yeah. it was the closest i could find to a curly haired african american, other than corban blue

Henry's cool looking (not sure if i'd say hot but derinatly up there)
Julia looks crazy
Silly's pretty, her dog is cutier though

Ha, wow, thanks guys. And White_roses thank u! I was wondering if ud maybe checked out my original story, lockdown. if not, feel free to, it might make more sense then.

Ha, wow, thanks guys. And White_roses thank u! I was wondering if ud maybe checked out my original story, lockdown. if not, feel free to, it might make more sense then.

my best friend ever, how could you not tell me there was a sequal to lockdown? How how how?? I must say though, so far, i like this better than lockdown, your writing seems way better. You must post more. Oh and for revenge, i shall be cheering for the dad like you did in mine. Also Aiden my favoritist characte is dead so...i need someone

I really want to read more! Is this the only blurb you will post or are you planning to post all and receive a publishing offer from the accounts who rate you? The only thing I would say to fix is it's a little repetitive. I know, I have that in my book. The word tomorrow is constantly repeated, it just holds the story together. I wouldn't say to change it per say Just think it over a little.

Okay i change my mind, the dad will DIE!!!!!!!

yow...that would hurt.

yeah Silly's actually in this one! and you finally added a chapter...good. I thought i'd have to hunt you down and tie you to the computer for you to write another.

Yes, you should have. And yes, it can.

Oh and i almost forgot, i'm not sure a belt could actually take the skin off...but i don't know, never happened to me.

Okay, you totally stole that belt thing from my story! How dare you...you...Okay I'm over it. Hey you finally answered the non-asian daughter problem thing, wow, shoulda seen that one comming.

silly...hasnt met him yet...

...well, i bet silly thinks he's insane, then again, her name is silly so...Mr Lennor's weird.

kinda true...

Erin please, shhing me does nothing, you of all people should know that by now

Shhh! your ruining the story!

...wouldn't silly realize she something was wrong when Jordan NEVER spoke to her again, especially since they were neighbors? Not to mention, wouldn't she like realize that she wasn't in highschool? Just wondering....

why thank you mattbenfly75, and my friend dreamheart is correct, it isnt the end :D

Uh dude, I don't think this is the ending, just saying.
Anyway Erin, I must say, if I was silly I would have died at that school. No internet connection? my whole life would be ruined. Well as a freshman anyway.

i loved it what a great ending i can't wait for your 3rd book i love your writing whenever you write a new chapter it feels like christmas

Thanks Danielle! I'v been busy but I'm almost done with my next chapter.

This is really good so far :) Hope you continue writing and post more soon :D

yayyy!

Aw, thanks, you remembered my brithday...well kinda. And uh people reading this do not have to check out my books, unless you want to.
Thank you, I enjoyed my present:)

shut up. i had an epic brain fart for the past four or sumtin months

The dad is a jerk. And this chapter was short, making you a jerk.

Although, that part where he was like "gee, thanks dad, love you too," is totally something we say! "I hate you," "Love you too!"

Anyway, that's the epic chapter you've been working on? Really ET, really?

its a good question...idk yet...

Hmm, this is so weird. Why doesn't Mrs. Wess just call the cops or something?

*sigh* poor Henry. :'(

no...and...possibly. i mean, theres hooters...

You wrote another chapter? How did I not know this >:(

Also, is that place real? Or even legal?

yes. yes she doess

ooooooooooooh Madeline likes likes likes Henry