For You?
GenrePoetry
Age Rating:R13
Submitted:Friday, 18 September 2009
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(15 ratings)
Read by:538 different readers
 

I don't wanna make this all lovey dovey and all that crap. These are poems. Straight up. They are the things that let me vent, and let myself out. Read it, or don't. I don't care.





 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 About Love
Ch. 2 Mysteries Hide in Unknown Places
Ch. 3 Hates of the Heart
Ch. 4 A Random Act of Kindness
Ch. 5 Hold Your Tongue
Ch. 6 The Color of my Writing
Ch. 7 I Can't See him...
Ch. 8 Blood
Ch. 9 Fallen Up
Ch. 10 Anger
Ch. 11 Unanswerable Questions of No Stupidity
Ch. 12 The Thing that Doesn't Last
Ch. 13 What?
Ch. 14 Darkness
Ch. 15 Why? Do People call People Names...
Ch. 16 Writers Block
Ch. 17 I Will Defend You Against Them
Ch. 18 Something wrong with Me
Ch. 19 I'm Uncertain about the Curtain
Ch. 20 Originality, or Not. Which one?
Ch. 21 Stupid
Ch. 22 Witnessing Something Wonderful
Ch. 23 His Name
Ch. 24 Torn
Ch. 25 Abnormal
Ch. 26 When...
Ch. 27 There's more
Ch. 28 No Point
Ch. 29 sgetgse
Ch. 30 When will you find it?
Ch. 31 Keeps my Feelings at Bay
Ch. 32 Tomorrow
Ch. 33 Gaurd Down
Ch. 34 Contemplate
Ch. 35 Leave me
Ch. 36 I can't Think
Ch. 37 It's been a Long Time
Ch. 40 I don't know...
Ch. 41 Honor
Ch. 42 *blushblush**pokepoke*
Ch. 43 Naked and Bare
Ch. 44 Fire
Ch. 45 Useless
Ch. 46 one
Ch. 47 So You're that Guy
Ch. 48 You
Ch. 49 I'm you and you're me
Ch. 50 I HATE YOU
Ch. 51 Dark things
Ch. 52 Love your smile
Ch. 53 rightnow
Ch. 54 Fee Fi Fo Fum
Ch. 55 Don't Deserve
Ch. 56 nothing at all
Ch. 57 Slowly
Ch. 58 Meant to be

Comments

Bartimeaus Thursday, 3 July 2014
Really enjoyed reading these poems. Can't believe I went through 58 of em. Don't usually read poems you see. Particularly loved 'something wrong with me'. It was humorous yet dark in a shallow sense. Makes you dread the things you think. Anyways you should put a description of yourself. I do care, well I care to know the person whose poems i'm reading...So...
 
Lexx__ Tuesday, 4 February 2014
love it. can connect
 
Jordan Yates Tuesday, 13 September 2011
First off, sounds like you can't take honest criticism. Second, no matter if it's your first poem or no, it's far from original. You copied too many songs for it to be any good. I agree with everyone else, you need to work on writing figuratively (I've read some of your other work, so I think this goes for everything you write). I'm not saying all this to make you mad or just to be spiteful, but simply because I hope it helps you become a better writer... And I know that I like being told what I do wrong so I can be a stronger writer. Keep writing! :)
 
Jordan Yates Tuesday, 13 September 2011
First off, sounds like you can't take honest criticism. Second, no matter if it's your first poem or no, it's far from original. You copied too many songs for it to be any good. I agree with everyone else, you need to work on writing figuratively (I've read some of your other work, so I think this goes for everything you write). I'm not saying all this to make you mad or just to be spiteful, but simply because I hope it helps you become a better writer... And I know that I like being told what I do wrong so I can be a stronger writer. Keep writing! :)
 
Jordan Yates Tuesday, 13 September 2011
First off, sounds like you can't take honest criticism. Second, no matter if it's your first poem or no, it's far from original. You copied too many songs for it to be any good. I agree with everyone else, you need to work on writing figuratively (I've read some of your other work, so I think this goes for everything you write). I'm not saying all this to make you mad or just to be spiteful, but simply because I hope it helps you become a better writer... And I know that I like being told what I do wrong so I can be a stronger writer. Keep writing! :)

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