Piercing The Sky, A Book of My Poems
Author: Neil Evans

Chapter 31
Some Changes

So I'm going through some changes right now. I've stopped eating 3rd meals (dinner) now, I don't know why. I think I've stopped getting hungry.  No big deal, I usually eat dinner leftovers the next day really early in the morning. No worries. I've also stopped inflicting self-harm when I'm angry. So I may be producing more poems, writing them when I'm angry.

This is just a heads-up chapter on what my new poems might look like. With it I'm posting yet another poem. But I'd like to make a few comments really quick:


Following the great response my peers gave for "The Angel" I think my poems have greatly gotten better. My first poem was . . . let us face it, terrible. Now I'm starting to get an actual grip on poetry. While I'm very much an amateur, and I don't claim to be good, but I'm going to try and get better. "The Angel" is, by far, my favorite poem that I've written, and I'm starting to feel good about my own work. That means I might start to get a bit cocky and post my short poems. Maybe I'll eventually get good at those, too!

 

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