Athanatos
GenreFantasy / Fan fiction
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Saturday, 5 December 2009
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(29 ratings)
Read by:969 different readers
 

Jayden, or Jayde as most people call her, Connors moves to Sandpoint Idaho with her father after a horrible car crash that kills her twin brother James and her mother. Everything seems to be normal until she runs into the school bully, or more like he runs into her. There's something mysterious about him and Jayde is just itching to find out.
Not to mention that the "powers", reading people's feelings and moods through their eyes, that she and her brother shared seemed to be weaker on Noah, or they just don't work...



P.S. there might be bits of fanfiction in it.. just saying :)

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Being the New Girl
Ch. 2 New Friends... and then some
Ch. 3 It's a Date?
Ch. 4 Some Date
Ch. 5 The Beginning of Questions
Ch. 6 Gwynn
Ch. 8 Questions and No Answers
Ch. 9 More Questions
Ch. 10 T. B. Peridot
Ch. 11 Beezy Jones...
Ch. 12 The Truth...(s)
Ch. 13 Don't Talk to Strangers...
Ch. 14 Emory Vossler
Ch. 15 Ladies Day Out!!
Ch. 16 Royalty
Ch. 17 'A Night in Paris'
Ch. 18 A Dangerous Night in Paris!!
Ch. 19 Beginning of Answers
Ch. 20 Surprise Visitor!
Ch. 21 A Kiss of Green Apple
Ch. 22 Walking in a Winterwonder Land...
Ch. 23 Hospitals and White Roses..
Ch. 24 Hello... Samuel Vossler
Ch. 25 Visitors
Ch. 26 Guilty Scared-y cat
Ch. 27 Losing Part of a Heart..
Ch. 28 Spontaneous trip and a project..
Ch. 29 Tried Trust.
Ch. 30 The Fight
Ch. 31 Myths and Legends..
Ch. 32 Craziness..
Ch. 33 Danger..
Ch. 34 Finale.

Comments

 
BookWorm376 Friday, 18 May 2012
I like this. :3 Its interesting and suspenseful, and I can imagine the characters well by the way you describe them.
However, there are several grammar errors you need to pick up, like non-existant full stops, commas and hyphens.
Overall, its a very interesting good book. After a bit of proof reading it should be even better.
 
...Glista... Friday, 20 January 2012
I simply can't wait to read more!
 
Georgia bett Friday, 30 September 2011
I think I've made it pretty clear that I'm intrigued!
 
Georgia bett Friday, 30 September 2011
Very enjoyable :)
 
Georgia bett Friday, 30 September 2011
Continuing to be excited. I like how it's turning out. Keep it up! It's pretty impressive. :)

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