Rocky Rochford Tuesday, 29 October 2013
Hey man good stuff, you have great depth to your poems, well worth reading. Any chance you could check out my poetry book:
The life of Little Boy Death.
 
NashedPotatoes. Wednesday, 16 March 2011
Wow. I liked this. Except for the last line. I think it should have been.
I can't breathe,
Help me,
please.

But that's just my opinion. Powerful work. (: