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The Protectors

 
M.K. Adams Thursday, 10 March 2016
A bit on the long side for a single chapter (Or is that just me?), however there was some good world building here and it is an effective first chapter, well done.
 
Stephie Tuesday, 12 March 2013
I thought you really know how to write a good story and keep it up! If your intrested go and check out my story it's called My Feet. Tell me what you think.

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