LeLe Sunday, 28 January 2018
I literally cried reading this, it get really emotional knowing she has nobody to trust and it is a reality for some across the world. A great story well done
Snowie Saturday, 22 June 2013
Keep up the good work!
 
Alice McKenna Tuesday, 16 October 2012
Why do you write about this? It's good, but I just don't get it. Why would you want to write it?
 
Dee Ebron Thursday, 22 December 2011
OMG , THIS STORY MADE ME A LITTLE TEARY EYE'D . AMAZING STORY ! ! !
 
Tami Aldway Thursday, 7 July 2011
This was a very emotional storyline, but could definitely use some grammatical editing. Suggestion: make the reader feel what she feels. Don't hold back on details about the hunger. It reminds me of the story A Child Called It. Great job!