Silver Shadows
GenreYoung Adult / Fantasy
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Monday, 14 December 2009
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(7 ratings)
Read by:246 different readers
 

Ashlyn Harvey is not your average Human. She is Immortal, and she also has powers. Her, and her siblings must try to live life as normally as they can without exposing who they really are.

Naomi is Ashlyn's best friend. She was her nanny when Victor, her father, was in a deep depression after which Genevieve and Daphne were saved. She is now evil, and she is out to get Ashlyn and her family, and kill them.

Will Ashlyn be able to save her family in time, or will they just end up a forgotten memory? Will Gabriel be able to convince Ashlyn of his love, or will she think he is silly, as he is a Ghost? Will Caleb, Elijah, Genevieve, Daphne, Gabriella, Mackenzie, Warren, Jasmin, Ashlyn and Adrian be able to control their powers, or will they loose control and end life as they know it?


Okay Guys, I had this book up on this account before, but then I took it off, as it was being annoying. But now I decided it wasnt getting enough exposure on my other account, so I have taken it off that one, and am now putting it back here... Confuzed? I am... lol. Well, Jessica and I started writing this book back in April. She gave me the idea for the book via the Prologue she had written me, so I knew what I had to do to carry this on. I then re-arranged the prologue, cutting up bits and adding in bits that could help the story continue. I wrote constatly for a month after that, trying to get as far as I could before I got the writers block. I got up to where I am now before I had to stop, as I got the idea for Secrets of a Troubled Mind after 2 weeks of writers block, and I have been writing that ever since. But I have kinda put that on hold now too because of Smile... but w/e. ANyway, I am trying to get this one carried on, so If you guys have any idea as to what could happen next, as I am slightly stuck, and I need some help!!! =]

So read and Rate my darlings! Love you!

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Prologue - Last Regrets **EDITED ROUGHLY!**

Comments

 
ahooga Monday, 11 October 2010
I really like how you use lively adjectives and how you began with a quote :)
 
Heather M. Friday, 29 January 2010
Hehe I like it
 
E. Yazykova Thursday, 28 January 2010
Your dialogue is lively and believable, but you have to watch out for all the 'telling' you're doing, if you don't tell the reader the power of the character (like the hot head) but show through action and dialogue, the story will flow a lot better. But other than that the story definitely has potential.
 
ScarletDream Saturday, 2 January 2010
Elijha!!! hottie!
lol yeah im one of those who started to giggle when i saw him... once again Kaisa ur an amazing author!
Avalon Maya. Sunday, 27 December 2009
Haha you know it Brianna,,, It was so much fun finding them ay... i bet you guys just love looking at them. =] espesh Elijah. He a hottie ay.

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