Piercing The Sky, A Book of My Poems
Author: Neil Evans

Chapter 83
Save Me!

This one was the first thing I wrote in school today. I wanted part of it to sound like a song, well, I'm not too good at songs, I'll leave it there. WRITTEN IN A NOTEBOOK, WRITTEN AT SCHOOL Wednesday, August 25, 2010




Getting paranoid

My eyes weigh at least a ton

Getting kinda scared

My lips begin to twitch


Feeling fucked up

I slowly try to turn

Feeling nerve-shot

Please stop looking at me


Pen weighs a thousand pounds

My heart's sinking down

I don't think I will eat

The bone's about to crack


I'm about to snap

Not seeing too straight

Look at the crimson hands

Shivering and cold


Save me!

Make me feel okay

Wash me in your love


Save me!

Make me feel okay

Don't hurt me

Take the pain away



Don't let me die


Save me!

Make me feel okay!


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