AVIA
GenreFiction / Fantasy
Age Rating:R15
Submitted:Friday, 10 May 2019
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(2 ratings)
Read by:20 different readers
 

I didn't expect to see what I did.
Breathing deeply but quietly, she seemed to be almost hyperventilating as she removed her long coat and ripped the long gloves off of her arms. Little spikes along the outside of her forearms began growing and turning into feathers as she climbed off of her bed to sit on the floor. The feathers above her mask spread backward, turning into a hair of feathers. Just what is she doing? I could only see her head and feet as I watched as her feet turned black and her nails turned into talons that sunk into the floor and held tight as she squirmed on the other side of the bed.


Warning: this is gonna be a strange tale. I've based it off of a nightmare I had.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Eerie Visitor
Ch. 2 The First Patient
Ch. 3 Coincidences
Ch. 4 Pleasant
Ch. 5 Sale
Ch. 6 Witness
Ch. 7 Deals, Feathers, and Help
Ch. 8 Spotted
Ch. 9 Second Witness
Ch. 10 Shattered
Ch. 11 Life

Comments

 
Taboo Tales Sunday, 9 June 2019
Yes! a brilliant ending to this work of art. I love it. great job .
 
Taboo Tales Wednesday, 29 May 2019
ooo. Thats so intresting to read! very good character.
 
Taboo Tales Friday, 17 May 2019
wow.. strange! interesting! love love
 
J.D. Brown, Hexagames CEO Tuesday, 14 May 2019
I strongly encourage you to keep this story going! You have an interesting beginning (even though I don't know what MC & CB is) and a good delivery. A solid conclusion is definitely needed.
 
Taboo Tales Saturday, 11 May 2019
oooh creepy. I like the vibes! how does so much talent come out of one person :0?

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