David Jae Sunday, 2 February 2014
I like this.

The concept is good and there is some suspense, which keeps you reading. I like the idea of the economic pressure to enter the games.

Your characters were okay, but lacking a little depth, I feel, especially your protagonist. Perhaps if she had a sister to be jealous of, or her Father was dead/divorced. Something like that.

Still, a good effort.

Ganbare