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Arizona Skies

 
Penelope Thursday, 27 March 2014
Very well written story!
 
LumosTimelord Sunday, 17 March 2013
Really liking it! Can't wait to read the next chapters :)
 
AlexM Thursday, 24 January 2013
Very good.
Sunaynap Tuesday, 12 July 2011
Great opening details!
 
Andy Schwarzenbach Thursday, 16 June 2011
This book is amazing! I am so reading it all! (: Your detail is excellent..I wish I could write as well as you do.
 
♥Darkly Brilliant Friday, 10 June 2011
Well honestly, I LOVE it. Great detail.
 
Mary-Annalee DiGiovanni Friday, 24 December 2010
interesting so far..if i woudl make anny suggestions, it woudl be to reduce the frequency of adverbs and adjectives in some of your sentences...your description is nice, but comparisons and metaphors can do that same thing without sounding overdescriptive and like you're trying to put too much into a sentence....i hope that makes sense...it only seems to be in a few places, but i think it woudl be smoother with similies rather than just adjective after adjective in a sentence.
 
BeckyAmber Friday, 26 November 2010
Wow. this is amazing. Theres lots of detail but not too much
 
SJohnston Friday, 1 October 2010
wow.... so reading on :D
 
nachocamacho Tuesday, 31 August 2010
I love the detail you put into this. :) It's amazing.
 
Amy Long Saturday, 28 August 2010
Wow. This is really detailed :) I like it x
 
sweetpea Sunday, 13 June 2010
i love the way you write it's incredible(:
please read/rate my book if you have a chance. i'd love to hear you're opinion
Jave E. Wednesday, 26 May 2010
Amazing. This is the first chapter I've read, and usually I read a few more before I comment, but I had to stop here and just say you have an incredibly eloquent way of writing. I am truly impressed, and I feel like I'm reading something that deserves to be in a best-seller's list.

I do hafta say however, this beginning does remind me of another book, one that I won't insult your work by mentioning =P But you did promise no vampires, right???

But once again, great job so far! I look forward to what this book has in store for the reader.

And if you'd like, can you look over some of my works as well? It'd be greatly appreciated!
 
Tasha Ivey Tuesday, 6 April 2010
It seems like everyone agrees...your descriptions are amazing! I have to ask; does it come naturally or do you keep your nose in the thesaurus? I'd love to know your secret! Really detailed descripion is so important! Great!
 
A.E. Eidem Wednesday, 24 March 2010
Just started reading. Wow amazing description! Maybe you could give me feedback on one of my books if any of them interest you :) Thanks, luv your writing style
 
SydneyFaith Friday, 12 March 2010
Great start, im definitely favoriting it :)

Maybe you could check out my book?
Some feedback would be great! :)
 
littlemisswriter123 Monday, 15 February 2010
love this!!!!!!!!
 
Carpe_diem Friday, 12 February 2010
AMAZING BEGINING! :D
Love it :)
Can't wait to read more!
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 9 February 2010
Dude, I love your writing style! You describe things very nicely!
If you have time could you check out my book Snow Globe?
 
Adorkable Tuesday, 9 February 2010
Dude, I love your writing style! You describe things very nicely!
If you have time could you check out my book Snow Globe?
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
WONDERFUL!! I feel like i'm in the backseat seeing this all unfold! Wonderful! i would totally buy this!!
 
Avalon Maya. Monday, 25 January 2010
Wow. This is AMAZING!!! Please keep it up!
 
Mira Rose Friday, 25 December 2009
I love your descriptions - I would definitely buy the book just because of your writing style. I've always loved Arizona - so beautiful. My dad's actually there while I'm in Ohio.

Adding to my favorites. Merry Christmas, by the way. :)
 
cute4eva Thursday, 24 December 2009
I'll definetly but this book!!! It is really good and your description is far from boring ... :)
 
adfkjhjklfds Tuesday, 22 December 2009
I really love this =) I adore the name Aurora, and I've added this to my favorites =) Please keep writing!
~Mag
 
stormy no-one Saturday, 19 December 2009
Aha! I love it! First off, the characters are believable, and you've caught my interest. Maybe it's because I lived in Phoenix for two years, and EVERYTHING you described is the same! Aw... I miss it. You brought me back(:

The writing is awesome. I love your choice of adjectives and descriptions. It's not overly 'out-there,' so I can understand it (because my vocabulary is particularly boring), but it really adds meaning to the text. I'm definitely reading on, and I'll comment on the next few chapters later(:
::Kat::
Isabella Darcy Wednesday, 9 December 2009
Thank you! I'll post more soon, promise :)
 
AS Wednesday, 9 December 2009
I love your detail, and description of this beautiful piece of work!!!!! Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!! Write more please!!!
 
PeterT Wednesday, 17 February 2016
Very well written. It definitely has the "I am in the skin of the character" feel to it. Looking forward to reading your future work.
 
Capitalletters Friday, 9 July 2010
This is really well written. Writing has obviously been an avid interest of yours since you were really young, I’m guessing correct, right?
Anyway, I’m adding this to my favourites and I’m giving you 5 stars!
Well done and keep it up.
Mind reading mine? : )
 
Alissa Ryan Tuesday, 13 April 2010
I agree, you're great at description. Do you usually use a thesaurus or is your vocabulary just big? ;)
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Love it.
 
Carpe_diem Friday, 12 February 2010
WOW!!!!
This is really well written! I love your writing style , you have really got talent :D 6/5 stars!
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
OMG*JAW DROPS*
SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
LoveStoryGirlxx Sunday, 3 January 2010
This is realllllllyyy good so far =D
 
yellow-pages Thursday, 24 December 2009
i love this! can't wait for more!!!!! =3
 
stormy no-one Thursday, 24 December 2009
mmmm... jalapenos....
Gosh I can really relate to Aurora. I love to draw too. The one difference though, is that I loved living in Arizona.
I really like how you show the reader what the characters are like, instead of just telling us. Like when you said that Aurora's grandma had hawk eyes, and that she was too proud to ask.
Okay, I'll keep reading now(:
•peace•
 
cute4eva Thursday, 24 December 2009
i bet the ... wats-his-name ... and her fall 4 each other :D
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Hmm, frank is putting the moves on her :p
 
Carpe_diem Friday, 12 February 2010
Awww! This is sooo good! I will definetly be coming back to read more!
Please check out Rosaline? thanx :P
 
cute4eva Thursday, 24 December 2009
... or does she fall 4 him? :o
 
j9a9s900 Thursday, 27 September 2012
This is really good! It pulled me in as soon as I read the first chapter! I'm on chapter four currently.
 
Me&mioThing Wednesday, 23 March 2011
Hahahahaha. Nachocamacho. I agreee. Thats kinda strange. lol.
Mary J. A. Gould Thursday, 13 January 2011
This is very good writing. I enjoyed your descriptions of the desert scenery, and your set-up of your characters. The dialog was good as well, and it moved along. It's not awkward anywhere and reads well. I think you should have this published as youth fiction. Good job.
 
GoAskAlice Monday, 20 December 2010
I really enjoy your writing style. It's really interesting, and the description is so over-the-top in a wonderful, paints the perfect picture kind of way. It's very well written, and needs very little improvement!
P.S. I like the Carrot-top ;) He's my kind of badass!
 
OliviaJAYx Thursday, 2 September 2010
LOOOOL I completely agree with Sidney + Nachocomacho! Ohh and great writing btw, you have some serious skills.
 
nachocamacho Tuesday, 31 August 2010
Someones creepin on Granny??
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
What an ASS! But you can already tell they will be together, I can feel it man.
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
What an ASS! I would have punched him in the face xD. Whats his problem?
 
littlemisswriter123 Monday, 15 February 2010
they r soooooo gonna end up together o.o i can feel it. lol, but at the moment, he's a jerk in my eyes
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
Eeew. I hate boys that smoke. and i dont like to use the word hate....whats that tell ya?? P.S. I hope she doesnt end up with Aubrey. He's a jerk. Frank is wayyy better. Amd plus, it's kinda gross that he was (kinda) hitting on her grandma......teehee. that just makes me laugh typing it.....hitting on her grandma....tee hee.
 
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 26 January 2010
What a jerk!!
 
LoveStoryGirlxx Sunday, 3 January 2010
I agree with yellw-pages lol
 
yellow-pages Thursday, 24 December 2009
what a jerk! but they'll probably fall in love lol!!!!!
 
cute4eva Thursday, 24 December 2009
i agree with blackrose ... i think they'r gonna end up 2gether ... :) they'd make a nice couple
 
CookieMonsterAteMyCookie Thursday, 17 December 2009
i guess aubrey is going to end up with her...btw AWESOME!!!
 
Me&mioThing Wednesday, 23 March 2011
I agree with SydneyFaith. Really really good. Definitely reading on. (:
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Um this person that commented before me is kinda mean..but anyways, nice chapter :) seems to me like aubrey is playing hard to get!
 
K. Hanson Sunday, 7 February 2010
I'm starting to wonder if all you sweet teenage girls go to the same school and have the same Lit assignments? You all write well, but the details of character personalities almost inevitably turn out the same. Do you all take art classes together too?

So far the reason I like your book is because it is set in familiar territory. I live in AZ. The desert heat is described exactly as it is, so I gather that you, too, have had the experience. lol.

Great spelling and grammar, for which I thank you wholeheartedly!!! I would be proud to be acknowledged as your teacher, were I so honored.

Kick in a whole lot of imagination, and you have a winner here. :)
Isabella Darcy Friday, 25 December 2009
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I really appreciate everything :D
 
stormy no-one Thursday, 24 December 2009
Hmmm... I like Frank, but I'm not sure about Aubrey. The poor guy is probably under some delusion that Aurora's grandma made about her.
Anyway, yeah, your grammar is great which I REALLY love!
The only thing that caught my eye was that 'dad,' and the days of the week should be capitalized, but that's only because I OCD over editing. Awesome!
•peace•
 
cute4eva Thursday, 24 December 2009
hmm ... i really like aubery ... he sounds like sum1 fit :) ... and i have 2 say this whole thing sounds a very Twilighty ...
 
adfkjhjklfds Tuesday, 22 December 2009
I agree 100% with everything Sarah Dylan said =)
 
Sarah Dylan Sunday, 20 December 2009
Ok. I'm going to be completely frank with you.

I love this. Very, very, very much. It's so vivid, and it's really encapsulating as well! I LOVE the main character, very likeable, very believable. Your grammar is perfect, I found no typos.
I did think it would perhaps work better in the past tense. But on the other hand the present tense in no way interrupts the realness of this book, so it's not a big issue, just preference. Also not many books are written in the present, so it's original.
The end of this chapter, I though, was a little Twilightish. Not hugely, but i always try to find references and stuff on this site because so many users are Twi-hard teen girls!
But yeah, overall, I'm thoroughly loving this book! You'd better keep going, and I will continue reading on tomorrow! (Or tonight if I have time!)

Sarah Dylan
 
CookieMonsterAteMyCookie Thursday, 17 December 2009
AWESOME!!! I like Aubrey better...
 
AS Thursday, 10 December 2009
OOOOOOOOOOOOH sounds great really interesting, what is that guys problem!!! I love it though!!!!!!!!!
 
SJohnston Friday, 1 October 2010
i love Aubrey haha i know i shouldn't but i'm a sucker for bad boys :)
 
OliviaJAYx Thursday, 2 September 2010
ew. If this turns out to be another 'Nice guy (Frank) loses out to the douche bag of the season, and his heart gets broken because she falls in love with Audrey' I will shoot myself in the face :)
 
nachocamacho Tuesday, 31 August 2010
My school has 4000 people. :) I live in Texas though.
 
Amy Long Saturday, 28 August 2010
Even though Aubrey is an ass.... I kinda like him lol
love the story :)
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Omg, why is he being so mean to her! AH, i cant stop reading. This is sooooo amazingggg. You're an awesome writer! Oh, and a comment on the chapter before that said they only had about 300 people at their school, me too! Actually, we have less than that in our entire high school. I live in a small town, but not in Arizona. Ohio :) heheh.
 
littlemisswriter123 Monday, 15 February 2010
ugh, i hope they DONT end up together!!!!! i hate him!!!! he's such an ass!!!!!!!!! but i love the story :D
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
sooo great....ahh...i coild read on for ages......
 
LoveStoryGirlxx Sunday, 3 January 2010
an*
 
LoveStoryGirlxx Sunday, 3 January 2010
i know aubrey's such as ass lol
 
yellow-pages Thursday, 24 December 2009
i don't like him at all! what a jerk!!!! aww but Frank is so sweet!!!!
 
stormy no-one Thursday, 24 December 2009
grrrrrrr... he deserved that slap.
I laughed at the part that said the stove was Grandma' Lindsey's constant post. I know what you mean; my mom is always there.
 
cute4eva Thursday, 24 December 2009
frank likes her ... sooooo obvious ... and i cant help it but aubery and aurora seem like thier made for each other! (he's name is even better than fraaaanks!! lawl)
 
Sarah Dylan Thursday, 24 December 2009
Again very good. I could see everything perfectly. I will definitley keep reading. What I love about this book is how nothing really needs to happen in a chapter at all and yet still I'm captivated by your writing. Genius!
 
F.L.LAURAINE Wednesday, 27 July 2011
very good youve got talent i have enjoyed it so far ill keep reading . please keep writing. your very good at it . please check out my bok im writing . its called riding north. its a western. it might make you laugh at least . please let me know what you think and please keep writing i enjoy your very good work. you should go professional .
 
SJohnston Friday, 1 October 2010
they are so cute together
 
Sophie Dime Friday, 21 May 2010
honestly.. so far, i read 7 chapters non-stop... i love this story! its so vivid in my head.. its like i could see a movie out of it while im reading!
Care to read mine?
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Hes not a vampire? Whoa then what is he? Ah, i love this story I cant stop reading!!
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Hes not a vampire? Whoa then what is he? Ah, i love this story I cant stop reading!!
 
littlemisswriter123 Monday, 15 February 2010
ok so, he's not THAT bad... but he's still kinda cocky.
BUT AT LEAST THERE'S NO VAMPIRES!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!! im kinda sick of those
 
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 26 January 2010
Yay no vampires!!!!
 
Sarah Dylan Saturday, 26 December 2009
Still loving it...

and... I have to say...

I LOVED the Bob Dylan reference! I always give him a reference in most of my works since I'm completely obsessed with him, haha!
 
yellow-pages Thursday, 24 December 2009
i still don't like him......
Isabella Darcy Thursday, 24 December 2009
He is very human :D No vampires at all, promise. I'm not a fan of the Twilight thing.
 
cute4eva Thursday, 24 December 2009
he isn't human is he? :D
 
CookieMonsterAteMyCookie Thursday, 17 December 2009
LOL
 
AS Friday, 11 December 2009
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! DON'T leave it hanging......
(wailing, banging her hands on the table)
 
nachocamacho Tuesday, 31 August 2010
No wonder she was so pissed that he was smoking.
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
I almost cried when she was thinking about her mom!!
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
SO GREAT!
 
AS Saturday, 12 December 2009
LOVE IT!!!!!
 
Abby Vandiver Wednesday, 18 July 2012
Thought I had commented on this. Guess not. Your descriptions are excellent although you do use them more than once (apricot sky) and everyone seems to be rolling their eyes all the time. I enjoyed the story very much. Love the names in here (Au-ro-ra)lol. Very good job. I see why this is so popular.
 
OliviaJAYx Thursday, 2 September 2010
how comes the nice guys never win ;( aka frank !!
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
haha, i think im in love with aubrey. hes got that dark bad boy, yet sensitive vibe going on.
 
Black Whispers Thursday, 28 January 2010
omg...awesomeness =D
 
Sarah Dylan Saturday, 26 December 2009
Still very good and very addictive. Vivid, obsessive and yet skilful. One thing I will say though, is that this is kind of a weak structure. It seems like not nearly enough is going on in each chapter and that your writing could be a lot more filled out, a lot more succulent and rich. Perhaps more description of what's happening and such, of different facial expressions and things. I don't know, but whatever comes naturally to you. When you get round to your final write up (which I hope you do as I would LOVE to see this book published in bookshops!) you could perhaps indulge a bit more in construct and beefing it up? that's just a little note to make this book even more fantastic!
 
writer Thursday, 24 December 2009
well i defiantly <3 aubrey X10
Isabella Darcy Thursday, 17 December 2009
Lol, thanks
 
CookieMonsterAteMyCookie Thursday, 17 December 2009
Aubrey I HEART YOU..... jk....AMAZING
 
AS Sunday, 13 December 2009
OH NO!!! I want to know more!!!! Love it!!!
 
OliviaJAYx Thursday, 2 September 2010
;D
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
omg hes so mean! he thinks that "a kiss is just a kiss". no way!
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
So great. I laugh at her personality! She's adorable!!
 
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 26 January 2010
Wow. This was amazing!!!
 
LoveStoryGirlxx Sunday, 3 January 2010
i agree with Sarah this chapter was Awesome!!!!!! =D
 
Sarah Dylan Saturday, 26 December 2009
Wow, I loved this chapter!
 
CookieMonsterAteMyCookie Thursday, 17 December 2009
hilarious!
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Aw, poor Aubrey :( :( :(
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
WOWW! SHORT, BUT SO IMPORTANT!
 
AS Tuesday, 15 December 2009
WOW!!!! POWERFUL!!! WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN?!!!
kerehxO Saturday, 1 January 2011
Im sorry but i cant help but think about twilight when i read this. Yeah its good and everything but aurora is bella, emma is jess, frank is mike, aubrey is edward. Mrs kudrow is mr molana and that chinese girl you were on about is angela and the boy that you said was handy with a camera is Sorry but it reminds me quite a bit:/
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
wellllll....i cant get ENOUUUGGGGHHH!
 
AS Tuesday, 15 December 2009
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!, you always leave it hanging at the best bits!!!!
 
Me&mioThing Wednesday, 23 March 2011
Hahaha. I agree with Brianna. (: Love love love your story.
 
Brianna Tuesday, 23 November 2010
ignore the person below...i think youre story is freaking incredible and very well written!

(and i think she got the name wrong? whos fred? does she mean frank?)
LadyKitkat101 Saturday, 13 November 2010
i read the first 13 chapters of this story and I will be brutally honest about my opinion so be warned.

Pros:
Good description- it really makes me want to go to Arizona. I live somewhere very far away so this takes me on a journey setting-wise
pretty good writing style
you ease into the story nicely

Cons:
I feel like you use "blush" in every other paragraph. Aurora is always blushing and it annoys me at times

Keep in mind how much I read, but so far I must say I have an incredible hate for this Aubrey guy. What's even worse is that Aurora is falling for him!She's a naive character who doesn't realize that he'll evenutally move on from her.

Aurora is kind of a Mary Sue. She reminds me of Twilight. She's this pretty, hot girl that Aubrey would say he could commit to and break up with his girlfriend. Need i mention Fred? She's also really naive and this annoys me.

In the beginning of the first few chapters, I hate how you always start with her getting ready in the morning. You describe how her eyelashes were unclumped, and her hair in a messy ponytail with brown hair. I think you need to ease up on the main characters looks.

I haven't read what happens in the rest of the story, but I really do hope it goes somewhere. So far the ENTIRE things is about love. Meg writes her a letter and includes who she has a crush on. Her grandma asks her about Fred. Her best friend asks her who she likes. Come on, she's in Arizona!!! There has to be more than a whole story centered around love.
 
OliviaJAYx Thursday, 2 September 2010
MMM, THIS BOOK IS FAST BECOMING MY FAVOURITE<3
 
bookaholic93 Friday, 16 July 2010
This book is absolutely amazing i just love it when i can feel the chemistry rising between aurora and aubrey wow you are an amzing writer
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Aw :(
 
littlemisswriter123 Monday, 15 February 2010
ok, ok... I LOVE HIM NOW!!!!!!!!
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
i agree 100 percent with hollie. i cant stand people whose grammer sucks....lol. stupid me. haha.
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
Aww I feel really sorry for Aubrey! Him and Rora would be soo cute together. Lol you are an amazing writer and I love that you use correct grammar! xx
 
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 26 January 2010
This is super sweet. I love him when he is being the super sweet guy.
 
Sarah Dylan Sunday, 27 December 2009
Hmm... I kind of preferred it when he was a cocky arse-hole, like he is for the majority of this chapter. But still, very good! But perhaps there's a deeper reason why he didn't like her? I like the reason you chose, but I think if it would also have something to do with Lindsey?
 
yellow-pages Friday, 25 December 2009
aww, okay now i like him!!!!!!!
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
awwwww he is so sweeet!!!
Isabella Darcy Tuesday, 15 December 2009
Thank you :) I'm trying to write it out first and then post the chapters two at a time. I'm glad you like it! :)
 
AS Tuesday, 15 December 2009
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! MAN I JUST LOVE THIS!!!
 
SJohnston Friday, 1 October 2010
...Oh
My
....GOD
 
OliviaJAYx Thursday, 2 September 2010
OMIGOD. ;D
 
nachocamacho Tuesday, 31 August 2010
:)
 
Sophie Dime Friday, 21 May 2010
best chapter.. i loved it!!!
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
That was sooo close! Thank god he got out, talk about awkward moment with grandma lindsey.
 
littlemisswriter123 Monday, 15 February 2010
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
Lol me too this book is so awesome! x
 
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 26 January 2010
Haha i agree with Sarah Dylan. This has to be my fav chapter, and the present tense isnt even noticable anymore.
 
Sarah Dylan Sunday, 27 December 2009
OK, this is now my official favourite chapter. VERY good. And you know what, the present tense works really well. I don't even notice it any more. I love this book!
 
AS Wednesday, 16 December 2009
GOB-SMACKING!!!!
 
Eli Saturday, 4 December 2010
Wether you subconsciously know it or not this has the basic concept of twilight, simple as that and i think you know it too. :(
 
Brianna Tuesday, 23 November 2010
i think i died with the "hello, beautiful"...idk why, i just did =)
 
sweetpea Monday, 14 June 2010
EEEKK! i cant get enough(:
 
Brittanythewriter Tuesday, 11 May 2010
I agree with slap now that they put it that way! I never thought of it that way lol
Awesome none the less
Five stars all the way :)
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
Really good. But so far i kinda think... now i know people will disagree, but those who have read twilight, it's kinda like that, like the whole luch scene with the "he's too good for them" and the whole partners thing with dance and sitting by him in science and how frank likes her like how mike likes bella...., but thats just me, but i think it's still so great!!!
 
Sarah Dylan Sunday, 27 December 2009
Still very good. I'm going to keep reading later...
 
stormy no-one Friday, 25 December 2009
I dunno... I think she forgave him a little to easily. Also, it's just me, but I can't stand cockiness or haughty attitudes. Grrr... Aurora.

Apart from the brilliant story, the grammar isn't too bad, but sometimes there's just a little typo or punctuation mishap, but that's normal. Also, I'm not sure, but I think mica is mineral, not rock. Just pointing that out(:
•peace•
 
nachocamacho Tuesday, 31 August 2010
Mona Arizona
Haha when Hannah Montana first came out my friends and I had one called Mona Arizona :)
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
SlapHappy: he probably knew they wanted to see the gallery because why else would Aubrey have taken a guest to that man's house?
 
SlapHappy Tuesday, 9 February 2010
Kinda weird how he knew that since Aubrey brought his girlfriend here that he wanted to show her the gallery...Has he done that with his girlfriends before??
 
Sarah Dylan Sunday, 27 December 2009
Very intriguing...
 
Brittanythewriter Tuesday, 11 May 2010
I love this chap once again to cute :)
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Ah, he can paint! & Cooties! hehe.
 
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 26 January 2010
Naww! He can paint?? How amazing! I love Mona,,, she makes me laugh. so cute, still believing in Cooties! Lol.
 
adfkjhjklfds Friday, 25 December 2009
This chapter is really cute =)
 
AS Wednesday, 16 December 2009
Amazing!!!!!
 
Me&mioThing Wednesday, 23 March 2011
I agree with Slaphappy. He does kinda remind me of him. lol
Ashley Beth Sunday, 9 January 2011
So... they were in the gallery all day? 'cause at the beginning of the last chapter they were having breakfast and then they went straight to the gallery.

I like this book so far... I know you don't want to hear it, but it's very similar to the Twilight layout (minus the vampires, of course). I have to say, though, that this is much better than anything that woman could ever write, so no worries.
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
dude frank needs to get over her, and go out with that one chick that likes him because Aubrey & Aurora were meant to be :)
 
littlemisswriter123 Tuesday, 16 February 2010
i agree w/ SlapHappy, but they should def. be together. now she just has 2 break it 2 frank...
 
SlapHappy Wednesday, 10 February 2010
awww. okay, i take it back, she should be with aubrey...but for some strange reason her kinda reminds me of jackson off of flight 21 down....weird....but soo great, words cannot express!!! I try to comment on every chapter but i just get so absorbed in the story i forget....sorry......
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
awwww ... they'r soooo cuuuuuute!!!! and mone is really sweet ... :)
 
AS Wednesday, 16 December 2009
WOW!!!!!!!!!!
 
GoAskAlice Tuesday, 21 December 2010
My grandmother would've kicked my ass all the way to Kindomcome. . . but I can understand where Aurora's coming from, being upset about her mom and all.
 
OliviaJAYx Thursday, 2 September 2010
Eh, I think she has every right to slap her. If I talked to my grandmother like that lord knows i'd be getting more than a polite slap.
 
sweetpea Monday, 14 June 2010
i agree with the girl below.
i hate lindsey now too.

LOVE this!
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
What a bitch! I hate lindsey now, she has no right to slap aurora. geez.
 
littlemisswriter123 Tuesday, 16 February 2010
oh, i thought she was gonna tell fred and HE was gonna explode but this... is different
 
SlapHappy Wednesday, 10 February 2010
OH MY.........
 
SJohnston Friday, 1 October 2010
haha sydneyfaith :)
 
nachocamacho Tuesday, 31 August 2010
Hahaha good play Sydney
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
If lindsey says they cant be together, im going to punch her in the face. Yes, i am going to do the impossible and punch a fictional character in the face.
 
SlapHappy Wednesday, 10 February 2010
I KNOW, HOLLIE. ME TOO!!!!!
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
Aww I hope so I really want them to be together. I'm such a hopeless romantic! xx
 
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 26 January 2010
Isnt that always how it works?? lol
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
Hmmm ... I wander what Frank means about Aubery ... I guess it's gonna b sumthing really bad and she'll be shocked ... but then they'll get 2gether again ...
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Thank God!
 
SlapHappy Wednesday, 10 February 2010
AWWW HOWWW SWWWEEETTTT....LINDSEY IS FINALLY SEEING THE ERROR OF HER WAYS
 
AS Thursday, 17 December 2009
AWWWWWWW!!!!!! FRANK!!!! I love this though!!!!
 
OliviaJAYx Thursday, 2 September 2010
I FEEL BAD FOR FRANK <3 POOR GUY.
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Why is she trying to hide her and Aubrey's relationship? Thats not right..
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
Hehe Frank is too sweet =]
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Ohmygosh, that wasnt good at all. But I think Frank has got the idea now.
 
SlapHappy Friday, 12 February 2010
OMGossshhh!!! ILY!
 
Meme Monday, 21 December 2009
Oh my god! Why did you stop?!
Write sooooon1 Please!
 
sarah jessica Saturday, 12 June 2010
omg i love this book. read it all up to hear... lol i love how everyones is all ahhhhhhhhhhhhh and then sarah dylan is like Oh no she didn't... oh dear...
but a totally worth and ahhhhh omg!! cuz i love it :)
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
OMG! Total shocker!
 
littlemisswriter123 Tuesday, 16 February 2010
AAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
SlapHappy Friday, 12 February 2010
ohhh woowwww.......
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!x
 
Sarah Dylan Sunday, 27 December 2009
Oh no she didn't... oh dear...
 
yellow-pages Friday, 25 December 2009
naww!!!!!!!! how sweet! but poor Frank!
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
awwwww ... :)
 
Meme Monday, 21 December 2009
OH MY GOD! AAAAH!
 
BeanieGirl123 Monday, 25 February 2013
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BEST BOOK ON THE WHOLE WEBSITE!!!
 
OliviaJAYx Thursday, 2 September 2010
grrhrhrfgthrhrthtrsharefafvdgmjhgfchtfg. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh LOVEEE<3
 
Brittanythewriter Tuesday, 11 May 2010
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW........................ THATS SO CUTE :)
Love it":):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):)):):):):):
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Awwwwww :) I love you too Aubrey! Ahh!
 
littlemisswriter123 Tuesday, 16 February 2010
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
SlapHappy Saturday, 13 February 2010
OMMMMGGG!!!
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
YAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! Ooooh I am soo happy 4 her! x
 
adfkjhjklfds Thursday, 7 January 2010
I really love this =) PLEASE add more soon!!!!!
~Mag
 
Brianna Tuesday, 5 January 2010
OH MY GOD PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE REALLY REALLY REALLY QUICKLY!!!! THIS IS AHMAZING!!!!!! I LOVEEEEE ITT!!!!!!!!!!!
 
AS Thursday, 31 December 2009
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! DON'T STOP!!!!
 
Rissa Lynn Tuesday, 29 December 2009
This is Awzome please write more.
 
Sarah Dylan Sunday, 27 December 2009
Nice place to finish for now, but I really hope you'll be posting more. I'm hooked now. Please post more soon? This, I think, is my favourite book on he site. The only one that I've persevered with on my own accord. So you'd better write more soon, wouldn't want to disappoint the fans, would we?
 
adfkjhjklfds Friday, 25 December 2009
Loved this! =) Please add more soon!!!!!!!!!!! =)
 
yellow-pages Friday, 25 December 2009
yay!!!!!!!!!! this is soooooo amazing!!!! please add more!!!
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
wow!!!! u soooooooo have 2 write more!!!!! this is definetly worth buying and im glad it got recommended ... plz plz plz plz plz write at least 1 more chapter b4 xmas ...
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
wow!!!! u soooooooo have 2 write more!!!!! this is definetly worth buying and im glad it got recommended ... plz plz plz plz plz write at least 1 more chapter b4 xmas ...
 
Tuesday Tuesday, 4 September 2012
So imuture. They are all acting like little kids!
 
Me&mioThing Wednesday, 23 March 2011
Wow. THEIR mature. Not.
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Why is frank turning everyone against aurora? just because she doesnt want to be with him, hes such a child. and why is emma acting like that? shes just as immature as frank..
 
littlemisswriter123 Tuesday, 16 February 2010
ouch. harsh. i agree w/ SlapHappy
 
SlapHappy Saturday, 13 February 2010
Okay, what is Frank? He's acting like a kindergartner!!! Seriously, he needs to grow up, sure he's hurt, but they weren't meant to be....
 
adfkjhjklfds Sunday, 10 January 2010
AWWW, poor Aurora =(
 
Rissa Lynn Sunday, 10 January 2010
Ouch pore Aurora. And you have to love Aubrey!! Please add more:)
 
AS Sunday, 10 January 2010
Finally, AWWWWWWW!!! I feel so sorry for her!!!
 
Meme Saturday, 9 January 2010
Awww... that's not nice. She doesn't deserve that.
More soon please?
 
yellow-pages Saturday, 9 January 2010
aww, thats sad! but i love Aubrey!!! ahh! hes great!!
Sunnysideup Sunday, 22 April 2012
Aurora led Frank on just like Bella lead Jacob on (Twilight reference) he has a right to be pissed. Great story but needs a bit more substance. The chapters are short and grammar could use some touching up. Has potential :)
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
I hate the people that think they know Aubrey's life. Why dont they just leave him alone? hes happy with aurora and thats how its going to be. if emma doesnt like it, too bad.
 
Adorkable Wednesday, 10 February 2010
This is so sad. And to think I thought Emma was cool. Well shes not. Jerkface.
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
This is soooo unfair! Emma should listen to her! grrrrrr xx
 
yellow-pages Sunday, 10 January 2010
i completely agree with cute4eva!!! so sad!
 
cute4eva Sunday, 10 January 2010
they'r so mean!!!!! i hope aubery and her stay 2gether no matter wat!!!!!
 
AS Sunday, 10 January 2010
OH NO!!!!!
 
Ka hona Sunday, 27 January 2013
plz plz plz do a sequel
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Ugh, i really hope that Krissy doesn't mess things up for Aubrey and Aurora. Its so sad because stuff like this happens everyday, where people get all jealous of cute couples and turn against them until they finally have to break up!
 
littlemisswriter123 Tuesday, 16 February 2010
aha!!!!!!! u sure showed that bitch!!!! but about her friends, if they were her real friends, they'd b by her side no matter who she likes and wouldnt let a little thing like difference get between them! they r all acting like such children!!!!! but i dont think jimmy deserved her yelling at him, he was trying 2 b kind
 
Adorkable Wednesday, 10 February 2010
I agree with Brianna and Kaisa. There not real friends. There being jerks.
 
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 26 January 2010
I agree with Brianna. If They were really Aurora's friends, they wouldnt care who she likes, and they would care for her.
 
cute4eva Monday, 11 January 2010
MORE!!!!
 
Brianna Monday, 11 January 2010
YAYYYY!!!!! you added morE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i feel so bad for aurora! she doesnt deserve to lose everyone! if they were really her friends, then they would be supportive of who she likes and who she wants to date. they shouldn't give her the silent treatment! although i think she shouldnt have yelled at jimmy....
anyway please please please please add more!!! i cant wait!!
 
AS Monday, 11 January 2010
WOWO!!!!!! I feel sooooooooooo sorry for her, but in a way Aubrey is right!!! Love it!!!
 
itzah c. kret Monday, 11 January 2010
great!! cant wait fer more!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Meme Sunday, 10 January 2010
Yay! You added more! :)
 
Meme Sunday, 10 January 2010
Yay! You added more! :)
 
Rissa Lynn Sunday, 10 January 2010
Another great chapter thanks for adding:)
 
Sparkled*Crypt Wednesday, 16 February 2011
Beautiful story!!
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
SOOO romantic! I wanna a boyfriend like Aubrey!! :(
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
That was amazing!!!!! xx
 
writer Wednesday, 13 January 2010
WHAO!!! this was sooooooo good! i cant wait fer the next chapter!
 
writer Wednesday, 13 January 2010
WHAO!!! this was sooooooo good! i cant wait fer the next chapter!
 
Meme Wednesday, 13 January 2010
They are soooooooooooooooooooooo cute together :)
 
yellow-pages Monday, 11 January 2010
*girlie squee* hes sooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!! awww!!!!!!!
 
cute4eva Monday, 11 January 2010
one word 4 that - WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
write more soooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!
 
Brianna Monday, 11 January 2010
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS SOOOO BEAUTIFULL!!!!!! EEEEEK!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!
 
Rissa Lynn Monday, 11 January 2010
Aww that's sweet.
 
AS Monday, 11 January 2010
SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
 
Me&mioThing Wednesday, 23 March 2011
Hey forget you guys! Brittany and Midnight Moon...HE IS MINE! lol
 
Brittanythewriter Tuesday, 11 May 2010
Awwwwww..... Once again I love this chap. Oh Midnight Moon : He's mine :) I called him first lol

Brittany
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
Awww :) Aubrey is such a sweetheart!
 
Midnight Moon ♥ Sunday, 24 January 2010
Awwwwwwwww! Grrr. Aubrey is now mine.... (puppy eyes)Please? lol It's so good. Tell me you are writting more?
 
Meme Tuesday, 19 January 2010
Awwww! That is so cute!
 
itzah c. kret Tuesday, 19 January 2010
whoa! he is sooo amazing!
 
AS Tuesday, 19 January 2010
AAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH DANG BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
yellow-pages Monday, 18 January 2010
NAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW!! OMG! how sweet!!!!!!!!
 
cute4eva Monday, 18 January 2010
awww sweet!! yh he really DOES luv her :) write more soon :)
 
Brianna Monday, 18 January 2010
AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE REALLY LOVES HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Andy2.1 Sunday, 21 March 2010
I meant to give it a five star rating. I love it!
 
SydneyFaith Sunday, 14 March 2010
OMG they were soooo close!
 
Adorkable Wednesday, 10 February 2010
Wowzers... this is amazing. Awesome work!!! I <3 it!!! :) :)
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
Need I say more than these lot? Lol your book is sooo awesome xx
 
itzah c. kret Thursday, 28 January 2010
wow! good chapter!
 
Brianna Wednesday, 27 January 2010
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! EEEKKKKKK!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!
 
yellow-pages Wednesday, 27 January 2010
ahh! add more! this is so amazing!!!!!!!!! awesome!!!
 
AS Wednesday, 27 January 2010
WOW!!!!!!!! You honestly can't get better!!!
 
AS Wednesday, 27 January 2010
WOW!!!!!!!! You honestly can't get better!!!
 
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 26 January 2010
This is amazing, Isabella! Please write more!!! I am totally addicted!
 
yellow-pages Thursday, 28 January 2010
i can't stop smiling!!!!!!! so beautiful!!!!!!!! love it!!!
 
Avalon Maya. Wednesday, 27 January 2010
That is so beautiful! Gorgeous!
 
Rissa Lynn Wednesday, 27 January 2010
Yay you updated and it's awzome as always!
 
Brianna Wednesday, 27 January 2010
YAYYYY!!!! THAT IS SOOO CUTEE!!!!! THEY ARE PERFECT TOGETHER!!! EEK!!! THANKSS FOR UPDATING SO SOON!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!
 
SydneyFaith Monday, 15 March 2010
Finally Emma came to her senses.
 
Adorkable Wednesday, 10 February 2010
hahaha this is adorable :) yay Emma's not a jerk anymore... haha Aubrey is such a darling :) <3
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
Awwww this is so perfect!!
 
yellow-pages Saturday, 30 January 2010
nawwwww!! yeah! im so happy!!!! love it!!!!
 
Avalon Maya. Saturday, 30 January 2010
Haha what a sweetie!!! I love him!
 
SydneyFaith Monday, 15 March 2010
Aubrey's tattoo. Yum :)
 
Brianna Sunday, 31 January 2010
i like that her and emma are friends again even if they arent what they used to me...anyway! please add moree soon!!
 
yellow-pages Sunday, 31 January 2010
hmm, i think it's nice her and Emma are friends again, but i miss Aubrey!!!!!! lol!! but really! add more soon i love it!!!!!!
 
Meme Sunday, 31 January 2010
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!
Her and Aubery are so cute together :)
 
Avalon Maya. Saturday, 30 January 2010
Aw that sucks!! I feel like Emma is up to something,,, like only talking to her about Aubrey for Frank.,,, I dunno.
 
SydneyFaith Monday, 15 March 2010
haha, that was crazy! talk about awkward. i even felt awkward just reading about it. its like one of those private conversations that you feel bad for reading because you want to give the characters their privacy! haha.
 
Adorkable Wednesday, 10 February 2010
"I do want to have sex with you!" lol that made me laugh. :P I don't know why... haha :)
 
LoveStoryGirlxx Monday, 1 February 2010
i agree with yellow-pages...Awesome so far =D
 
yellow-pages Monday, 1 February 2010
umm, yeah, that really was a bombshell! lol! i can't wait to see what happens!!!!!
 
SydneyFaith Monday, 15 March 2010
Hahahahaha, that's hilarious. But seriously, I mean how embarrassed would you be at a time like that!
 
littlemisswriter123 Wednesday, 17 February 2010
wow, that bitch had it coming. HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!! but i wonder what happened w/ aubrey
 
Brianna Monday, 1 February 2010
AWWW whats gonna happen with aubrey! i miss him already! and leanne definitely got what was coming to her...
 
Meme Monday, 1 February 2010
That was funny! I like it!
 
yellow-pages Monday, 1 February 2010
Yeah seriously, Leanne was trying wayyyyy to hard to rub the relationship in Aurora's face. But she got what was coming for her, so it's all good i suppose, lol!! but i still miss Aubrey!!! add more please!!!!!!!
 
Avalon Maya. Sunday, 31 January 2010
Haha that made me lol,,, Leanne is a strange one.
 
C.A.M Sunday, 31 January 2010
I love you now. You post almost everyday! Please keep going!
 
SydneyFaith Monday, 15 March 2010
Aww, how romantic :)
 
Alexei Zarya Saturday, 6 February 2010
good book. goodluck.
 
Brianna Wednesday, 3 February 2010
EEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKK! THANK GOD HES BACKK!!!! EEEPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Rissa Lynn Wednesday, 3 February 2010
Lol amazing as always!
 
yellow-pages Wednesday, 3 February 2010
I want him too!!! Yay!!! I'm happy now!!! Aubrey is back!!!!!
 
Avalon Maya. Tuesday, 2 February 2010
Naww,,,, I want him!!!!
 
Cass Friday, 23 July 2010
Aw. I loved this story. It was beautifully written and your characters were so relatable and likeable. GREAT WORK!!! :]
 
bookaholic93 Saturday, 17 July 2010
Omg post real soon i just absolutely love this book!!!!!
 
mallorymist Wednesday, 14 July 2010
This is great so far! It isn't moving too fast or too slow and you add just the right amount of mystery to Aubrey that's makes me wan't to read more. I can't wait to find out what his big secret is and I hope you update real soon!

p.s., If you have time, could you check out my book, MIND GAMES, and tell me what you think? I'd really appreciate it!
 
Danielle Nicole Wednesday, 14 July 2010
I read it all the way through...!! But then there wasn't another chapter...*pouts*!! I really did like it...Aubrey is so sweet but Frank...idk...I like Aubrey!! Update soon!! Hurry and post!!
emily8116 Saturday, 10 July 2010
HI i love your book
check mine out?
grey wolf lake
 
Brianna Tuesday, 6 July 2010
Please please please post more! its been forever!!
 
Brittanythewriter Saturday, 3 July 2010
Love it
 
Denajah <3 Friday, 2 July 2010
I stayed up all night reading this! When are you going to post more?!
 
Denajah <3 Friday, 2 July 2010
I stayed up all night reading this! When are you going to post more?!
 
Love2Read Monday, 28 June 2010
When are you going to post more?!?!?!
 
SamGirl974 Sunday, 27 June 2010
I've stayed up until 1:00 am to read the whole book, and it's not even done! But this is a really awesome book, it was easy getting hooked on it!! =]
 
sarah jessica Saturday, 12 June 2010
omg i'm like addicted to this book. i read it all up to here!! i wanna kno more!!!!!!!!!!!!! please post more soon!!!!!!
 
something Thursday, 3 June 2010
I need more. Everday I check my favorites to see if you added anything. But to no avail.
 
Sophie Dime Saturday, 22 May 2010
please post more.. its addictive and i have to know whats gonna happen.
 
kk_45 Monday, 17 May 2010
when r u going to post more???
 
Brittanythewriter Wednesday, 12 May 2010
Post more Please
 
kk_45 Sunday, 9 May 2010
please post more and soon!!!!!!!!!!!
 
SydneyFaith Friday, 23 April 2010
You haven't posted anything in a REALLY long time..I want to read more! You're going to lose the interest of your readers if you don't start writing more..
 
SydneyFaith Monday, 15 March 2010
Omgggg, i cant wait to read more!!
juarez91 Saturday, 13 March 2010
i love it! cant wait for more :)
 
littlemisswriter123 Wednesday, 17 February 2010
leanne is a MAJOR BEEYOTCH!!!!!!!!
and emma's not 2 nice at the moment either
 
Sammie Raine Tuesday, 16 February 2010
Amazingly written.
I love all the detail.
I don't think the 'group' are such great friends.
Probably because of it being such a small town, but still.
Update soon. :]
 
AS Sunday, 14 February 2010
OH MY GOSH I AM SOOOOOO STUPID!!! I haven't checked it out, it's awesome amazing like always.
 
Adorkable Wednesday, 10 February 2010
Ugh... i changed my mind. Emma is a jerkface again.
 
yellow-pages Sunday, 7 February 2010
i hate Leanne!
and i'm not really that fond of Emma at the moment either!
awesome chap! add more soon!
 
Avalon Maya. Saturday, 6 February 2010
Haha. Leanne is such an annoying biatch. lol
Isabella Darcy Saturday, 6 February 2010
Haha, thanks so much for commenting. I really appreciate it :D
 
Hollie Black Saturday, 6 February 2010
Lol.
 
Wendy.C Wednesday, 24 November 2010
WHAT?!?!?!?!?!!!?!?!!!!
 
SJohnston Friday, 8 October 2010
Urg,
 
Daphne G Friday, 24 September 2010
Aurora and Aubrey are like a match made in heaven.
This story is incredible
Update!!!
 
nachocamacho Wednesday, 1 September 2010
Damnit. :/ I like Aubrey wayyyyyy better. Frank is a jerk. Well if I was her I would choose Aubrey. :)
 
Jessy* Monday, 23 August 2010
Aww she has to go with Aubrey! it should be, like the law or something!! Yhis is reall good!!
 
Denajah <3 Tuesday, 10 August 2010
Imma kill her, IMMA KILL HER!! >=( I WILL KILL HER!! SHE CANT LEAVE AUBREY!! I WILL HURT HER! NO NO NO, IT WONT BE THE SAME!! AUBREY IS THE ONLY GUY THAT THE MAIN CHARACTER FALLS IN LOVE WITH, THAT I ACTUALLY LIKE!! CORRECTION: I ACTUALLY LOVE!! NOOOOOOOOO, SHE CAN'T END UP WITH FRANK!! I HATE FRANK, HE WAS ACTING LIKE A TEENAGE GIRL ON PMS!! TEAM AUBREY FOREVER!! <3 <3
 
TheSunshineStealer Sunday, 8 August 2010
awww, please go with Aubrey! He's like her soulmate! :)
 
Adorkable Friday, 6 August 2010
Aubrey. Is. Better. End of story.
 
637974 Tuesday, 3 August 2010
OMG If she ends up dating Frank I will freaking kill you!
AUBREY FOREVER!
 
Avalon Maya. Sunday, 1 August 2010
i like Aubrey!!!!!! :)
 
Danielle Nicole Saturday, 31 July 2010
NOOOOOOOOOOO!! Aubrey is the right choice...he was there for her...most of the times...whenever her friends weren't and when Frank was being selfish to her. It's your story though, and I still love it. Update soon!!
 
Cass Friday, 30 July 2010
Somtimes that happens, its possible to fall for two people...but you always love one more than the other ;)
 
something Friday, 30 July 2010
I've been waiting forever! Checking my favorites everyday. And it comes to this. NOT. FRANK.
 
i.c.u Monday, 26 July 2010
NOOOO OMG NOOO D:
not frank, please not frank, pleas...his nice and all but aubrey.. AUBREY MAKES THIS SHIT! lmaooo
I so AGREE with As! going with frank is just so... boring... D:
I LOVE IT BY THE WAY, YOU ARE AMAZING!
 
AS Monday, 26 July 2010
I agree with Brianna, Aubrey all the way, Frank feels a little selfish, and shady to me, and Aubrey is AWESOME!!!! YAY for updating finally!!!!
 
Rosie J. Monday, 26 July 2010
I love this story so much and I'm so glad you posted more! Please don't leave us waiting as long as you did last time, the suspense was killing me.
Mind checking my book out? Thanks.
p.s. love that you've brought Frank back into it!
 
Brianna Monday, 26 July 2010
NOOOOOOOOOOOOONOOOOOOOOO NOOOOOOOOOONOOOOOOOOOONOOOOOOOOOOONOOOOOOOO NOT FRANK! hahahaha
thanks for putting more up! i was so excited!
 
SJohnston Monday, 15 November 2010
BLOODY FRANK! she just wanted to be friends again and he SCREWED IT ALL UP!
 
nachocamacho Monday, 15 November 2010
Noooooo! I bet that was Aubrey! :/ I really like Aubreyyy! ://

Thanks for updating by the way! :)
 
LoveStoryGirlxx Tuesday, 30 November 2010
An awesome chapter as usual. Just remember you have to spell God with a capital G else it's grammatically wrong.
juarez91 Wednesday, 24 November 2010
frank is a JERK!
 
SJohnston Tuesday, 16 November 2010
stupid fucking frank! i love Aubrey
 
shelby 123 Tuesday, 16 November 2010
amazing!!! i have been waitng for this! please add more soon. :)
 
CM Velez Tuesday, 16 November 2010
Ah, I've been waiting for you to write some more in this!:) Great like always!
 
Denajah <3 Saturday, 13 August 2016
wonderful.
 
oldhulagirl Friday, 20 June 2014
This book is so true to how it is with real life relationships - men & women having embarassing moments, indecision, time to laugh, and making up kisses. I highly recommend this book! Please continue Aubrey & Aurora's story!
 
cduncan123 Friday, 19 April 2013
Best book on here! Please write more!!!!!!
 
JulzFM Tuesday, 26 March 2013
Your story was so good, definitely one of the best on here. I really loved it.
 
Koti Friday, 12 October 2012
Omg my story is also based in ARIZONA! GOOD jobbbb! keep it up.
 
nicole :) Tuesday, 26 June 2012

Hey! I would really appreciate it if you guys checked out my story. It is called Contagious and it is basically a romance but it definitely has action, suspense and drama. If you guys do read it I would appreciate if you rate and comment! Want me to read one of your books? Just leave a comment with the title or just message me! Thanks and keep on writing! (Loved this story!!)
 
Erica Brown Monday, 21 May 2012
I've really enjoyed reading your book, you are a very talented writer. The whole thing flowed well and I just kept reading on. Wish it had been longer.
 
MiseryRose Wednesday, 11 April 2012
Awww!!!! Is this the ending? I really liked it. (:
 
toddball Tuesday, 22 November 2011
Well done- well hopefully not DONE ;) We want more!
Tahani Monday, 7 November 2011
I freaking cried when I read this book. People were STARING at me like I was crazy. This is all your fault! And I loved every bit of it. :P
 
Sahar Thursday, 14 April 2011
This can't be the end... THIS CAN'T BE THE FREAKING END!! POST MORE!!
 
Sahar Thursday, 14 April 2011
This can't be the end... THIS CAN'T BE THE FREAKING END!! POST MORE!!
 
MiseryRose Sunday, 10 April 2011
Love it! Love it! Love it! LOVE IT! I canot tell you how much I love it. Is this the end of the story? Please tell me its not. You are an Amazing writer! You NEED to get this published cuz I want it on my bookshelf.
 
Salamandear Saturday, 26 March 2011
This Is One Of My Fave Books On Here:) Anyone wanna read my book love&War
 
sharky_29 Wednesday, 23 February 2011
I started reading this yesterday, and had to stop when it was time for bed. Was really looking forward to getting home from work to finish it. I really enjoyed it, then when i got to around chapter 39-40 where she was saying she realised she wanted Frank and not Aubrey, i thought oh no, this has totally ruined it for me, but it was saved by her realising she did want Aubrey afterall. Good work.
 
Sparkled*Crypt Wednesday, 16 February 2011
This is one of the best books on here! I can't wait to read more!!!
Ashley Beth Sunday, 9 January 2011
I have to say, this is much better than many other books on this site. Your descriptions, like everyone else said, are very good. (Descriptions for me are next to impossible to get right, so kudos on that). Good job, I'll be watching for an update.
 
C.A.M Wednesday, 5 January 2011
This is nothing like Twilight. The only reason that some people see similarities is because Stephanie Meyer, as well as many new writers, use a character base. That means that there is one protaganist (aurora-bella) that is around the same age and gender as the readers, so that they can relate. There is one more Protaganist (edward-aubrey), the one that the main protaganist falls for. Danger, seems to be what every teen girl wants, so the lines are skewed for this character. Is he a protaganist or antagonist? That starts a plot.
Now, there has to be an antagonist. Someone who threatens the relationship. That would be Mike/Charlie, a nice, friendly, cute boy who builds the jealousy in edward/aubrey. The rest of the characters are not important whatsoever. Who cares if they are similar.
Just ask yourself, is the story line, setting, theme, anything, the same as Twilight? This book isnt even supernatural!
M.R. Sunday, 2 January 2011
This is beautiful. The imagery and dialogue is simply amazing. And I think its pretty interesting that all of the people who see it as nothing more than a second Twilight haven't displayed any of THEIR work for us to critique...haha just sayin'.
Melanie Robinson Sunday, 2 January 2011
I waited until I was finished reading before I commented and I must say - I absolutely loved it! I know I probably sound sad, but I soo loved living vicariously through Aurora. I really, really, really hope this isn't the end. Pleeeeease add more :3 <3 x
 
Denajah <3 Saturday, 1 January 2011
I'm sorry; but Twilight doesn't deserve to be compared to this novel. No way. This book is simply amazing. I've reread it so many times, and I've fallen in love with the characters. The writing is superb! I can't find a single flaw. - Please don't let this be the end. You update so rarely, yet I check back daily. You're one of my favorite writers on here. Excellent work. :)
A.N.D Monday, 20 December 2010
You really need to write more, i love this book!
 
toocheaptobuybooks Thursday, 9 December 2010
please tell me this isn't the end! PLEASE ! (:
 
Salamandear Wednesday, 8 December 2010
I LOVE THIS BOOK!!!!!
 
Brianna Sunday, 28 November 2010
this book is so amazing!!! thank you for finally updating! i love this book!
 
TheSunshineStealer Saturday, 20 November 2010
Okay, officially addicted! Update soon please, I need my fix! :L This is amazing, they are so cute together! I'm so glad she chose Aubrey :D
 
Cass Saturday, 20 November 2010
I'm glad you finally updated because I love this story! <3
 
637974 Thursday, 18 November 2010
AWWW...
 
AS Thursday, 18 November 2010
FABTANSTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
SJohnston Wednesday, 17 November 2010
awwww thank you aubrey!
 
nachocamacho Wednesday, 17 November 2010
Awww sooo sweettt! I really wana meet his Mom now. :) she's probably crazy or something but I'm excited to see what she's like. This is a really good chapter. :D I'm glad they didn't break up cuz they're an adorable couple.

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