The Thief of Ashlon
GenreFantasy
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Thursday, 12 June 2008
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Read by:1361 different readers
 

Pawns in a struggle between gods, Talana uses her skills as a thief and guide for Lord Darrukin, the new Guardian. His sorcery is the only way to drive the evil from the Queen of Ashlon, but he must unlock his power by finding the guardian's ring before he can confront her.

Together, Talana and Darrukin discover a world of sorcery they never knew existed, and face hardship and battle. They find their own magical powers growing at every step, but will it be enough to conquer the march of evil through their homeland?

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 2 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 3 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 4 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 5 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 6 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 7 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 8 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 9 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 10 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 11 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 12 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 13 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 14 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 15 The Thief of Ashlon
Ch. 16 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter four)
Ch. 17 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter four)
Ch. 18 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter four)
Ch. 19 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter four)
Ch. 20 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter five)
Ch. 21 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter five)
Ch. 22 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter five)
Ch. 23 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter five)
Ch. 24 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter five)
Ch. 25 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter six)
Ch. 26 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter six)
Ch. 27 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter six)
Ch. 28 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter six)
Ch. 29 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter six)
Ch. 30 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter seven)
Ch. 31 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter seven)
Ch. 32 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter seven)
Ch. 33 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter seven)
Ch. 34 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter eight)
Ch. 35 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter eight)
Ch. 36 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter nine)
Ch. 37 The Thief of Ashlon (chapter nine)
Ch. 38 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 10)
Ch. 39 The Thief of Ashlon part 2 (chapter 10)
Ch. 40 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 10)
Ch. 41 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 10)
Ch. 42 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 11)
Ch. 43 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 11)
Ch. 44 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 11)
Ch. 45 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter twelve)
Ch. 46 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter twelve)
Ch. 47 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 12)
Ch. 48 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 13)
Ch. 49 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 14)
Ch. 50 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 14)
Ch. 51 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 14)
Ch. 52 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 15)
Ch. 53 The Thief of Ashlon Part 2 (chapter 15)
Ch. 54 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 16)
Ch. 55 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 16)
Ch. 56 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 17)
Ch. 57 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 17)
Ch. 58 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 18)
Ch. 59 The Thief of Ashlon - part 2 (chapter 18)
Ch. 60 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 19)
Ch. 61 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 20)
Ch. 62 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 20)
Ch. 63 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 21)
Ch. 64 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (chapter 21)
Ch. 65 The Thief of Ashlon - Part 2 (epilogue)

Comments

 
MelodiusDreamer Friday, 1 May 2015
Extraordinary composion! The way you described surroundings was so beautiful. Outstanding work! Although, some places could possibly use less description, but overall, absolutely amazing.
 
Alexander Penrose Thursday, 26 February 2015
Having read the first three chapters, I will say that your prose is quite evocative, particularly with your descriptions in the first chapter. However, your writing does bring to mind the words, "You read one you've read them all." I refer to fantasy genre novels. Your prose reminds too much of G.R.R Martin - like him, you focus a lot on the visual descriptions and hardly ever on the other senses. Also, I recommend you look through chapter 2 for a few grammatical errors. My advice is to read outside fantasy a bit. I might seems harsh, but it seems you might have a voice and I want to hear it. But all I hear is Martin's.
 
T. Nissen Tuesday, 6 May 2014
Very beautifully written! I love it! Your story is the first here that has caught my eye, and is the first on my favorites! Only into the first chapter, and I'm already intrigued!
 
David Jae Friday, 21 February 2014
Very compelling. A rich world and engaging characters. Your descriptions are a little too much in places and should leave more to the imagination. However, you use suspense, intrigue and emotion well, making us care about your characters.

I did feel that the first Chapter was too long, but a good effort.

Ganbare
 
Eva Penn Tuesday, 13 August 2013
I LOVE THIS! i really admire your writing would really appreciate it if you gave my work a read? your feedback would be so wonderful!
great job! im still reading this!

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