Eíryn Grayce Sorenson Thursday, 11 October 2012
This. Is. Epic. There were no errors whatsoever! Amazing job! Your descriptions really sucked me into the story and I'm already really into the characters. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Caela Kings Sunday, 20 May 2012
This is... really good. Your description is flawless, your storytelling simply wonderful. I quite love how you have the fey in this--they make amazing stories! Especially when in historical fiction. ^_^ very interesting indeed.
Scarlette Noelle Sunday, 13 May 2012
Thanks for commenting on my story :D 'tis appreciated~!

Anyway, you have major talent ^u^ The only thing I didn't like was the use of present tense, but I just prefer past. Your writing is excellent and you used the present tense admirably :D This is a really great story. It kind of reminds me of the Dresden Files with their Winter and Summer courts in the fae.
Jenny M. Tuesday, 1 May 2012
Hi :) first off thank you for rating and commenting on my new book! I really appreciate it and I will use your advice.
Second of all, this story is insane! I just love it, both your style of writing as well as your descriptions really caught my attention! Well Done! Please , please continue writing it, I really want to know what happens next :)
Mal. 902 Tuesday, 1 May 2012
I have to read the rest to when I get more of a chance. but, so far the details are really good, the story so far I haven't got up to the actions but when I do I'll give you more of an update.