The Monarchy of Red
GenreShort Stories / Fiction
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Friday, 19 March 2010
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Red split into four kingdoms long ago, and while they are all different in climates and enviroments, the walls seperate them from anywhere else. They are the only humans on earth at this team in the early 1500s

 

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Ch. 1 History

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AlaskaEverfall Saturday, 12 June 2010
I like ur style of writing...
but i couldn't quite figure out what you were writing about, and y u were writing about it... =P
I suggest, instead of concentrating on ur writing, (2 add descriptive words), instead, make sure that the reader can actually understand wat ur trying 2 express.... =P
Good work! XD
Rhose Whyte

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