Dead, Not Gone
GenreHistory / Thriller
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Sunday, 3 August 2008
Star rating:
 
(11 ratings)
Read by:395 different readers
 

Joshua Penn is a young sword fighting progidy living on a legendary pirate ship. Emma Cates is dead, but somehow she's...not gone. When the two meet, the secrets of Emma's past begin to unravel into an epic quest. Emma knows nothing of who she is, or why she hasn't moved on. But Joshua seems to know more about Emma, than Emma does! When trouble with pirates starts to come into play, Emma must attempt to become more human, in order to fight for her life...or the life she's left behind.
In this epic tale of the mystery of faith, life, religion, and love, your heart and mind will be thoroughly submerged in the seperate lives of two individuals: one is part of the world we live in; the other, stuck in the middle. Enjoy!

**Please do not forget to comment, critique, and rate! I greatly appreciate it!**

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Emma
Ch. 2 Joshua
Ch. 3 Emma
Ch. 4 Joshua
Ch. 5 Emma
Ch. 6 Joshua
Ch. 7 Emma
Ch. 8 Joshua
Ch. 9 Emma
Ch. 10 Joshua

Comments

 
Melody♪♫ Saturday, 30 July 2011
Jesus, Pat12345, the first sentence doesn't even make sense with your edits. And the fact that you don't even KNOW what quotations are--hint: they look like this "--will REALLY make the author want to follor your advice, I'm sure.

ANYWAYS, that aside, this story isn't perfect, but it is pretty good. I actually found myself WANTING the first chapter to be longer, which is always a plus. I think you could have a bit more description here and there, and that the story could start off a little more excitingly, but that's just me. Overall, it's pretty good.
 
iWasBorn2TellUiLuvU Friday, 29 July 2011
Powerful...
 
Lala Thursday, 28 July 2011
So cool! I love the writing and I really think it deserves the ratings its been given. Can't wait to read more :)
Scarlet Blaze Wednesday, 27 July 2011
MisDisAppear!
Scarlet Blaze Wednesday, 27 July 2011
Amazing! Love this bok.

Click here for more comments