Dear Sherry
GenreYoung Adult / Adult
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Thursday, 13 August 2009
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(27 ratings)
Read by:1781 different readers
 

I stepped out of the shower; right foot, then left, wrapped myself in a towel and wiped the mirror clear of fog. While checking my reflection, in the smudged mirror, an unclear figure crept behind me and passed through the door. Puddles of water formed under my feet as I followed the figure through the open doorframe.

"Who's there?" I received no answer.

Thump thump, thump thump.

My heart raced. I peeked around the wall that separated the bathroom from the living room, and held my breath. The floor creaked under my feet as I approached the dark figure that stood before me. My hand shook as I reached for the overcoat that covered a body with a manís silhouette. One, two, three. Swoosh, the overcoat fell to the ground.

Beep, beep, beep. "Good morning New York City , youíre listening to W.T.B.A and it's 7:00 AM. It's starting to feel a lot like winter with a temperature of 34į F, time to take those winter jackets out of the clos-"

The alarm clock fell to the floor, as I slapped my hand on the off button. My body jerked up and I clasped my neck gasping for air.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 The Dream
Ch. 2 How It All Began
Ch. 3 The Reflection in The Mirror

Comments

 
BlackVeiledBrideofJinxx Friday, 24 September 2010
Really good. If you're going to write flashbacks, use italics so we won't get confused. Just a tip.
 
sweetpea Sunday, 1 August 2010
I love the note, its weird in a way.

keep up the good work.
read/rate my book? It would mean teh world to me!
 
Gillian Annie Monday, 24 May 2010
Its good and scary at the same time. wonderful :)
 
katiealyssa. Thursday, 13 May 2010
this is really good and interesting! (:
 
Heather M. Monday, 19 April 2010
It's called darkness

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