TheCuriousWriter Monday, 20 May 2013
Nice cover and nice prologue. Awesome dialogues but a little too lengthy. Anyway, write more and stay awesome!
 
Issac Scott Friday, 17 May 2013
I'm not into fantasy-- I loved this.

Fantastic prose. A bit wordy, but that's expected of this genre. I liked the vibe of this: gloomy, morbid, just depressing. I really got a feel for the world and the state of chaos it's in. I'll keep reading this one.
 
BriCo Saturday, 20 April 2013
Great. Your writing style is great. It drew me in rite away. Its just the type of books that I like to read. So far everyting is perfect. Keep it up and I will be reading more.
 
James Laurie Tuesday, 16 April 2013
Wow this is great. Marvelous writing that really draws you in from the start. This is the type of story that becomes an epic. I look forward to reading more. If you could check out "The Sanctuary," it would be much appreciated.
 
Colorless Thursday, 11 April 2013
The context you used suits you very well for these types of olden day books. I love how it is set out (: Looking foward to reading the next chapter!