What Was and Could Have Been
GenreAdventure / Fiction
Age Rating:PG
Submitted:Monday, 31 August 2009
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Read by:166 different readers
 

Shadow's life is twisted and cruel, a trail stained with blood. She grows from a nice, sweet, curious pup to a cruel, lying, back-stabbing ... oh you'll find out. Join her on her journey.

All the while, Luka's life is confusing but warm, a path of stars. She, unlike Shadow, grows amongst loved ones and pure hearts. She becomes a wise, clever and always-curious warrior.

Watch as these two battle and grow and in the end, meet.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 0 Author's Note
Ch. 1 Two Pups
Ch. 2 The Gathering at Starlight Mountain
Ch. 3 Authors Note 2
Ch. 4 Lost!

Comments

Specklez Tuesday, 1 September 2009
Oh, and also, may I ask what is confusing? Just want to know if it is something that will be resolved as time goes on or is it something with my writing style. ;)
Specklez Tuesday, 1 September 2009
Thank you, Margaret! I'm already working on the second chapter. And yes, it will get much clearer as time goes on. Sure, I'll take a look. :)
 
adfkjhjklfds Tuesday, 1 September 2009
This is really good! It's a little bit confusing, but that's probably just because it's the beginning. I like it. Please post more soon!
~Mag

PS. could you read (and rate) my story, Trial and Trust? Thanks!

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