The Time Machine
GenreSci-Fi / Children
Age Rating:G
Submitted:Monday, 7 December 2009
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(5 ratings)
Read by:666 different readers
 

Tara and Jacob Smith have been working tirelessly on creating a time machine.

Buckle your seat belt! You're in for an adventure!

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Chapter One
Ch. 2 Chapter Two
Ch. 3 Chapter Three
Ch. 4 Chapter Four
Ch. 5 Chapter Five: Twenty Years Later
Ch. 6 Chapter Six
Ch. 7 Chapter Seven
Ch. 8 Chapter Eight
Ch. 9 Chapter Nine
Ch. 10 Chapter Ten
Ch. 11 Chapter Eleven
Ch. 12 Chapter Twelve
Ch. 13 Chapter Thirteen
Ch. 14 Chapter Fourteen
Ch. 15 Chapter Fifteen
Ch. 16 Chapter Sixteen
Ch. 17 Epilogue

Comments

 
IBMchicago Thursday, 19 March 2015
I read your first chapter. Very cute! I like much of the dialogue, but am also thinking that it may be a hit heavy in dialogue for a first chapter. May want to consider balancing with some narrative and description of the setting.
 
A.R. Galltier Saturday, 22 June 2013
This is a great childrens book, I'm gonna read some of it to my little brothers (aged 6 and 8) they will dig it! I liked how the parents didn't totally think there kids were just playing a game and how they thought that they might actually make something real. My mom would have told me to clean up my mess and stop fooling. My book is about time travel also, except they don't use a machine! If you want I would love if you checked it out! It's called THE MARTIANS OF TIME!
 
LavelyMaffins Monday, 23 April 2012
This is really good!! It has a similar story line to mine! Tehehe<3 That's prob what made me click on it!! It would be cool if you could check mine out and see what you think of it!
BookWorm376 Monday, 27 June 2011
I like the part where they go to the Ice Age. :3 I like it because they still have a house! Why are houses around back then? Was their house in the machine also? XD
 
Metaldog Thursday, 24 December 2009
Very cute story.

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