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Freedom (Completed!)

M.L. Holt Monday, 24 May 2010
I acctually didn't really use the dove as sybolism.... I can't take credit for that. I used the dove as the cover because Avalyn's wings are pure white...like a dove's.
 
Cnat1495 Monday, 24 May 2010
Very descriptive and vivid, I can totally imagine everything you describe. It's the kind of start that makes me wonder what happens next, which is a good thing. I can't wait to hear what you write next. The story is off to a great start so far!
Only a couple grammar errors, but those can be fixed. Please give me your opinion on my work when I upload some!
-Cnat
 
Carpe_diem Sunday, 23 May 2010
Wow.....this is so intense- I love the symbolism with the dove and freedom/escape. Poor gurl, to be stripped of it when she was only 3. :(
Please, please update soon!
~ashly~ ;P
And if u hv time, I'd really appreciate it if u checked out a littl of Rosaline, thnx :)
 
E.M. Wheeler Wednesday, 3 November 2010
I really like this.
 
Danielle Evans Sunday, 6 June 2010
Wow this is really good I can't wait to read more!!! :) :D :P
M.L. Holt Tuesday, 6 July 2010
I know it's similar, but it's not the same. Donovan has a similar appearance, but a totaly different personality than Fang. And Fang only turns 15 in the newest book. Anyway, it's not the same, and either way, it doesn't matter. It's not acctually published, so it's not relevant. I understand your concern though. :)
AMapOfTheStars Monday, 5 July 2010
This story is really good, but it is extremely close to Maximum Ride by James Patterson. Maximum Ride has practically the same type of.. well, pretty much everything, such as: Donovan sounds identical to a boy named Fang in Maximum Ride, who is also 15. The treadmill and escaping from an evil lab are the same... it just seems too identical.
 
Danielle Evans Sunday, 27 June 2010
Wow this is amazing!! Hope you add more soon because this is really good!!!!
mine Tuesday, 15 February 2011
THIS IS VERY GOOD. ARE YOU DOING A NEW CHAPTER
 
C.W Gibbon Sunday, 1 April 2012
Love the book, please read and rate one of my books :D
 
Anthony Conn Friday, 10 December 2010
wow. its perfect! you're kina like me... i rushed my stories alot and couldn't seem to help it. i realized i was destined for short stories. Try it! lol amazing idea, great speed. wish i'd thought of it... :) please read my stuff :)
 
SingItForTheWorld Sunday, 3 October 2010
This is great! I love the idea, but it seems a little rushed. I love the characters and it is really good. I can't wait to read Caged!!! Mind reading my book Flashback and my friend Flames book Fire Trail?? Thanks so much!
 
Polaris Zark Saturday, 4 September 2010
This is brilliant.You should add a little more detail,and work on making the book an incy-wincy bit longer. Otherwise brilliant.
 
Polaris Zark Saturday, 4 September 2010
This is brilliant.You should add a little more detail,and work on making the book an incy-wincy bit longer. Otherwise brilliant.
 
Danielle Evans Sunday, 4 July 2010
OMG That was amazing!! I can't wait to read 'Caged' Please write it soon!!! :P

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