Ohio Is For The Troubled. (Working title)
GenreFiction / Self-help
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Wednesday, 2 December 2009
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Read by:237 different readers
 

“ What do you expect us to do with you?”
The girl sat in the leather chair and stared at the ground. She played with the hem of her skirt and her palms become sticky and sweaty.
“We aren’t keeping you here. That’s for sure.” The Dean stood up from his office chair and opened the door.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Chapter I
Ch. 2 Chapter II
Ch. 3 Chapter III
Ch. 4 Chapter IV

Comments

 
shaz532 Friday, 1 January 2010
Hi, so I like the story line but it does lack details, describe the office, the car, ect.

Also, I noticed that when you write your dialouge that you use a period after each person has spoken

Example- "He said I wasn't that interesting."

I always thought you use a comma

Example-

"He said I wasn't that interesting,"

Good Luck on writng your book x
 
Capitalletters Thursday, 31 December 2009
Brilliant read!! I enjoyed this..Can't wait for the next chapter :)

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