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My Life, Beaten

IAmTheRealET Wednesday, 19 January 2011
yeah. it was the closest i could find to a curly haired african american, other than corban blue
 
Dreamheart Tuesday, 18 January 2011
Henry's cool looking (not sure if i'd say hot but derinatly up there)
Julia looks crazy
Silly's pretty, her dog is cutier though
IAmTheRealET Friday, 14 January 2011
Ha, wow, thanks guys. And White_roses thank u! I was wondering if ud maybe checked out my original story, lockdown. if not, feel free to, it might make more sense then.
IAmTheRealET Friday, 14 January 2011
Ha, wow, thanks guys. And White_roses thank u! I was wondering if ud maybe checked out my original story, lockdown. if not, feel free to, it might make more sense then.
 
Dreamheart Friday, 14 January 2011
my best friend ever, how could you not tell me there was a sequal to lockdown? How how how?? I must say though, so far, i like this better than lockdown, your writing seems way better. You must post more. Oh and for revenge, i shall be cheering for the dad like you did in mine. Also Aiden my favoritist characte is dead so...i need someone
 
White_roses Thursday, 13 January 2011
I really want to read more! Is this the only blurb you will post or are you planning to post all and receive a publishing offer from the accounts who rate you? The only thing I would say to fix is it's a little repetitive. I know, I have that in my book. The word tomorrow is constantly repeated, it just holds the story together. I wouldn't say to change it per say Just think it over a little.
 
Dreamheart Saturday, 15 January 2011
Okay i change my mind, the dad will DIE!!!!!!!
IAmTheRealET Wednesday, 19 January 2011
yow...that would hurt.
 
Dreamheart Tuesday, 18 January 2011
yeah Silly's actually in this one! and you finally added a chapter...good. I thought i'd have to hunt you down and tie you to the computer for you to write another.
IAmTheRealET Wednesday, 19 January 2011
Yes, you should have. And yes, it can.
 
Dreamheart Wednesday, 19 January 2011
Oh and i almost forgot, i'm not sure a belt could actually take the skin off...but i don't know, never happened to me.
 
Dreamheart Wednesday, 19 January 2011
Okay, you totally stole that belt thing from my story! How dare you...you...Okay I'm over it. Hey you finally answered the non-asian daughter problem thing, wow, shoulda seen that one comming.
IAmTheRealET Thursday, 27 January 2011
silly...hasnt met him yet...
 
Dreamheart Wednesday, 26 January 2011
...well, i bet silly thinks he's insane, then again, her name is silly so...Mr Lennor's weird.
IAmTheRealET Friday, 8 April 2011
kinda true...
 
Dreamheart Saturday, 29 January 2011
Erin please, shhing me does nothing, you of all people should know that by now
IAmTheRealET Saturday, 29 January 2011
Shhh! your ruining the story!
 
Dreamheart Friday, 28 January 2011
...wouldn't silly realize she something was wrong when Jordan NEVER spoke to her again, especially since they were neighbors? Not to mention, wouldn't she like realize that she wasn't in highschool? Just wondering....
IAmTheRealET Sunday, 6 February 2011
why thank you mattbenfly75, and my friend dreamheart is correct, it isnt the end :D
 
Dreamheart Sunday, 6 February 2011
Uh dude, I don't think this is the ending, just saying.
Anyway Erin, I must say, if I was silly I would have died at that school. No internet connection? my whole life would be ruined. Well as a freshman anyway.
 
Dangerous♥ Sunday, 6 February 2011
i loved it what a great ending i can't wait for your 3rd book i love your writing whenever you write a new chapter it feels like christmas
IAmTheRealET Monday, 4 April 2011
Thanks Danielle! I'v been busy but I'm almost done with my next chapter.
 
Danielle Evans Tuesday, 15 March 2011
This is really good so far :) Hope you continue writing and post more soon :D
IAmTheRealET Friday, 11 February 2011
yayyy!
 
Dreamheart Sunday, 6 February 2011
Aw, thanks, you remembered my brithday...well kinda. And uh people reading this do not have to check out my books, unless you want to.
Thank you, I enjoyed my present:)
IAmTheRealET Friday, 8 April 2011
shut up. i had an epic brain fart for the past four or sumtin months
 
Dreamheart Wednesday, 6 April 2011
The dad is a jerk. And this chapter was short, making you a jerk.

Although, that part where he was like "gee, thanks dad, love you too," is totally something we say! "I hate you," "Love you too!"

Anyway, that's the epic chapter you've been working on? Really ET, really?
IAmTheRealET Monday, 11 April 2011
its a good question...idk yet...
 
Dreamheart Sunday, 10 April 2011
Hmm, this is so weird. Why doesn't Mrs. Wess just call the cops or something?
 
Dreamheart Friday, 22 April 2011
*sigh* poor Henry. :'(
IAmTheRealET Monday, 16 May 2011
no...and...possibly. i mean, theres hooters...
 
Dreamheart Monday, 16 May 2011
You wrote another chapter? How did I not know this >:(

Also, is that place real? Or even legal?
IAmTheRealET Monday, 16 May 2011
yes. yes she doess
 
Dreamheart Monday, 16 May 2011
ooooooooooooh Madeline likes likes likes Henry

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