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Behind Closed Doors

Tuesday Monday, 15 October 2012
oh no....
Tuesday Monday, 15 October 2012
Leah sweetie... it's definitly not your fault
 
Drop By and See Him Thursday, 8 December 2011
I am your biggest fan EVER! Can you read my book Daddy's Love and rate it please?
 
Elena Hathaway Monday, 29 August 2011
Oh my god, this is so sad! She hnestly believes it's her fault? What the f? I'm only n the 2nd chapter here and I want to murder the dad. Grr.
 
Bec Starlight Wednesday, 27 July 2011
This is so heartbreaking. I hate the way some people find it okay to be that horrible to another person, especially a child.
 
Drop By and See Him Thursday, 8 December 2011
and users and abusers!
 
Capitalletters Tuesday, 3 May 2011
Hey, our books have the same title!!
That's why I just HAD to read this book..and you don't disappoint...Amazing!
Love the narrative voice and you have so much talent..
And practically no grammar or spelling mistakes!
Well done :)
Mind reading mine?
 
Capitalletters Tuesday, 3 May 2011
Hey, our books have the same title!!
That's why I just HAD to read this book..and you don't disappoint...Amazing!
Love the narrative voice and you have so much talent..
And practically no grammar or spelling mistakes!
Well done :)
Mind reading mine?
 
A.L. Cakes BloodBasin Friday, 24 August 2012
This is a really great book. I thought that her attitude is very realistic, I can relate to the character in the book. Just make sure you read over your work. Sometimes you use the wrong form of some words. Like when you used 'hear' it was supposed to be 'here.' Also, you used your when it was supposed to be you're.
Otherwise, this is very well written. I added it to my favorites. :)
Auty Tuesday, 3 May 2011
Thank you! Have read yours think its really good! xx
 
Bec Starlight Wednesday, 27 July 2011
I'm trying so hard to not have a massive rant about this father >.<
Audrey... Wednesday, 18 January 2012
Oh no, no no no. I tolerated the dad until now but suddenly he disgusts me. He shouldn't have the rights to be considered a father. Ugh. This is so well written that it makes everyone hate the dad xD I like how you made it so the little girl doesn't blame him at all... It gives some sort of a sad twist.
 
chaseyourdreams<3<3 Thursday, 5 May 2011
The only problem i notice is, beer is not spelled bear, that is as in the animal!!! otherwise, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this book! it's amaziiinggg!
Auty Friday, 6 May 2011
thank you very much! sorry bout the beer thing, typing very fast so might have a few mistakes!xx
Acey Thursday, 17 May 2012
this awesome sounds interesting i may just read it!
 
Plainbrowneyedgirl Thursday, 16 June 2011
i love her teacher, i really do.
LeLe Sunday, 28 January 2018
I literally cried reading this, it get really emotional knowing she has nobody to trust and it is a reality for some across the world. A great story well done
Snowie Saturday, 22 June 2013
Keep up the good work!
 
Alice McKenna Tuesday, 16 October 2012
Why do you write about this? It's good, but I just don't get it. Why would you want to write it?
 
Dee Ebron Thursday, 22 December 2011
OMG , THIS STORY MADE ME A LITTLE TEARY EYE'D . AMAZING STORY ! ! !
 
Tami Aldway Thursday, 7 July 2011
This was a very emotional storyline, but could definitely use some grammatical editing. Suggestion: make the reader feel what she feels. Don't hold back on details about the hunger. It reminds me of the story A Child Called It. Great job!
 
Secrets. Saturday, 25 June 2011
Wow this is awesome. This actually made me cry, and that's pretty hard to do. Keep writing, I would love to read more:) oh, and if you get the chance, would you mind reading my stories? Thanks. btw, i'm 13 too.
Auty Sunday, 19 June 2011
Thank you :) xx
 
Juliette LaBelle Monday, 13 June 2011
That was something else. I liked it and felt disgusted at the same time. You expressed her torment and dispair very well.

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