The Curse
GenreSuspense / Thriller
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Wednesday, 23 December 2009
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(1 rating)
Read by:375 different readers
 

Lara Richman, Eighteen years old, her fate sealed by her father, coerced into marriage with a stranger.... will she dare to go against him

George Richman, dominating, disturbed, wierd.... haunted by his past, dreams.... and the bloody dagger... will his past come to get him?

Megan Richman, a submissive woman, never go against her husband...., will she dare speak up?

All remains to be seen in this intresting tale, their lives entangled!

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Chapter 1
Ch. 2 Chapter 2
Ch. 3 Chapter 3
Ch. 4 Chapter 4
Ch. 5 Chapter 5
Ch. 6 Chapter 6
Ch. 7 Chapter 7
Ch. 8 Chapter 8
Ch. 9 Chapter 9
Ch. 10 Chapter 10
Ch. 11 Chapter 11

Comments

Redroses Sunday, 27 December 2009
Thank you, i shall definately keep in mind, anything which will help me improve.. and become better.
 
Syiana Sunday, 27 December 2009
Good story line. I think you should add more details to your characters and the places mentioned e.g. the clothes they are wearing, what they look like to others, what the house looks like and the garden etc. A book should transport you into their world.

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