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Divine Amity

 
Hannah Michelle Thursday, 14 January 2010
I LLLOOOVVVEEE this. It has such an intresting plot and a lot of promise, when r u posting another chapter??!?!?!?
 
China Roses Thursday, 7 January 2010
Okay there are some mistakes i.e. Their is spelled wrong and Me and my pack should be My pack and I. Now thank you forn writing something wherevampires are evil! I hate books like twilight so this is a treasure among many books. But I am not normally for this type of book anyways, but good job!
 
China Roses Thursday, 7 January 2010
Okay there are some mistakes i.e. Their is spelled wrong and Me and my pack should be My pack and I. Now thank you forn writing something wherevampires are evil! I hate books like twilight so this is a treasure among many books. But I am not normally for this type of book anyways, but good job!
 
yellow-pages Thursday, 7 January 2010
wow! i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
εxpırεd Wednesday, 6 January 2010
I read this a while ago. Congrats on getting featured. ;)
Breeze Saturday, 26 December 2009
I happen to be out of a cpu at the moment so I won't be able to post anything no time soon. Hopefully after February I'll be able to add more when my cpu situation is handled. In the mean time I'll be writing free hand so when my laptop is fixed I can add pretty much the rest of this book and the second one. So to my few readers please stand by. Next year I will be back in business.
Thank you so much.
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
the girl is sorani? ... just guessing :D
BTW aweosme book :)
 
L.J Fallen Tuesday, 17 November 2009
I like this start. Attention grabbing and well written. There were a couple of lines that needed tidying up but over all very nicely written. I will add this to my favourites so I can remember to read more when I have the time.

Could you read/rate my book? I've only got the one at the moment so just click on my name.

 
No H.D. Tuesday, 17 November 2009
Aw, that is so sad that both of them lost thier parents.
But I do like this. When I say I was literally tierd of vampire/wolf books I could jump off a bridge lol. But when I picked yours to read I had no idea it was about them. Your plot is different and I'm curious to know what happens next. I'm looking forward to reading this book. Keep up the good work.
 
Lollie Monday, 19 October 2009
Great plot. I'm really looking forward to reading more.

I agree with C.J. Sinclair, the sentences are sometimes clumsy, but thats all that I picked up while reading.

Could you check out my story and tell me what you think?
 
AnnmarieM Friday, 28 August 2009
It's a good start :) It flows quite nicely, and lots of description. The plots sounds quite interesting as well. However, I advise maybe a little bit more into how he's feeling when he's just found out that his dad has died? I dunno, I just felt that his reaction to that wasn't quite strong enough.

Anyway, good job!

P.S Could you read my story 'Cold Water' as well? thanks
 
C.J. Sinclair Thursday, 27 August 2009
I have only read the prologue, but I like the way the story is headed. Some of the sentences are a bit clumsy though, but a good round of editing should clear that up. In all it is a good effort and you should definately continue writing.
CXheers Cam.
 
Sarah Dylan Thursday, 27 August 2009
Wow, I wasn't expecting the whole vampires/werewolves scenario! It's good, written quite professionally!
 
adfkjhjklfds Wednesday, 26 August 2009
I really like your writing style, and the plot sounds pretty cool :D I like it. Please post more soon!
**If you want a preface, you can label it as chapter 0, and then name it "preface". That's what I did.
~Mag

PS. Could you read (and rate) my story, Trial and Trust? Thanks!
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
wow!! i just finished reading this chapter now ... and it is reaaaaally good :)
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
OMG!!!!!!! it IS sorani!! coz sorani's best friend is dating sum1 called andrew ... u know i skimmed thru this page just 2 find it ... i haven't read the chapter yet ... im going now ... lol :)
 
No H.D. Tuesday, 17 November 2009
I'm still reading :).
 
SlapHappy Saturday, 16 January 2010
great.
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
she IS the key!!! that's y she feel like those lot r her family!! yay!! i guessed it ryt 4rm the beginning!! :)
 
L.J Fallen Wednesday, 18 November 2009
The writing needs to be tidied up but so far I'm really enjoying the story.
 
No H.D. Tuesday, 17 November 2009
This is intense, you need this published. I'm reading along and all the while falling more in love with this book. I haven't even began uploading my book because I'm too busy reeading yours lol.
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
awww he's so sweeeeeeet!!! i really hope they stay 2gether :)
 
L.J Fallen Wednesday, 18 November 2009
I hope you add more, I'd like to keep reading. I'm curious to see where this is going and looking forward to when she starts hanging with the werewolves.
 
Lollie Sunday, 15 November 2009
I am loving this story!!!
 
No H.D. Friday, 20 November 2009
I like Ian, he is so sexy. His character is like a breathe of fresh air in a book. LOL! I can'y wait to read the next chapter.
 
yellow-pages Thursday, 7 January 2010
aww so sad!!!!!!!!!!
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
noooooo ... mayb he got hurt ... wat about that note ... nooooooo!!!! and this book is really good - not crappy!!
Breeze Saturday, 21 November 2009
I want to thank the three of you for reading my book. LOL! You three are like the only one's reading it. But I wanted to shed some light on this chapter. Page is her younger sister who went missing and her dad died in a car accident when she was 8. I know you guys were wondering who the heck Page, so I had to tell you. I summerized this story alot, so hopefully if I ever get it published, I will be able to add all the details.
Thank you again to No H.D. Lollie and L.J Fallen for taking the time out to read my crappy book :).
 
No H.D. Friday, 20 November 2009
OMG! :O, no Ian! No! Why!? LOL! I literally almost cried right there. I was glad you made her tirant short instead of dragging it out like others do. I fyou would have I would be crying right now. I hope you add more soon. I wana hear his explination.
 
L.J Fallen Thursday, 19 November 2009
Oh, sad! I await your next chapter:)
 
Lollie Wednesday, 18 November 2009
Awww thats so sad!
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
where is he?
 
No H.D. Friday, 20 November 2009
That was kind of weird, but I liked it.
 
yellow-pages Thursday, 7 January 2010
*gasp* omg!!! nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! why?!?!??!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????????????????!!
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ... HOW COULD YOU??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!! im crying here ... how could u - i officialy h8 u now! (onli joking) ... but how could u ... and poor rayne ... her sister, page and now torian ... Ian is so sweeeeeet ... like a dream guy!! :'(
 
No H.D. Friday, 20 November 2009
(Gasps and holds chest) OMG! No! i liked Ian! Breeze, how could you :(. So who does she get to keep now. Aw, I'm heart broken. Poorb Rayne.
 
yellow-pages Thursday, 7 January 2010
Torian's mom and dad are evil!!!! those jerks!!!! and i totally agree with No H. D. i hope arell gets hit by a bus!!!!
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
torian and arell are so crueeeeel!! arell is probably the most evil person on earth to exist!!! i swear im crying my eyes out here! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
 
No H.D. Friday, 20 November 2009
(Gasps and holds chest once more) Torian's mom is cruel. Arell needs her head chopped off! That hating winch.
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
that is so HEARTBREAKING!!!! i swear to god!!!!!! (massive sob)
Breeze Friday, 20 November 2009
I'm so sorry about that L.J Fallen. Taylor was Torian's original name, I just changed it. My book is already typed up, I just copy and paste. Ii should have pre-read it first. I'll make sure i di from now on. But thank you so much for your comments and even taking the time out to read this. I will post more soon.
 
L.J Fallen Friday, 20 November 2009
Hang on a minute!!!! Wasn't his name Torian? Now it's Taylor? A little confusing.
But anyways up to this point Ohh so sad:( It's cool she could see his spirit though and say goodbye.
 
No H.D. Friday, 20 November 2009
Intense, intense, intense! This book is amazing! I'm really loving it! I can't wait to read more!
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
those 'dogs' were the pack right? that's y they were fighting 2 protect her ...
 
L.J Fallen Friday, 20 November 2009
ooh! Looking forward to the next chapters.
 
No H.D. Friday, 20 November 2009
WoW! You have excellent decription skills. I like how you wrote this. It leaves you in the dark and gives away little info as to what is going on. You feel like your laying on the ground with her and afraid. This is really good!
 
Raquel Marin Tuesday, 9 February 2010
hurry!!!! add more!!!! lolz
 
Lara Sunday, 17 January 2010
WOW, i love this ! :) update soon!
LKW
 
Raquel Marin Monday, 11 January 2010
O my gosh! I love it! Add more soon!

Oh if you don't mind..can u read my book? Please? Thanks!
Rissa Lynn Sunday, 10 January 2010
Very good. Please add more:)
 
yellow-pages Thursday, 7 January 2010
amazing! and i love long chaps! ;) please please add more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
ToruLightStar Wednesday, 6 January 2010
Yay! it was kinda sad at first, then it was BRAVO! please, write more. (Or else) -_- Write... PLEASE! PlEASE WRITE MORE! I read all your chapters, amazeing!

PS: Please read "The Silver Dragon"
Thanx
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
this is soooooooooooooooooooo good!! i can beleive u haven't posted anything 4 fiiiiiive days!!! plz post more!!!!!!!!!!!!! im dying here ... literally
 
cute4eva Friday, 25 December 2009
the length is perfect ... actually i prefer long chapetrs :) ... and i knew it!!! again!! thay rrrr the pack ... i i bet kyle and ray fall 4 each other :)
 
Lollie Saturday, 21 November 2009
I disagree with No H.D. I like the length of the chapter, it gives more detail and explains the story. Grear additions and i'm looking forward to reading more.
 
L.J Fallen Friday, 20 November 2009
oooh. Hottie werewolves. Can't wait for more:)
 
No H.D. Friday, 20 November 2009
This chapter is quite long, but I had no problem getting through it because it is so interesting. I will keep myself posted for when you add more. When you get this published I'll be the first to purchase it :).
 
Raquel Marin Thursday, 22 April 2010
Dude! Hurry up! I'm dying here!!!! Add more soon!!!!!!!!!
 
L.J Fallen Friday, 16 April 2010
I didn't get notified for this chapter! I just checked incase more had been added and was pleased to see another chapter. Update soon.
 
dawn8279 Sunday, 28 March 2010
Great book I can't wait to read more.
 
dawn8279 Sunday, 28 March 2010
Great book I can't wait to read more.

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