The "Goodbye" Brothers
GenreHistory / Fiction
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Friday, 19 March 2010
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Read by:69 different readers
 

Gwendolyn Morris has lived a nice life in her family's little home. But as the war starts and the people she loves are getting involved, she want to aswell. Her ambition worries her father, her courage inspirers her mother, her bravery and strength saves hundreds.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 The Family
Ch. 2 Working Family
Ch. 3 Enlisting Family
Ch. 4 Fighting Family
Ch. 5 Torn Family
Ch. 6 Big Family
Ch. 7 Missing Family
Ch. 8 Loving Family
Ch. 9 Moving Family
Ch. 10 Taken Family
Ch. 11 New Family
Ch. 12 Escaping Family

Comments

 
Segalia Tuesday, 18 January 2011
There are several grammar, spelling and tenses mistakes. Watch out for run-ons. Numbers should be written out instead of digits.

That said, this is really good! It's interesting with action too. I knew that Tony would fall in love with her (way back at George's funeral). KIU!
 
Carpe_diem Sunday, 18 April 2010
haha!
Tony is hilarious!
I'm glad she's begining to fit in with them all!
They're all like a family! :D
 
Carpe_diem Sunday, 18 April 2010
Awwww! This is such a touching chapter- iot almost made me cry!
Very well written!
I'm lovn it and can't wait to see how this all unfolds!
 
Carpe_diem Sunday, 18 April 2010
I hope she's wrong too! :(
Hidden Saturday, 20 March 2010
Love this book so far! xxxx

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