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Teagan

 
TN Templeton Tuesday, 15 June 2010
I found you here from your LJ and I thought I'm leaving you a comment as promised. ^_^ I think your writing style and form were both fantastic. Though the story's beginning seemed a bit long to get into, by the end of the first chapter it picked up enough for me to read the second as well. Your characters seem very developed and in depth. I would give you a four (don't take it personally, I never give fives to anyone ^_^) for style. A two and a half for the opening. Follow that with another four for characters. Overall, good work. Keep at it.
 
Yuna Saturday, 10 November 2012
Your writing is very good, and the plot is realistic. No spelling mistakes, too. :)
I would be glad if you reviewed "Mutual Survival".
 
Elisabeth Heroux Friday, 17 December 2010
Your writing is amazing. I would love it if you read my book and give me some tips on some descriptions that would help me bring my book to life.
The details that you have in this first chapter are absolutely stunning.
 
AlaskaEverfall Saturday, 12 June 2010
WOW! =O
I love how u decribed each of da characters so detailed... =)

A woman in her thirties with vivid red hair...

u didnt just say red...
u added a word, and tht made so much difference! =)

Gr8 work! =)
And keep writing!
Rhose Whyte
 
C.C Phoenixx Thursday, 10 June 2010
This is very good! Keep writing!!!!!!!! Plz, could you read my book, Blood Rush? I would REALLY appreciate it if you did!!!

5 stars!
 
Annabel Tuesday, 8 June 2010
Wow. This is wonderful. The world needs more men like that bartender. You have an amazing way of adding in emotion to your writing. Five stars. Keep writing!
-Anna
P.S. Check out my book Like Magic? It will only take a second but will mean the world to me! ^-^
nah man Sunday, 20 June 2010
This is very interesting. I like how you describe the whole story. However, I think you should break down some paragraphs so it would be better to read. Otherwise, this is amazing. And I hope Teagan sees the bartender again. I find him intriguing.

Thanks for reading mine!
Beatrix
 
Unfathomable Monday, 9 May 2011
I appreciate your work. The cadence is really enjoyable. The way the story is woven, the way it moves from the past to the present, is indeed something that lures attention. Awaiting more from you.

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