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by A. R. Stone
When home for winter vacation strange things begin. Knowing, and yet not knowing what happens next is no help for Jamie. List of chapters
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the new chapter is really good. maybe you could add some more details before she goes to school. the chapter went by too quickly for me
Hey its really great. If you update soon than so will i. Promise.
Jamie is a great person and i LOVE her.
Some very good writing here. Maybe a little overuse of the word 'she' to open sentences, but the flow was still great, and the writing believable and gripping. Nice work :)
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This is great, I really love the adjectives you use to describe the beach near the beginning. Well done.
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