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Songbird Trilogy Book 1: The Maze Girl (complete)

 
M. Cramer Sunday, 16 January 2011
I love this story already because you can tell it's well developed and the characters are established. And I've a pet peeve about character names being too thought out sometimes, as if an author has gone out of their way to create originality, but yours are beautiful :)

I mean, Rory Griffin? Ah, love. Haha, I know that's silly.
Julia R. West Monday, 25 October 2010
Arya- Technically it's not, it's just a similar concept. but thanks for the compliment =P
 
Fanny. pwns Monday, 25 October 2010
Is this a hunger games fanfic? It's really good...and addicting...I'm going to continue reading
Julia R. West Sunday, 24 October 2010
Yeah, it starts that way,(because i realize and do not deny that I am a Hunger Games fanatic) but it turns more mystery, and separates itself from that storyline.
While writing it, I was also thinking about the Goblet of Fire and Tri-wizard tournament. So think...
Post Apocalypse Harry Potter Hunger Games Romance Mystery story. haha
 
Jordan Yates Sunday, 24 October 2010
This is a really good story so far! But it is horribly Hunger Games-esque- The drawing, going to some foreign city or place and people die... You might want to change that a bit :) All in all a great book!
 
David Jae Sunday, 2 February 2014
I like this.

The concept is good and there is some suspense, which keeps you reading. I like the idea of the economic pressure to enter the games.

Your characters were okay, but lacking a little depth, I feel, especially your protagonist. Perhaps if she had a sister to be jealous of, or her Father was dead/divorced. Something like that.

Still, a good effort.

Ganbare
Julia R. West Monday, 25 October 2010
Yeah, I know....
It wasn't the angle I was going for, but but it ended up that way. Oh well. =P
 
SingItForTheWorld Sunday, 24 October 2010
whoops sorry, i accedentaly pressed submit more than once :]
 
SingItForTheWorld Sunday, 24 October 2010
nice job so far! i love the idea, but it sounds alot like the hunger games with the drawings. but overall very nice keep going with it!
 
SingItForTheWorld Sunday, 24 October 2010
nice job so far! i love the idea, but it sounds alot like the hunger games with the drawings. but overall very nice keep going with it!
Julia R. West Friday, 29 October 2010
Yeah, I've been pretty busy on this story =P but it's all the better. I type them up on Google document so I can log into gmail and keep them even if my computer crashes, so i'm not sure.
Yeah, the majority of my stories are in past tense and I prefer it, too, until I started reading present tense. I decided I had to...broaden my horizons...so to speak, and wrote this in present.

Maybe I'll make a revised version for you people who like past. =P When I've got time.
 
Fanny. pwns Thursday, 28 October 2010
Wow! You got a lot done! 17 chapters! How many pages is your story in Word!!!

constructive criticism: maybe you could change your story's tense from present to past (but that's just a personal preference).

Arya

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