Le Noir Tuesday, 16 November 2010
It's pretty well written; I didn't fully understand what was going on, but it was interesting to read. The only particularly negative things I have say is: "unbelivingly"? Lol, remove that adverb...rewrite the sentence.
UndeadBeauty Monday, 8 November 2010
*sniff sniff*
can you guess what happens?!?!