Piercing The Sky, A Book of My Poems
Author: Neil Evans

Chapter 57
You Make Me Feel

This one came straight from my mouth. I thought about what I was writing and wrote it. These poems aren't good, I know, the ones I write down I write just for the sake of writing another one. WRITTEN IN A NOTEBOOK Saturday, August 21st, 2010


How do you make me feel?
Like my heart exploded
The flames of your love
Slowly and gently caressing my soul
Melting stress and worry away
Curing my cancerous paranoia
Like I'm one in a million
The luckiest on the planet
Like time doesn't exist
The world is just me and you
That is how you make me feel


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