ffand Tuesday, 28 December 2010
This is actually one of my favourites from you. I like it because it is simple and REAL. Nothing contrived in it - everyone can relate to it.
 
Choco-milkshake Sunday, 26 December 2010
You're getting better and better ;)

I can see your earnest feelings. I guess all poets suffer from one-sided love.

You're good enough for her, just because you love her.
 
A.E. Eidem Sunday, 12 December 2010
when i read poetry i guess the next line
"in my head" sounded cool after replaying them over, and over
 
TezzMilo Tuesday, 27 July 2010
But i think you cld put a lil more into it, and have it lil flow. But i really like it(:
 
TezzMilo Tuesday, 27 July 2010
I love this one!