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Being For The Benefit Of Paramount Kites

 
lip.balms Monday, 5 January 2015
:)
Heavan Friday, 29 July 2011
I love the Beatles theme you have going! :)
 
angelicmasona Saturday, 29 May 2010
This is just a helpful hit, not a criticism. There are suppose to be commas after the characters talk, not periods. But nice starts
 
katconwell Monday, 24 May 2010
Okay, I figured it out. This one next. haha.
 
Lou Lou Monday, 8 February 2010
Thank god you're writing a new book they are so good! x
 
Meg_x Tuesday, 28 August 2012
I think you got something wrong
You said, "Love you", said Andy instead of Lucas to Maris....
 
Adorkable Sunday, 21 March 2010
Haha, Amazing :)
 
Midnight Moon ♥ Tuesday, 12 January 2010
There beter be more, or im gonna cry...I wish I was Savannah
 
Adorkable Sunday, 21 March 2010
Haha, poor Dexter :P lol. Ohh no! I hope Palma isn't mad at him!
 
Adorkable Sunday, 21 March 2010
Aw, that's horrid!
 
Midnight Moon ♥ Friday, 15 January 2010
Still Great. Keep working!
 
Adorkable Sunday, 21 March 2010
That made me lol! :)
 
Adorkable Sunday, 21 March 2010
About two weeks ago, Andy ha tried to hit on Savannah, but she brutally rejected him. In other words: He died a horrible and painful death.
 
WordLover Monday, 18 April 2011
I had complaints about this at first: there are so many characters at once, something about the dialogue, and something else. I can't even remember because I love this chapter. I love this book so far, and I added it to my favorites. I love Carter, and I guess it's kind of funny that they're freshman!

Good work so far.
Mind reading my book, The Bermuda Affair?
 
Adorkable Sunday, 21 March 2010
Hahaha! "Gross!" Lol :)
 
Adorkable Sunday, 21 March 2010
Andy is such a douchebag! Grrr! haha :)
 
Heather M. Sunday, 24 January 2010
Yay!!!
 
Adorkable Sunday, 21 March 2010
Poor Peter! Aw! :( Haha, I still would have taken the money though :)
 
Adorkable Sunday, 21 March 2010
"Good. Boys suck! They deserve to die!"

"Yeah! I have seen you there before. You're the girl who was freaking out at a model of Jesus on a cross."

LOL! This chapter was seriously funny :)
 
WordLover Monday, 18 April 2011
OMG, I remember the movie candyman! I must have watched that in the late nineties! I was so afraid...with all the flies and everything! lol
 
Adorkable Sunday, 21 March 2010
Megan, and Shelbi are jerks :/
And Elisha isn't as stuck up in this one :)
 
WordLover Monday, 18 April 2011
Just out of curiousity, where do you get your last names? I mean, they pretty much match some of the people's ethnicities, but they are so diverse!Seems to me like you did research. Ogilvy: (There was a character from this show with Mo'Nique with that name!) Just a coincidence?
 
Adorkable Monday, 22 March 2010
Lol. Good job. Me likes this chapter :)
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
:)
 
Honey121 Sunday, 21 November 2010
I like how this story's going it sounds so professional!! I love it! :)
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
No. Carter likes you, retard! lol :) This is amazing!
 
WordLover Monday, 18 April 2011
When you wrote that Andy and Buzz were characters, I automatically thought, "Yeah, Andy and Buzzlight Year fronm Toy Story!" lol. Did you think of that?
 
Honey121 Sunday, 21 November 2010
Omg Andy thinks he's all that!! He's such a big idiot. I felt bad for Dexter :(
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Andy is such a Douche! :)
 
L Anderson Saturday, 20 March 2010
Wow... Andy is such a douchebag hahaha
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Okay. I decided I like Holly and Savannah better. I really like her and Jude too though...
This is amazing btw :)
 
Honey121 Sunday, 21 November 2010
I think justin likes her! I guess!
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Tehe. Good chapter. It's so happy :) I love Justin. Where can I get me one of him?
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Yay! The Hunger Games!!! :) What's Shattering Glass about?
 
AddyB1 Monday, 1 August 2011
Mmm.... And I live in Cincinnati!!!
 
Honey121 Sunday, 21 November 2010
Yeah why the worst vacation?
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Yum! Spaghetti is my favorite food! I would totally eat it everyday if I could!!! Uhm.. I'm confused.. Why would it be the worst Vacation?
 
WordLover Tuesday, 19 April 2011
Chik-Fil-A, ha! I remember I went to the South for camp, and I didn't even know what that was. ALl the kids looked at me like I was crazy!
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
hah. 80 degrees? Hot? Oh heck no. Here its 90 in september.
Sega Parks Tuesday, 19 April 2011
haha this is based off of my high school life :)
 
WordLover Tuesday, 19 April 2011
For little freshmen, these girls sure act crazy. In my school,they'd be the typical freshmen we call "posers," lol. Even some juniors and seniors at my school are not this bad. I repeat, some.
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Lol :)
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
"We have your ally at bay! Hahahahahahahaha!"
Haha, that made me laugh :)
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
NO! I want her and Carter! Stupid Marcus! I'm not going to let you get in the way of Carter and Savannah! Grr!
 
Honey121 Sunday, 21 November 2010
Hahaha she thought he was going to say something nice! That's what she thought right?
 
Honey121 Sunday, 21 November 2010
Lol first she will hug her, kiss her,love her,and then kill her haha I like that!
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Okay. Savannah is being officially retarded,
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Aw!! How sweet :)
Sega Parks Friday, 12 March 2010
what you didn't like him? lol
 
Carter Bridges Friday, 12 March 2010
Whoa... I guess I change all opinions of him... :)
 
WordLover Tuesday, 19 April 2011
I'm liking the interacial relationship! Many authors wouldn't go for that. The same goes for television!
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Yum. Orange Chicken is tasty :) YAY! Carter, and Savannah are super cute :)
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Hey! I have a super hero shirt from Wal-Mart! It's pretty epic :)
Sega Parks Friday, 12 March 2010
haha I added that character just to make fun. Everyone has a "Dexter" at their school
 
Carter Bridges Friday, 12 March 2010
Why do they hate Dexter so much??? Won't they ever get along???
 
aimee0027 Wednesday, 10 July 2013
Loved it! But so confused as to which book is next!
 
Honey121 Monday, 22 November 2010
I love it!!!!! My fav book on worthyofpublishing :D
Jasmine Wood Tuesday, 4 May 2010
You have to continue Paramount! I love it! (:
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Aw! Yay! So cute! Perfect ending :)

"It's not the dress tat makes he look beautiful, it's her that makes the dress look beautiful." I LOVE that. :)

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