Pixieland, The Magicals
GenreFantasy / Adventure
Age Rating:G
Submitted:Friday, 19 May 2017
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Read by:115 different readers
 

Newton and Buddy are a most unusual pair, but in their world they fit right in.
Welcome to Pixieland, a place of magic and imagination, a world where an elf and a crow can be best friends.
Find out what happens when an old junk shop yields a mysterious book. Follow this road of discovery as the stage is set for an exciting adventure.

 

List of chapters

Ch. 1 Newton's Good Idea

Comments

Axegirl Saturday, 28 October 2017
Hey, I just wanted to leave a quick comment that I after completely with N. Renes comment. To add something of my own, I think you may want to consider changing the name pixieland. Its very generic and not unique. It doesn't make me want to read the book very much just because it sounds so generic. Same ending as Rene, great read!
 
N. Renč Thursday, 1 June 2017
I'm partial to good fantasy novels, and I quite like your style. I can see what you've written, imagining it rather than just reading it, which is the mark of a great author. However, I do feel that due to your heavy handedness with description, the flow of the story is somewhat stunted. I also find the over-use of their names distracting. That may simply be a personal preference, however. Over all, brilliant read!

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