books!
 
Skarlett Guerra Monday, 20 May 2013
Amazing book. I enjoyed it alot.I have vreated on book so far. It just have 2 Chapters for now but I hope that everyone can read them.
loved the book. Amazing.;)
 
Melissa Rose Saturday, 17 November 2012
you have some serious potential! It was an amazing book and i hope to be able to buy it off the bookshelf someday, you really deserve to get it published.
Would you mind taking a look at my book "The Angels and The Mission" and telling me what you think?
 
Isis Lou Tuesday, 6 December 2011
I loved this book!!!
 
Salamandear Saturday, 28 May 2011
I HATE That GREAT Books Have To End!! =(
Spindlegal Monday, 31 January 2011
yeah i do have spell checker but i wrote it straight on this site not on word and i was young and this when i wrote this story.

MMM im tired and i want a cookie
Spindlegal Monday, 31 January 2011
yeah i do have spell checker but i wrote it straight on this site not on word and i was young and this when i wrote this story.

MMM im tired and i want a cookie
 
angeltiger626 Wednesday, 19 January 2011
hahahaha i found time to read this last chap. all i can say is: oh boy -_- hahaha

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