The Unthinkable Has Occurred
GenreYoung Adult / Romance
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Monday, 24 August 2009
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(57 ratings)
Read by:22155 different readers
 

Cara Belowski and Riley Freegan are from two different high school cliques. But one day, something terrible changes both them and the whole town, bringing Riley and Cara closer than they ever dreamed would happen...

 

List of chapters

Ch. -1 Pictures of Characters...
Ch. 0 Prologue
Ch. 1 Why The Hell Am I Up This Early?
Ch. 2 My Wonderful Plan...Hey At Least It Worked!
Ch. 3 Getting Lost With The Most Annoying People Ever...JOY
Ch. 4 Why Do I Bother With Him?
Ch. 5 Unfortunate Meeting In Town With The Slut
Ch. 6 School Again...And The Worst Spanish Class Ever
Ch. 7 Leave Me Alone Already!
Ch. 8 The Beginning of The Worst Day of My Life
Ch. 9 Why Her, Of All People?
Ch. 10 No NO!
Ch. 11 Blackness...That Can't Be Good
Ch. 12 Well Thanks For Leaving Me After Dropping That Bomb
Ch. 13 Should I Tell Them...Or Should I Not?

Comments

 
Stephanie Ames Sunday, 14 June 2015
I like it so far, does need some grammer work, even some more describing or details. if you like fantasy I have a book up as well. " Cursed Element."
 
Alexander Penrose Saturday, 7 March 2015
As I guy, I know this was not written with me in mind, but I'm open to trying books on this site I usually don't go near - so I came to this book to see what the fuss was all about.

It screams chick-flick, no doubt about it, the prose could do with some tidying up, but at least this is not pretentious. No one clicks on this book expecting to be amazed by beautiful writing. You do what you say on the tin and, judging by the reception I glimpsed below, you seem to have done fine. This is not my scene, I could tell from the start to the end of chapter 4, but good job.

Also, could you read and comment on my novel Devil's Masquerade? Many thanks!
 
katied820 Tuesday, 24 February 2015
Who plays William?? He is so hot!!! Please let me know who the actor/model is! Thanks!
 
Danie Sunday, 14 September 2014
Hi!! How did you get the pictures onto the page? I can't copy pictures into Worthy of Publishing.
 
warmsummers Thursday, 29 May 2014
If allergic to criticism, stop reading and live in blissful ignorance. Can't say I didn't warn you then.

There are so many things wrong with this grammatically that I CAN'T even bring myself to read on to chapter 3, I assume? One of the many, MANY mistakes including grammar, the plotline and the character of Cara already that it's making me regret joining this site in the first place. I like reading works that have some originality and is worth the time I take to read it. This is not.

One mistake to point out, when it is being yelled "MOM!" YOU DO NOT NEED the capitals as well as the exclamation mark, both in one sentence is ridiculous. Use just the exclamation, nothing else. There were so many grammar issues I could ramble on about and I'm guessing they're not typos because I can tell they're not. I am astonished as to how this ended up in the "Most Read" of this week. Worthy of Publishing clearly need to up their standards for writing.

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