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!!!Hellz Yeah!!!
Tuesday, 21 August 2012
I Love Jude but, I LOVE Haden the most :) Keep on writting it's the best. Hey! I would really appreciate it if you guys checked out my story. It is called Contagious and it is basically a romance but it definitely has action, suspense and drama. If you guys do read it I would appreciate if you rate and comment! Want me to read one of your books? Just leave a comment with the title or just message me! Thanks and keep on writing! :)(Love the choice of charaters btw!!)
i love Jude's eyes! lol Mac, Hayden, and Jude are my faves :P
C.C Phoenixx
Friday, 15 April 2011
I'm not really sure who that is && I got that pic from Weheartit. (:
Sahar
Friday, 15 April 2011
who is that really? where did you get that picture?
hahaha i like mac,hayden bear,and jude
blues ok,monroe which also spelled as munro seems strange and looks ok
blues ok,monroe which also spelled as munro seems strange and looks ok
Karla<3
Wednesday, 6 April 2011
I must agree with Electropop...Mac's definitely a cutie(;I like more of preppy types, so I think Blue's pretty good looking, too<3
P.S. I love Jude's whiskers!
&& One more thing: JUDE IS SO NAWT GONNA DYE HIS HAIR, RIGHT? RIGHT?! I think I might cry if he does. Please don't do it Claire! D:
aww, cute. except, now I have more of a crush on Mac, picture-wise, anyway :3
She looks freakin' MINT! XD LOVE the hair. :P
C.C Phoenixx
Wednesday, 30 March 2011
Calm ur nipsss Maya(: It'll all be explaineedddd sooon (;
whatever happened to Bam's half shaved head? other than that, it's just like I imagined her...
babygurljrl
Friday, 3 February 2012
Hi I think I found a spelling error in the line where it is talking about the Mom and her boyfriends it says "She was quiet pretty for her age" I am pretty sure you meant "She was QUITE pretty for her age"
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Agh, I JUST found this! I didn't even realize there was a sequal...:( Well, anyway, it's kick-ass just like the first so far.
YEAH! I love this!
haha shes awesome!!! i love the name ofthe sqeual!!!
POST SOON!!!!
POST SOON!!!!
upadate soon
Update like soon!
LOVE IT, post soon:)
love ittt! update soooon!!!
Love it!
I LOVE HAYDON!
Mistie_Rose
Sunday, 10 July 2011
No wonder Hayden is my favorite character, he reminds me of my friends. hahahaha
Cresil21
Sunday, 17 April 2011
Hayden is epic! (Once again.)
shreya my mom saw me laughing so hard she also thought i was high prob becuase i alsao had a peremnt marker next to me :P shes a strange mom *rolls eyes mentally*
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.... That was hilarious. I was laughing so hard, my mom thought I was high. lol,
I'm in love with this serise!! ahhhhhh write moreeeeeee:) please
I so want to do what Hayden did now! Except I'll have to find some Spongebob boxers...
lets hurry up with the chapters please
omg. I loved this chappy. Hayden is exactly what she needs in a best friend; I love him. <3.
hurry up I want to read more!!!!!!!! :)
OOOOH! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Hayden is awesome:) Please update soon!
cute :)
clairee
Wednesday, 12 September 2012
TEAM HAYDEN ! lol jk sorta buuuuuut, my name is Claire too!
More!
I <3 this book and the one before. Can't believe your only thirteen!!
ohhhwow. moooore :D
:)
I want more! and i want to know what happened with the last boyfriend! TELL!
I LOVE THIS! And yeah, agreeing with maddie bear!! ,3--how did he save her? Are we going to know? EEEK!!!!!!!!!!
OMG IM DYING TO KNOW!!!!
HOW DID HE SAVE HER!!!!!??????
IM LITTERLY ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT!!!!!
YOUR AMAZING!!!!
HOW DID HE SAVE HER!!!!!??????
IM LITTERLY ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT!!!!!
YOUR AMAZING!!!!
God, plz tell us how Jude saved her? I'm DYING here! AND YOU WOULD BE THE MURDERER! sorry I just really, really want to know, next chappie plz tell??
HA! Love it!
:)
This is great!
This is great!
Thats hilarious. Super hilarious. It's brilliant. XD
clairee
Wednesday, 12 September 2012
Two words... HAY-DEN. That is all.
Jude, don't hurt Bam. If you do, I will jump through this computer, and snap your neck with my bare hands... Love the book ;)
This is the best : )
these books are addictive...
Amazing. :) Simple as that. One thing; are these chapters shorter than the ones in the first one? 'Cause they seem shorter.
OMG so awesome!!! cant wait to read more!
POST MORE QUICK!!!!! I am dying of anxiety here. Seriously, I am.
I need more! :3
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oooh, I liked that chapter. mooooore :3
so good! but I hate her mum's boyfriend...
Steammmmeh. Hahaha!
LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think you mean sweeter, not sweater. sweaters are those fuzzy things that look slightly more dignified than sweatshirts.
POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS SERIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Things were a-steaming up there! =D I love this story so much. Seriously, lke everyone else is saying, post MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And, if you could tell me where her mom's ex-boyfriend is so I can go murder him, that'd be sweet too. =D =D ;D
And, if you could tell me where her mom's ex-boyfriend is so I can go murder him, that'd be sweet too. =D =D ;D
Lol that was HOT!!! Post more pronto please. Can't wait for more! And that was cute. He can call her by her first name. Her moms ex boyfriend however is a pervert and should be areested and put in jail. Please tell me he is.
POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am beggin' on my knees here (not really)! But really, post more!!!
awww, more :3
Update soon please.
Awh! How Cute!:) Post more!
ohh i love it... i liked her dream that was a cool part!!!! YOU ROCK!! :)
why do you make me love this so much? LOL this is the bestest :)
ahh, loved it (again). mooore x
THIS IS AMAZING! And yay, I'm the first comment on this chapter! -D Loving it, write more, "pwitty please!"
Aww that is so sweet....the text I mean :) Butt pirate? That's a good one, mind if I use it? ; P
I LOVE THE TEXT HE SENT HER UR A AWESOME CHICK!!!
I am a bam lover lol love it!! post more soon
I am a bam lover lol love it!! post more soon
LOVE THE LAST PART!:) Jude is a super super good actor! POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LMAO at that last part, it was so cute and sweet. And yeah, Jude is a good actor, though if you ask me he went a little overboard with the whole "guess who i scored" thing. My opinion only, but I loved this chapter! KEEP WRITING PRETTY PLEASE!|!!!
haha! love the last part
i always call one of my friends a butt pirate!......
i always call one of my friends a butt pirate!......
One of my favourite books on this site :) LOVE IT. Cant wait for more! x
Aw, that last part was cute :)
Wow, im surprised that all workes, I would have though they would have messed up sometime in that. But Jude is a good actor. Bam isnt though, and that's where i thought they were gonna mess up.
Amazing chapter though, Claire. :D
Amazing chapter though, Claire. :D
loveeeeeee!
ahh, this just gets better and better. more, once again. :D
p.s. yaaay, first comment :3
p.s. yaaay, first comment :3
ahh, this just gets better and better. more, once again. :D
p.s. yaaay, first comment :3
p.s. yaaay, first comment :3
They are so adorable together
awww the last part was cute! im on team jude and bam! forget team blue hes too ugh not letting them date!
aww, that chapter was especially amazing. I loved it, and I /love/ Jude. More :) x
loooooooooove it:)
This is so cute! I love this book so much! It is seriously got a permanent spot on My Favorites list, as well as the first one!
POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sahar
Wednesday, 13 April 2011
cute-sies! :P
Bahahaha. Nice Jude. LOL
love it. mooooooooore! <3
Cresil21
Sunday, 17 April 2011
I hope Monroe doesn't fall in love with Bam, like in every book like this a random guy appears (Monroe) and has the upper hand (lives with Bam) then gets between them (Jude&Bam) in the moment they have it worst(not being able to be together).
I am in love with Jude. Literally : D
I am in love with Jude. Literally : D
i love jude!!! post more im addicted!!
I love Jude :) POST MORE!
This is so addicting. Though Jude kind of brought it on himself. I still love ya, Jude! And Bammie too! POST MORE PWEASE!
Aww :)
awww jude-ie sad!! i love jude!!!!! and i agree with hear*me aswell she has been growing! amazing writer!
Awww... I feel so bad for Jude. I agree with Hear*Me, Im really starting to love the characters as if they are my own friends. With most books, the sequel ruins it, but I think with this one, its developing the characters and plot even better and we get to see a softer side of Jude. I love Bam so much too. Overall you're doing a great job with the book and Im so glad that you've been updating fast. I look forward to your updates soooo much everyday. Good job with the book, you really are an amazing writer!
Awww. So sweet. Poor Jude. I'm really liking how Bam is growing, just her character in general, you know? AMAZING WRITING!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
:(
Poor guy
Poor guy
Amazing!! I love how everything is coming along!! Your a great writer!!
this is awesome i love jude
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IN LOVE WITH THIS!!!!!!!!<3333
Come on, write more!!!!!! I'm begging here!!!!!!!
I love,love,love this book and Jude :) keep writing
Agreeing with Kalifornia Gurl here. Your book is amaaaaaaaazing, Hear*Me. This book and your's are two of the most amazing books on here. Love 'em. Mooore :)
Hear*me I have something 2 say 2 u. WHAT R U SMOKING????????????? ur book is F**king good! Is great! Its sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo not trash!
Oh, I love this! I totally agree with Kalifornia Gurl, too, I love Jude even more, now that he's showing his emotions more. You are a FLAWLESS WRITER!!!!!!
I don't know if you alreadey have or if I've asked you before, but if you could, pleeeeeeez check out my story, "Brotherly Love" though it's like trash compared to yours, but pleeez check it out anyway!
Oh, and POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't know if you alreadey have or if I've asked you before, but if you could, pleeeeeeez check out my story, "Brotherly Love" though it's like trash compared to yours, but pleeez check it out anyway!
Oh, and POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awh! I love Jude even more now! He's all emotional and stuff!! Its so so so cute. :DD Post more!
Poor Jude. He has so much going on in his life and Bam is soo great with him.
They ARE a awesome couple : )
They ARE a awesome couple : )
They're so cute :)
YAY!! i just looooooove this book!!!!! ahaha i hope things are better now:)
Tanya sounds fun to hang with. Another awesome chapter as expected from you. I love how your characters sound realistic and have emotions. Update soon!
*HANGS ON* ♥ TEAM CLAIREEEE!!! ♥
YAY!!!!!! I'm so happy this chapter came out finally!!!!!!!! Spectacular, as usual. WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yayyee!
You have to write more! This is the best.
This is sooo good!!!!!!!!!! POST MORE PLZ! and i'm so glad ur bak
C.C Phoenixx
Tuesday, 3 May 2011
Thanks everybody:D I really appreciate all your support <333
Yay!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next one! Glad you are back, we missed you!
same GreenMonkey2652 !
cant wait for the next one <33
cant wait for the next one <33
Glad ur bak! ^__^
I'm so happy your back XD I lovee your book.
GreenMonkey2652
Monday, 2 May 2011
I looked on my favorites list, saw there was another chapter posted, clicked on this, and was very dissapointedDX Finish the next chapter and post!!! And not a tease "chapter" this time:P (PS: YOUR BOOK BE AMAZING<333333)
Boom Baby! YOu're back and busy and that was a rather short chapter....but I loved it! That near-rape bit was really creepy...'s a good thing Jude was there.
You're back!!! This makes me happy! This was a great chapter.
Glad you're back :D You just made my day. Please post more as soon as reasonably possible.
As for the chapter itself, quite interesting. Glad to finally get a full explanation on the whole Roger story. And right now I'm just as curious as Bam as to why Jude came over that day.
As for the chapter itself, quite interesting. Glad to finally get a full explanation on the whole Roger story. And right now I'm just as curious as Bam as to why Jude came over that day.
Yay!!!!!! your back!!!!!!! im so excited for the next chapter. XD
I HAVE BEEN WAITING SO LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG AND I LOVED LOVED THIS CHAPTER DUDE U GOT 2 WRITE FASTER!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ AND I COMPLETELEY agree w/ Elena Hathaway! I love Jude! :DD I'm going 2 marry him! :)) <3 Luv it!
FINALLY, GIRL!!!!!!! I've been waiting so long!!!! And I loved this chapter! I am a-loving Jude even more. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Post more soon, pwetty pwetty pwease!!!!!!!!!!
Yay! You continued it! I am so glad you finally posted you should post more : D
Love the chapter :)
Love the chapter :)
this would be a really good way to end a book...you could call the next one 'The First Place' or maybe 'Time Flies Bye'
ohyay. nuuuu chapter xD
Yay yay yay! Another chapter. BTW, did you know yay is a palindrome. So is mom, dad, civic and racecar. Creepy right?
Anyhoo, loved the chapter and everything but it's pretty harsh of her mom, I wouldn't mind running away with Jude, but doesn't she have to do whats best for her?
I agree with maddie bear, that would be pretty cool-eth is that happened. : )
Anyhoo, loved the chapter and everything but it's pretty harsh of her mom, I wouldn't mind running away with Jude, but doesn't she have to do whats best for her?
I agree with maddie bear, that would be pretty cool-eth is that happened. : )
they shouldn't run away i think she should say no but like after a few days when he left and stuff shes sitting in class trying to raise her grades she won't stop thinking about him so after school packs her things and finds him! just a thought ;)
YAY! NUTHER CHAPTER! I loved this chapter, I hope they get to run away together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND YAY FOR SUMMER!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND YAY FOR SUMMER!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, sequel please please please! Title ideas: Fighting for Nothing, Time Ends Slowly, Running From Love (that sounds like it ought to be a rock song), Trippin' on Jude, and...ummm...that's it. Whatever title it is, PLEASE! WRITE A SEQUEL! AHHHH!
definitely a sequal!
E.Gaze
Saturday, 18 June 2011
I'd just like to say that when I first started reading this book I thought Monroe was going to be an important character??? What was his point in the story?JW! :)
Cresil21
Friday, 17 June 2011
Personally, they've fought for this relationship so they should end up together but everyone knows keeping the love of your life has a prize.
idc whatever you but dont end it yet and please dont kill jude ive seen three books where they've killed the guy and i dont wanna cry in this one :)
I just want to say that maybe something REALLY dramatic and horrifying should happen. Like I love ALL the characters, but maybe you should spice the story up a bit more and I dunno...add something different you know?
But whatever floats your boat...or starts your car, if you don't have a boat. : )
But whatever floats your boat...or starts your car, if you don't have a boat. : )
ok so yes i was sooo happy there was another chapter haha!! but its cool
i think you should keep it going lady!!....and then you you should do another book to.....please (=
i think you should keep it going lady!!....and then you you should do another book to.....please (=
C.C Phoenixx
Wednesday, 15 June 2011
Okay! I'm going to continue with this book, but I'm not going to give away what happens next, that wouldn't be FAIR! Hahaha, but all of you have great ideas and I'll take them all into consideration. Thank you, all of you, for supporting and reading my stories, you have no idea how much it means to me that you actually like this and want to keep reading:D Thank you, again!Yours truly <333
Claire xD
This is seriously one of my favorite books on here, and I love it too much for you to stop now. Seriously, if you DO stop now, I'll have to hunt you down and hurt you. You should definitley keep going.
Me personally, I want them to run away together, then run into some problems along the road. Maybe Blue comes after them and a whole shitload of chaos is erupted there. JUST KEEP WRITING AND I WON'T CARE!!! Seriously. Definitely continue with this one. -D
Me personally, I want them to run away together, then run into some problems along the road. Maybe Blue comes after them and a whole shitload of chaos is erupted there. JUST KEEP WRITING AND I WON'T CARE!!! Seriously. Definitely continue with this one. -D
I loved the first book and I loved this too. I think that you should continue and finish thier story with Jude leaving and Bam not going with him, but then she should leave to look for him. Then the guys should all panic and crazy stuff should happen where they look for them and then they end up accepting Jude and Bam's relationship and then leave it at that. I dont think you should strech it too much longer or do another sequel because well, you know how it is, sometimes you strech a book too long with sequels and stuff and then it ends up being a huge mess in the end. I really wouldnt want to see that with this book/ series because I love Jude and Bam's story sooo much. It would make me sad if it ended on a bad note. So I think that you should continue and not make that last chapter the last chapter of the book.
P.S. You totally had me excited. I was all omg, thats 2 updates in the span of 2 days, sweet! But then I saw that it was an A/N.
P.P.S. You have no idea how crazily I click the refresh button on my hotmail inbox everyday to see if there's a new update. I love this story sooo much!
P.S. You totally had me excited. I was all omg, thats 2 updates in the span of 2 days, sweet! But then I saw that it was an A/N.
P.P.S. You have no idea how crazily I click the refresh button on my hotmail inbox everyday to see if there's a new update. I love this story sooo much!
I thoroughly enjoyed this... although I would have to say that it should be longerrrrr! Too short man, not enough happened, especially compaired to the last one. I think that it would be a good ending... buuuuut i also think that it's too soon. So yeh. Whatever floats your boat to be honest. I'll be happy no matter what. :3
Hm...your chapters are getting shorter. Could this be foreshadowing for the end? God, I hope not. I want to see how Dash ends up being part of the story!
Poor Bam, I feel bad for her...she's so alone! And please post more extra super duper fast!!!!! -D
Poor Bam?! POOR ME! I WANT MORE YO! Plz
I agree with Kaisa Moore...poor, poor Bam.
*sigh* poor Bam
please write more soon :) thanks!
she's leaving jude!? no... =D
MORE PLEASE! But...in a sequel, perhaps. A goodbye note is always a really good way to end the book.
im in suspense here!!!
im in suspense here!!!
One word describes this chapter, MORE!
You HAVE to write more! I need to KNOW what happens : D
Ahh! I want more!:D
wo...
Holy... SHIT..
Mistie_Rose
Sunday, 10 July 2011
OOOOO! Good twist!
Ooooookay. Didn't see that coming. AND OMG POOR JUDE!!!!!!!!!
I feel so bad for him, and he is totally right about the others being selfish. YOU ARE AMAZING.
I feel so bad for him, and he is totally right about the others being selfish. YOU ARE AMAZING.
OMG he's gay? Wow, I didn't see that coming at all! I'm so obessed with this and I can't wait for more to come!
Cresil21
Wednesday, 22 June 2011
I'm amazed it doesn't surprise me.
damn thats all i got to say :O
VNJDKLBZVURBZHD! That was an unexpected twist yo! xD I am glad you continued on, it is worth it. :3 Ahhh HAyden! CRAZY! I totes wasnt expecting that. :) Which is the perfect thing to happen. xD
Keep it up. :3
Keep it up. :3
He's gay!:O I never expected that at all! Who is this mystery guy!:D Ahhh! More! More! More!:D
whoa whoa! haydens gay? i didn't know that i read it over thinking there were misstakes but nope! didn't see that one coming! (im not a homophobic btw)
Look at you, you're just on a roll, writing like crazy. Im so glad, now I get updates more often! This is cute and unexpected. I like Hayden's Pov and I have a feeling that he's going to be one of the people trying to find Bam and Jude and going against the rest of the guys because he's in love too. AWWWWWW.....
1kitten2
Monday, 16 April 2012
Shoot I thought it was cole was Hayden's other half :/
blue died?? ohmygosh..
When he said "at the airport" I was like IT'S MONROEEEEE!!!!!! And that sucks about Blue but I guess I'm not super sad. He was kind of an ass.
Mistie_Rose
Sunday, 10 July 2011
He died?!?!?!
SJohnston
Wednesday, 29 June 2011
firstly, NOOOOO NOT BLUE NOT BLUE NOT BLUEsecondly, I knew it was going to be Monroe :)
nonononono BLUE CANNOT DIE:'( make him live pleease?
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOOOVEEEEE! I WANT SO MUCH MORE!:DDD
OMFG! I LOVE THIS!
NO! BLUE CANNOT DIE. I feel so conflicted right now! I mean, I love Blue but he pissed me off by what he did to Bam and Jude and AHHHH JUST DON'T KILL HIM!!!!!!
AND POST MORE PWETTY PWEASE!!!!!!!!! -D
AND POST MORE PWETTY PWEASE!!!!!!!!! -D
AHHHHH i love it, but blue cant die , u cant do that no no no! and omg cant believe they got togeather. go hayde! poor jude :(
lol awesome chappy blue bets not die!!
CBYWALVBRHEJABVTEBS! CLAIRE!!!! HOW COULD YOU!?!?!?! You are a terrible person. >.< I am LOVING where this is going, it just seems that compaired to how long the chapters were for LHRS, this is pretty short. I just wish there was more, y'know?
aw...you killed Blue? WAH!
darlingdylan
Sunday, 13 November 2011
nice twist......though i wont think of hayden in the same way lol
he's alive!!
he's alive!!
Ditto Misery Rose. I thought Hayden was into Bam...I was way off.
Omg!!! He's GAY! Totally didn't see that coming. Uhhh...... oh yeah the car crash. Hope he doesn't die. Just go in a coma 4 a while. He really hurt Bammie so he kinda deserves it. Not too harsh right? Sorry if it is. Lol can't wait till the next chapter!!!
Yeah, he's back! Though I kinda agree with Kalifornia Gurl, he WAS being an ass. Anyways, write more asap please!!!
I kinda wished he died cuz he was being a douche...
YEA HES NOT DEAD!!!
Yay! Wait...is he dead...no he isnt...but then....okay. You are not that cruel enough to kill Blue....right?
OHH BLUEEE!!!!!!!!
you are still not forgiven.. but welcome back bud
WHOOOOHOO!!!
you are still not forgiven.. but welcome back bud
WHOOOOHOO!!!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! hes aliiive
Oh thanks God he didnt die. I would have been mad if he had.
HE'S ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK GOODNESS!
heheh i looooove this book!♥
heheh i looooove this book!♥
WHAT? A guy other than JUDE? Who is it????? ANd write more soon, pleaese, hun. These short, long-in-between chapters aren't working for me. But as always, your writing is excellence incarnate. So do us all a favor and pretty please write more!!!
Jude has to find Bam there is no way that they wont be together if they Arent goin to be with each other i just might cry... And you dont wanna see me cry
and if anyone wouldn't mind reading my book Rescue Me I would be eternally greatfull
and if anyone wouldn't mind reading my book Rescue Me I would be eternally greatfull
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post more I think I might die if you don't...I'm serious I think I might die
MUST HAVE MORE<3
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT????????????? THIS IS INSANE! He was talking to COLE? But Bam HATES Cole, doesn't she? Ahhh, this story is messing with my mind.
I LOVE IT!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOORE.
I LOVE IT!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOORE.
He was talking to Cole?! I must be like retarded or something because I just figured that out, acutally I had no idea who Cole was until I had to think who Cole was I was like Cole? Cole? Coolle. Tee hee yeah! My friends call me brain dead so yeah! But really good chapter, I can't wait for more!:DD
katiealyssa.
Sunday, 24 July 2011
read through the first and second book all in one day. this is good! the two things i don't like, though, is the swearing and short chapters. i love how you keep putting twists in the story. update soon! and check out my book, if you can?
katiealyssa.
Sunday, 24 July 2011
read through the first and second book all in one day. this is good! the two things i don't like, though, is the swearing and short chapters. i love how you keep putting twists in the story. update soon! and check out my book, if you can?
katiealyssa.
Sunday, 24 July 2011
read through the first and second book all in one day. this is good! the two things i don't like, though, is the swearing and short chapters. i love how you keep putting twists in the story. update soon! and check out my book, if you can?
I love him one chapter then the next i want to bitch slap him!! WHAT THE HELL JUDE?
NO! Why? You can't do that to Bam, Jude!!!! I kind of hate him now. He's not making the best deciscions. Great chapter, though! POST MORE I NEED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AHHHHHH WHAT THE HELL!!! u cant do that to bammie! but what a great book, love it!
>:( Jude needs 2 stop getting high... I hate him right now. I know he's sad about Bam leaving and all but he needs 2 start fi nding her you know? Great Chapter! I can't wait for more!:DD
JUDE YOU BETTER FIND HER OR IM GOING TO SEIRIOUSLY MURDER YOU! Love it, update soon :D
HE NEEDS 2 FIND HER OTHERWISE I'LL KICK HIS A$# Write more xD
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update sooonn! I just might die if you don't!!!!! xP
Oh!!! HURRY AND FIND HER, JUDE!!!!!!!!!!!
Post more super quick pretty please! I am addicted to this book!
Post more super quick pretty please! I am addicted to this book!
i love jude!
darlingdylan
Sunday, 13 November 2011
GO HAYDEN!
EXACTLY! Now go FIND HER!!!!!!!! Or I'll kill you, Jude-ie, seriously.
LOVE THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!
LOVE THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!
OMG! He told them! YAY! I love this book soo much! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! <3
AWESOME!!!!! love it
That was an AWESOME chapter! Update soon I can't get enough of this : )
Aaaaah! I agree with AddyB1, you CANNOT stop there!! You HAVE to finish it, pretty pleeeeeaaaaase!
Well, I have three questions. Why Jude started talking to the guys again when he had said that they would never see his fuckin' face again? Why on earth haven't Allie (I like this nickname better, though I like 'Bammie', too) read those fucking letters of Jude yet?!?! And why did she just... left him? I mean, I can understand why she left the other dumbasses (I like 'em, but, come on, they're just stupid), but the fact that she left Jude, I can't quite wrap my mind around that. She sure thought he would be better off without her, but still...
And I didn't like Jude having, or trying to have, or whatever, sex with a random girl to take his pain away. But, come on, I didn't blame him nor I thought he was being a selfish jerk (only when he said the Bammie never have done anything to him, whe she clearly did, and a lot). Because she LEFT him!
Oh, and she sure has shitty parents and I wouldn't like to be on her shoes.
Just one more thing about the plot: Jude (every time I say his name, it's like I'm saying 'dude',lol) HAS TO STOP USING DRUGS, or that would FUCKING KILL him eventually, and we don't want our Jude-ie dead, do we?
Great work. Keep going and pleaase POST MORE before you readers just go die in the corner, dude! And I still can't believe you're only 13. Great writer. Great work (a few minor mistakes, but...). You are talented, gifted, you've got skill, or call it the way you want. Whatever. POST MORE, AND SOON!!
Have a great week. Or day. Or month. Or year, since I don't know when you will be reading this, if you even happen to actually read it.
:D
Well, I have three questions. Why Jude started talking to the guys again when he had said that they would never see his fuckin' face again? Why on earth haven't Allie (I like this nickname better, though I like 'Bammie', too) read those fucking letters of Jude yet?!?! And why did she just... left him? I mean, I can understand why she left the other dumbasses (I like 'em, but, come on, they're just stupid), but the fact that she left Jude, I can't quite wrap my mind around that. She sure thought he would be better off without her, but still...
And I didn't like Jude having, or trying to have, or whatever, sex with a random girl to take his pain away. But, come on, I didn't blame him nor I thought he was being a selfish jerk (only when he said the Bammie never have done anything to him, whe she clearly did, and a lot). Because she LEFT him!
Oh, and she sure has shitty parents and I wouldn't like to be on her shoes.
Just one more thing about the plot: Jude (every time I say his name, it's like I'm saying 'dude',lol) HAS TO STOP USING DRUGS, or that would FUCKING KILL him eventually, and we don't want our Jude-ie dead, do we?
Great work. Keep going and pleaase POST MORE before you readers just go die in the corner, dude! And I still can't believe you're only 13. Great writer. Great work (a few minor mistakes, but...). You are talented, gifted, you've got skill, or call it the way you want. Whatever. POST MORE, AND SOON!!
Have a great week. Or day. Or month. Or year, since I don't know when you will be reading this, if you even happen to actually read it.
:D
Whoa. Wait a second!! You CANNOT stop there!!! I need answers! I NEED MORE CHAPTERS ASAP :D I love this!
i love this book, im soooo addicted. keep writing please (:
i like this story, its very addicting (:
hurry up nd add more
Can't wait till you put up some more chapters, but please do it soon!!!!
Not bad, not bad. A few issues here and there, but overall an interesting read.
teheh i forgot what the book was about o.O
Why are these so short?
Why are these so short?
Please hurry up and update! I'm melting over here....jk. :)
But, please!!!!!!!
But, please!!!!!!!
Damn...She really is a worthless whore. Is that even her father? You soooo need to write more!
OMG. Her mom really IS a worthless whore. Poor Bammie. I just want to hug her. Oh, and post more pleasssseeee!!!
I've always loved your writing. I really really hope that somebody with a company finds this, falls in love with it as I have and gets you a published book. Best of wishes,
~I.R.
~I.R.
No! It's so short! I cant believe her mom did that! I mean I can, but still.. Wow. But please update soon.
