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The Kolodyne Curse

 
P. Clifford Mills Monday, 18 February 2013
At the start, you describe the sun going down in cloudy skies. The sun is crimson, the hills are green. The hills gradually turn black, and then the stars come out. Wow. Exactly the same thing happens in Australia, where I live! The writing would grab us more at the beginning if it described something unique and special to your setting. We all love reading about the exotic. I'm sure you're capable of delivering that, SP Singh.

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