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Sisters of Midnight:Dark Moon

EmilyLiz Sunday, 8 August 2010
cool
Cecilia Black Saturday, 22 May 2010
This sort of reminds me of the movie: The craft. ever seen it?
 
Tess Kiely Thursday, 11 February 2010
brilliant!
Krystyana Sunday, 18 October 2009
Wow, I really enjoyed this. =] Draws you in a lot. =]

Comment mine? (Blue Eyes)
 
littlemissSmileZ Saturday, 11 July 2009
Very excellent!!! I love love love it!!
 
Cam Saturday, 11 April 2009
That is really good stuff. Its original and simply draws the reader in. Just want any hungry reader needs - something really good to devour :)
Thanks for posting this. Ill definitely read on!
Star Tuesday, 7 April 2009
Oh my god. How can I say this. It was amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
OH MY GOD!
PS; also assuming that u'd check out Not the Average.
 
Allison Cassatta Wednesday, 25 March 2009
I enjoyed reading what I did. Being wiccan this kind of stuff is right up my alley. I really do like your voice and thought the descriptions were good.
If you have time check out my first book "Immortal" and feel free to leave any feedback.
 
Franny Y. Monday, 17 August 2009
This is actually... wow. :) You know the subject genuinely well, and though it has the high school theme, it's carried off well and flows brilliantly.
 
paul schoaff Thursday, 23 April 2009
I bore too easily. Why don't you consider making about 30 chapters out of what you have here, and while at it, correct the damage that the WOP installer does to the spacing between paragraphs. We both know it is much easier to read indented, spaced text, and from what I read, this is a keeper/publisher bait. Might as well make them happy right away.
 
littlemissSmileZ Saturday, 11 July 2009
(= I love this...
Cecilia Black Sunday, 19 July 2009
the story is mainly about nick and faith... boring.
 
littlemissSmileZ Tuesday, 14 July 2009
This is so dramatic. And I love it!
 
Dana Maree Sunday, 10 January 2010
oh lord, this book is addicting! Better than any other book I've read on here.
 
Avalon Maya. Monday, 3 August 2009
i would buy it in a heartbeat. love it. amazing, no, beyond amazing. <3
 
T. Foreman Thursday, 9 July 2009
Oh... My... Gosh.
I love this! It reminds me so much of "The Craft." I really dig that it isn't some campy, mumbo jumbo witchcraft book with no factual research. As someone who has always been fascinated by Wicca, I really appreciate the fact that you've done your research as far as the herbs, oils, and rituals are concerned. It's very dark, and if this was on the shelves, I would buy it in a heartbeat.
Keep it up!
 
Alyssa Dreame Sunday, 5 April 2009
Ugh, Brock gets on my nerves. But really good so far. BETTER than really good! AMAZING! I'm sort of new to Worthyofpublishing, so it wud reallly help if u commented on my stuff as well? But urs is absolutely.......r u thinking about getting it published?
 
Nadyn Sunday, 11 January 2009
This was amazing.
I absoultely loved it!!
I love you're writing style! You developed your characters very well. Descriptions are just amazing. I could just see evrything.
I love reading these types of book and let me tell you, this is one of the best ones i've read.
I'm really looking forward to reading the rest. I just need to know what happens

I noticed that you had a few grammar mistakes here and there. Little tiny mistakes though. You need to watch out for the quatation marks. You seem to have missed a few of those. Also, I noticed you mix up then and than. Big difference between those two words.
But other than that, this was just utterly amazing.

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